Short Oneshot - small romance of gohem

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Aehem comes in and sees her waiting for him. She sees him standing at the door, sttod up quickly and went up to him and held his laptop. She put it down, and he comes and hugs her from the back and speak: what happened your now waiting for me, since when, I know u love me, Gopi looked at him in a shocked look and turned red and tried to move, she managed to push him back and run to the washroom and shut the door. She started to get shy as he was getting pure romantic, as he never casually does it. He turns around smiling and was feeling better than before. He wanted her to come out but she was talking loads of time, he thought: womens these days, always decking up trying to please us guys but her why is she so simple and mature. She comes out wearing her night sari, and sees him waiting. He takes his waist coat off, shuts the door tightly and put the lock on, picks her up, put her in bed and switches the light off
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Posted: 14 years ago
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huh gopi typing on laptop, undressing Aham.........got to be a dream, not Gopi from Saathiya. you had me laughing though.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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lol it was a dream i had just a hour back
i was day dreaming
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Posted: 14 years ago
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day dreaming isn't it. well hats of to your ideas. keep it up
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: ayesha_78

lol it was a dream i had just a hour back
i was day dreaming


it wasnt a dream..u just rewrote wat sbp1971 wrote in her fic!!!
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Tina just read shilpa chapter right now, just realized I had skipped this chappter and read the chapter after it, I can't copy the same thing, I was still continuing on, this short ff and u just said I copyed it that hurt me, when I never eread that ch so how can I copy. Anyway I had to change it now I have changed it
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thr's no chapter aftr it..!!
nd if its so y u edited it??
kehte haina "chor ki daadi mai tinka "
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Meaning anyway forget all this, this oneshot closed. Am already going to stop writing ffs
I didn't know shilpa had this scene, it just came in my mind just an hour back. When I read the ff of shilpas then I edited it coz I personally dnt like the same scene which someone else has
Have u heard, if u take a piece of scene and take it to a different path and end it it different means its not someone else piece of work it turns out to be yours, and I had to change it because I know shilpa will be hurt, but it not my fault I never read the chapter properly as I been so busy.
I edited it coz I when I checked it out from shilpa ff I was shocked, this came in my head just a few hours back and put it in as a os and will put more into it, later on, but I felt bad that shilpa might feel I stole it but am not that kind of girl so I changed it.
I bet u must have told her already
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Posted: 14 years ago
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excuses...how can u hav d same dream..we r not kids here...!!

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