Kinjal's plan backfires OS completed

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Aham was sure that he left his watch on the table. When it was time to wear it he could not wear it. He was really upset. He took great care of his thing and did not like it if someone uses it. He went in search of gopi, only to be confronted by his mother: aham why are you so tense? What happened?

These days aham felt irritated towards his mother. Yes he loved her unconditionally; still, she always stood between him and gopi. When he wanted to talk to her, his mom is present making him uncomfortable, like what she is doing now: woh mom, I can't find my watch, I thought that I will ask gopi.

Koki: gopi vahu, come here

But it was dhawal who answered her: sasuma, what happened? Why are you so tense?

Gopi followed him with questioning eyes.

Koki: nothing, dhawalji, aham cant find his watch, so I called gopi vahu.

Gopi: I did not see it maaji

Dhawal: sasuma, it was there when I came to aham bhai's room to place the ironed dresses.

At that moment kinjal ran down shouting: dhawalji, you have left your watch.

Dhawal was confused and replied: I have my watch with me.

Kinjal: then what is this doing between ironed clothes

She brought out aham's watch in front of everyone. By this time the whole family has gathered and were shocked. Dhawal was shocked too. All he could reply was: this is aham bhai's watch, what is it doing with my dress.

Before anyone could react, kinjal started her drama: what! This is aham bhai's watch. dhawalji, how can you do this. How can you steal my bhai's watch. after all my family has done to you, you show you cheap nature. See maa, this is the kind of man you have choose for me. What will happen to my future. How can I live with him?

Dhawal was shocked. Gopi was watching this intendly, she realized the problem her bhai was about to face. Being the sacrificial kind, she immediately said: kinjal ben, I think it is my fault, when I brought the ironed dresses, I would have mixed it. Dhawal bhai will not do like that.

Dhawal: gopi why do you take the blame, it was me, who took the ironed shirts to your room.

Kinjal: bhabhi, please don't interfere in this. Don't try to protect a theif. Dhawalji I m ashamed of you.

Aham was fuming with anger. It was kokila who stopped the show: bhus kinjal, ek thum chup. If you speak another word, I will not see that you are my daughter.

She turned towards dhawal and said: dhawalji I know you are innocent. There has been confusion. Please, I request you to let me handle this. I also want you to proceed to look for an house now itself. Can you do this favour for me?

Dhawal was shocked and embrassed by kinjal's accusation. Still he was happy that kokila has believed him, so he heaved a sigh and left Modi Bhavan.

Kokila turned towards aham : aham dikra, I know that you are late for your meeting, still can you give your mother 20 mintues, to clear all the problems and bring out the culprit. Aham nodded his head yes.

Finally kokila turned towards kinjal who was fuming that all her drama was wasted, now what she has to plan next.

Kokila: kinjal. Chee. Today I regret giving birth to you. I kokila modi has always felt proud that I had given the best sanskar to my children. But today you have proved me wrong. To this day I have been watching you. I had reprimanded you to change you ways. I thought of giving you the time needed. Still you did not listen to my words. Today I will bring out all your faults in front of the family.

She turned towards gopi and said: gopi vahu go to my room and bring that red colored jewel box.

Kinjal, there is no difference between you and rashi. If rashi wanted money and comfortable life, you did the same. This is the life you choose, so you have to suffer for your mistakes

Kinjal: but maa, It was you who forced me to marry this man. Do you remember, how I begged you not to send me to hell, you did not listen to me. Now how do you expect me live with him? My life is miserable. I don't have any comfort.

Kokila: I think kinjal you have forgotten, that we arranged your marriage with a family which had equal status with us. But it was you who spoiled it. It was you who forgot that you family is important. All you thought of was your happiness and did many things to destroy our reputation. What you sow that you reap.

By this time gopi had come back with that box need by kokila.

Kinjal, now you fate will be decided, not only by me but also by the family. As your mother, I did my best to correct you. To show you the right path, but now it is time to reveal who you are.

(i know this is not much. just give me an hour or two. i will update the whole part. this is my take on today's episode.)

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-Yuks- thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Its lovely so far. Will wait for the rest...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Great going. Can't wait for you to update it!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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very nice...
waiting for the next update
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Well written can't wait for the next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
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can't wait for the next part
so excited 😃
Hopefully Kinjal will be exposed infront of the whole family

Great writting thanks for sharing😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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great os.loved it .plz do continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Love it Shruti. Will wait for rest of it.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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love the "chee" infact loved everything about the OS
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it so beautiful that I though iwas reading an update from the show itself.

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