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Posted: 13 years ago
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Well when Im Sad (with no Gohem or sad Gohem)or happy (after Y'days episode) my heart flutters & then an OS comes up 😉
Hope all of you enjoy it as much as I enjoyed writing it 😊
Ahem walks into the house to be welcomed in by his wife...his love & life. As he enters he sees her putting her pallu on her head. He looks at her & admires her as he moves towards the sofa. He just shakes his head & smiles to himself that his wife really follows whatever she says, not once has she taken her pallu off in front of him after that day !!!
During dinner after everybody was seated she started serving everyone, these days whenever she around him she looks at him with such a plesant feeling that it makes his heart flutter. Even now when she is serving him, she glances at him sideways...these days he is so scared of himself that he will loose himself in her eyes as much as he glances at her. To ensure he remains insane he just avoids looking at her when people are around him. Kaka interupts his thoughts saying that for this year's builder's conference in Delhi he will not be able to go & wanted Ahem to go. Ahem agreed & said he will discuss the details after dinner.
Kaka gave him all the details & mentioned it was for 3 days & he should be leaving tomm night to ensure he has good rest before the conference. As he enters his room, he sees Gopi setting up her bed, he looks at her & thinks to himself how do I live without seeing Gopi for 3 days. As he settles on his sofa bed, he is wondering I have earlier also been to many confernces but never did I have this feeling of restlessness from the time Kaka had mentioned that the conference was for 3 days. He turns around & sees Gopi asleep, he looks at her & admires her beauty & simplicity. She was without make-up & was sleeping like a baby. Then suddenly he remembers his switzerland trip & how he had humiliated her by not wanting to take her. He gets up & remembers those days when he said only his mom will go with him. Even then she smiled & went along doing her work. If he had booked another ticket & taken both the women in his life, he would have kept both of them happy. Atleast his mom made a decision to bring Gopi & because of her he had won the contract. But even after that, what did he do? Forget about thanking her, he did not even treat her well. All of a sudden he had a wonderful thought about why not take Gopi along with him to Delhi. He can take her out & spend time with her after his conference. He is all excited this way he has Gopi with him & then he can make up for the switzerland trip. He smiles to himself & goes to sleep.
In the morning he gets up with a renewed energy to put his plan into action. He has to be careful so as to he does not giveout himself in front of others. He knows how people will trouble & make fun of him😛. At the breakfast table, after everybody is served he starts the discussion with his Kaka. He asks him what time will the conference meetings will be held & when will they get over in the evening. Kaka tell him that by evening 6 PM the meetings should be done. He then turns around to Jigar & sees he is occupied these days with Rashi's truth. He then sees Kinjle & he gets very irritated & then he sees his dad & then he decides he will get his dad to support him on this plan without his knowledge. He asks Dad do you remember the Delhi trip we all went as a family . His dad says yeah with 3 naughty children we had a tough time controlling you guys at all the historical places. In Jantar mantar, we had to literally search for you all. All the adults have a smile on their face. Hetal turns around & says Jigar did not want to come out of that place at all. Ahem then thinks so let me get the next question, he then says loudly mayb I should visit all of these places again after my meetings everyday. Then he says what fun is it that I go along, he turns to Jigar & says do you want to come along. Jigar says he needs to be here for a meeting with Shaw clients. Ahem then says oh...& everybody has already been to Delhi so none of you will come with me. He then very slowly turns around & says Gopi at the same his mother spoke saying Gopi Vahu & she went towards her mother. He was disappointed as now his plan looks like a failure. Then he heard his mother asking Gopi if she has ever been to Delhi. He saw Gopi shaking her head negative. He was suprised when his mom asked Gopi if she wanted to go to Delhi with Ahem. He looked at his mom & Gopi & was waiting for her answer.
Gopi looked at Ahem with a mixed feeling one with expectation & one with fear of how he would react is she says she wants to go with him. Before she could answer she heard Ahem telling everyone that since Gopi has not seen Delhi, he will take her along so that she can see the new place. In the mean time Kinjle says bhai what will Bhabhi do when you are in the conference, she will get bored. I think you should not take her. He was about to shout at Kinjle when he his mom spoke to Kinjle saying that during the conference time Gopi will be in the room & in the evening Ahem will show her around. Kokilla then spoke to Mota Bhai saying hope it is ok with you. Chirag them said ye tho behtar hai. This way Gopi will be able to see Delhi. Ahem was very happy that his plan has been successful with some help from him mom. He wished everyone & left for office. He turned around to Gopi & said please be ready by 6 PM we need to leave on time to catch the flight. Get some warm clothes as Delhi will be cold now.
He saw Gopi was very happy & this gave him a sweet feeling.
Kokilla saw both her son & dil are happy & smiled to herself. From the time Ahem had come for breakfast he has been acting differently talking only about Delhi. Intially she did not understand why was Ahem has been talking in circle & about visiting places in Delhi. Ahem had been to Delhi multiple times & so what was new about this trip. Then when she saw that her son kept glancing slyly on her Gopi Vahu she understood that he wanted to take Gopi with him. She wanted to make it easy for him & wanted to take it in her hands. She was plesantly suprised that even Ahem made an effort & called Gopi at the sametime when she called GopiVahu. But since she had taken it into her hands, she left the decision with Gopi & was shocked when Ahem made the decision. She almost wanted to laugh at the breakfast table as how her son was behaving offlate. She knows it is a matter of time that both her Son & DIL are happy in life 😊 starting today when they will be together !!!!

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munnihyderabad thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow navya what a nice and sweet OS,,,,... love this Ahemji... bahaana chahiye biwi ko lejane kay liye👏😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Amazing loved it very nice os😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wonderful os navya...loved how koki understands her son...
and loved how ahem was making excuses to take gopi with him...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Fab os , enjoyed it very much .loved how ahem took it upon himself to manipulate the situation so that he can get wot he wants without anybody knowing his feelins.thanks navyab
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice ... we would to read your os of their delhi trip 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Great Take, Navya !!

Keep up the good work...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow great OS Navya. Ahem doesn't want to admit his new feelings in front of the family. But Kokila being prudent, makes it easy for him. Well done, Now you have to continue. please.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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So now Ahem Modi wants to spend alone time with his wife.This definitely is 8th wonder!!!Loved ur oneshot.Actually, why don't u turn it into SS,so that we can have some sweet GoHem moments in Delhi😉?Wating for Delhi trip.

Love,
Swetha

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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow, nice oneshot. why doesnt the real one behave like that?

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