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Posted: 14 years ago
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DILBAR MAYRE
new story of Gopi and Ahem
Gopi was sitting outside very sad and worried whats going on .. in her life suddenly she weeps and remember her own mom dad and sobbing ,suddenly manni see gopi and run towards her and say ,gopi bhabi why r you weeping gopi cant listen her and she was totaly lost in her thoughts mani shouts gopi bhabi ... and gopi come sense and cries and sobbing she take her into the room and call kokila ji ...kaki come soon..kokila says its manni what happen manni...mani told everything about gopiwhich she saw...
kokila ji worried about gopi and thinking what happen to my bahu she is very much worried about gopi,s sickness bell rings mani open the door and ahem ask mani what happen kokila see the ahem
standing near the door kokila tells everthing to ahem about gopi that gopi is really sick ahem i dont know what happen to my bahu and she cries ahem see his moms face and worried about gopi and go to the room gopi lying in the bed suddenly she scared and ask there is something on the floor
ahem see there but there is nothing and then ahem see gopi,s face gopi is sacared ahem hold her and say its nothing and asked her to lying on the bed and ahem go downstairs and sit on the sofa..mani give him a black tea and snacks but ahem very much worried
rashi see all this and smiling and happy..
gopi comes downstairs and see that her mum is worried
jigar also worried about her bhabi and thinking whats going on and rashi feel happy from inside
ahem worried about gopi and call his buisness client and postpone all the meetings and go home very early and happy to see the gopi
gopi was in the kitchen and kokila ji helping her
this thing see that her mum and gopi in the kitchen feel happy and thing that gopi is allright now ahem enjoy that day very happily and at night ask gopi to sleep on the bed with him and gopi sleep with ahem and that night she is not scared next morning they do puja and eat breakfast and ahem ask gopi and his mum to get ready in the evening for the party gopi weared very heavy saree and kokila ji and gopi and ahem go somewhere
kokila ji happy to see her bahu that she is happy and enjoying ahem now always with gopi
they dance together eat food and get snap with his mom and gopi
and late night come home and that night ahem see gopi and take off her saree and kiss her and hold her in the arms and say gopi i love you icant live without you i always with you if somebody harm you i will kill them.then lights off...but gopi not sleep and she goes out and sing the song dlibar dilbar... http://youtu.be/AE5DaM1lP4w
i hope that you like the story and enjoy weekend...post by...simibrar..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Great Simi! The pictures combined with words gave out a wonderful impact on the story line.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: avivakirk

Great Simi! The pictures combined with words gave out a wonderful impact on the story line.

Thanks dear ...😃.will you like the song dilbar dlbar related with story...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanks very much..Rana ji 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wonderful Simi, great story, very well thought out.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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simi u r good story writer u should write more stories
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thats superb creativity Simi...u are a fab screenplay writer...
keep it up
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nafisa_blossoms

Wonderful Simi, great story, very well thought out.

Thanks dear...😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: shobi12500

simi u r good story writer u should write more stories

Thanks dear...😃 i try my best... and further write more for my friends..😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: -tellyaddict-

thats superb creativity Simi...u are a fab screenplay writer...
keep it up

Thanks dear your sweet comments always boost me to write more thanks...😃

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