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Posted: 14 years ago
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⭐️hey guys just wanted to no ur opinion bout this... and a game for all wonderful writers...
gopi and jigar
jigar is sweet and wants his wife's attention and gopi wants a husband's attention si they could go together...maybe
rashi really doesnt care n ahem doesnt bother so they deserve each other
dont get me rong gohem and raji fans ...but mybe in an alternate universe they could be.
The Game
To all brilliant writers out there and trust me there is a lot here :) pls can you make a scene about jealous ahem seeing gopi and jigar or sumthin similar and i will lyk best one :D
I will try but am not a good writer :/
Ok anyways so gopi was arranging the clothes silently while aham was working (as usual) she suddenly dropped ahem's shirt on the floor and ahem angrily started shouting at her and threw her out of the room.
Meanwhile rashi was teasing jigar again for being less powerful than his brother 'u dont hav enough money to but me a 3* lunch! rashi try to understand mein kaam meh bauhaut bisy reheta hoon,...mujhe kuch nach samajte...chale jaaye mere kamre se..pls jayye...im getiing a headache..and jigar was thrown out of the room.he had a sad look on his face
he saw gopi and quicly got the sad face off...wo rashi...gopi was crying... gopi bhabhi kya hua...kuch nahi wo ahemji...jigar led her to the kitchen for sum paani
bhabhi wo rashi mujhe kabhi nahi samajte. wo sochta hai ki mein ise pyar nahi karta hoon ...aur mujhe lagta hai wo mujse pyar khabhi nahi karoge... gopi told him not to think like that
anyways lets talk about ahem 'kya hua bhabhi...wo ahemji bhi mujse khabhi nahi pyar karoge mein usee layak nahi hoon aur nahi bansakti coz he hates the fact that I am illiterate and ek gavar hoon
aap ise mach sochiye...dekye main aapse help kar sakta hoon .ahem bhaiya ko realise karna ki aap sahi larki iske liye aur app use bahaut pyar kar sakti
and rashi has to realise this too
gopi and jigar think about how they can do this... Maji tlls me to dress up and decorate the room fro ahemji but he hates me even more for it ...thinkthinkthink ⭐️idea!
bhabhi hum use jealous feel karne hoga...i mean we shuld make them feel jealous and realise our absence when we are not here in their dils.. 😃
how willl we do this?😲
jigar says hum ek larka aur larki doonlehi chaye jiske hum bauhaut attention pay kroge and they will fell jealous 😆
but we dont no anyone devarji thinkthinkthink ⭐️
um to pir why dont we help each other?
nahi nahi hum ye nahi kar sakte app meri devar hun aur ye awkward fell karogr plz no
bhabhi this is de only way to make them realise and c us...
theek hai
to pir for ahem and rashi
gopi said yes for ahem and rashi
and they shaked hands on a mission together to find their other hearts ahem and rashi
will update another in 10 mins :)
Next bit ... gopi went to cook as usual with rashi..the husbands came home n they were serving out dinner
gopi took a plate for aham and placed it infront of him...she took a spoon to give him some dahl when he raises his hand and says I can take it myself
jigar feeling sorry for ahem said...bhabhi kya app muje dahl serve sakti hoon plz..gopi looked at him weirdly ans said ok yh she can...she went to him and served him dahl ahem just looked at them for a second and started eating.
rashi shouted for gopi in the kitchen gopi made for the kitchen and she started cutting the veg.she was thinking of ahemji and suddenly she cut herself she gave a smaal sriek.she just put it under water n brought the naan to the table...
jigar noticed her wound bhabhi khoon berahi hai...kuch nai wo mujhe lagaye choti chot hai...yh but ek chot to hai...chaliye mein medecine lagta hoon.aaye...nahi wo bauhaut chota haii..bhabhi nahi chaliye...he took het to the kitchen and looked for de medecine box.
ahem was getting a rumble in his stomach perhaps he was full...wo ma jai shi krishna i am going to sleep...ok jai shi krishna...b4 going he took a peek in the kitchen...and he say jigar putting cream on gopi's finger and blowing it gently...he felt a little weird but went to his room anyway
jigar told bhabhi...did u c ahem felt weird seeing us together...dekye tomorow morning you will do the aarti with ahem...but he does not like it...app wo ki jiye aur dekti hoon ki wo will do aartu with you har suba... theek hai..jai shi krishan jigarji..jai shi krishna bhabhi.
will update again soon :) tell me if u like it
Part 3
Gopi wokw up early as usual to avois ahem seeing her as she knew he didnt lyk it...so she made preparations for the pooja and prepared the whole nashta n chai like a good bahu.koki was impressed and told her to do arti today...ahem was running late as usual and ran downstairs to do aarti...just then gopi put her hand next to his he turned to her with an evil look on his face...she slowly let go and went to the bk next to jigar
ahem did aarti all alone wen he finished he looked for his mother to tell him who to give it next to...gopi de diye dikra...theek hai mom ...he handed it to gopi
jigar says gopi bhabi u wanted sum1 do to the aarti with you...gopi looks to ahem and ahem looks away..theek hai ajj mein arti apke saat karunga..and he stepped up to hold the arti along with gopi
rashi jat looked at both of them and could not care less...ahem looked a both of them ...they started to do aarti together...ahem was just staring at both of them...when the aarti finished koki asked gopi to put tikka on every1.
gopi went to ahem wen jigar stopped her and said wo gopi bhabhi mein ek important khamm jaari hoon kya app mujhe tikka lagaya hoon pls first today...gopi said yes quietly and put the tikka on jigar every1 looked at them sweetly...jigarji ek minute...gopi went to the kitchen...wo schub khaam ka schub shuruvat and fed him mitaai...ahem looked at both of them together and told jigar firmly ...jigar ban karo yeh sab n go hum bauhat dehr hojayenge..jigar followed ahem...he looked back n winked at gopi...this was their first sucess they needed many more sucesses b4 they accomplish this almost impossible mission 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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why don't u give it a try rather than depending it all on the ff writers writing the ff such as mridhu, me, yuks, shilpa,.

as u know it a hassle then keeping up with things
u know what i mean yea

well certainly i don't mind but its a hassle getting in touch with 2 ffs at a time as i experienced it myself

well i give it a try whenever am free though

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