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All fanfics and oneshots which i have been written with my own knowledge - this is solely my work and no one can recreate or copy my work without permission

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Koki had taken Rashi responsibility from now on, just as baa and her mother wanted. Gopi was washing the blankets and Rashi was watering the plants. Meanwhile they were doing that Koki comes and stops Gopi from doing it and tells her, ; From now on, you will do the work what Hetal tells you to do not me, go to Mota Bhabhi and leave the work here.

Gopi goes to the kitchen and starts to help hetal. Rashi stops doing the work she was doing, and koki tells her " from now on, you will do all the work I will tell you, not your mother in law '" " Go and wash the blankets" am standing here watching you.

Rashi gets scared and things: this kaagri won't leave me at all, now what difficulties has she started to make me do , oh lord help me"

Rashi starts to wash the blankets and stops mid way through. Koki sees her and starts to taunt her. She finally finishes 3 bedroom blankets and couldn't put it on the rope so Koki helped her while she was taunting at the same time.

After she had finished all the blankets from the house, Koki takes her to her room an

d tells her: sort my wardrobe out and iron all the clothes, not one single one should be burnt, do not touch the top shelf, the jeweleries.

Aehem comes inside and sees everything scattered around and sirks at her, doing the work. He speaks: mom, jewelery.


Koki gives him all the jewellery and he takes them and puts them in the safe in the study room and locks the door. Aehem goes to the kitchen and sees Gopi. He gathers the courage and coughs.

Gopi looks up and says: do you need anything ?

Aehem : can you give me milk.

Gopi who had made milk for Chirag but instead gave it to him and he leaves. Mani gives another milk and gopi takes it to Chirag, who was in his room. She knocks the door and gives it to him and leaves.

She goes to the room and sees he was standing in front of the mirror, locks the door and goes to change in her other sari. She comes out and started to do her bedding on the floor and takes her jewelery off and puts it in the cupboard.

She then lies down and goes t sleep. Aehem from behind is observing her, had a peaceful smile on his face and he himself instead of doing his work and leave the light on, goes to sleep. Gopi notices him not doing his work and completely ignores him. All she was thinking was, to leave the house after nani goes, no matter what how much Aehem ji has changed. He has started to respect me but the hope and trust I had before it was all gone. He has to gain the trust now.


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Posted: 14 years ago
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A different direction!! I like it Ayesha😊
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new ff. thanks for it. please continue.
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Nice start, please continue soon
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Wonderful start! Focused Gopi...! Please continue soon!!!

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A very different FF. I like this Gopi.
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Early in the morning, Rashi wakes up and quickly has a shower. She changes her clothes and comes downstairs and gets the milk. She takes it to the kitchen and puts sit beside the cooker. While leaving that she cleans the temple and decorates it. The temple was ready. She thought: now I have to change myself, I have to adjust myself, be like gopi, and don't annoy kakiji and listen to her, from now on she won't talk to her mother regarding to the issues in the house.


On the other hand, everyone is at the temple and wondering who had done all this while Rashi is in the kitchen making breakfast for everyone. She told Mani: handle this stuff, let me go to the temple otherwise kaki ji will not spare me.


Gopi stands beside Hetal and says: Who had done all the cleaning and the decorations. Everything seems to be ready, even in the kitchen.


Koki and Hetal looks surprised and was shocked and Rashi from behind speaks up: I did all this. I woke up really early and made all the arrangements.


Koki had a smile on her face and sees that she is improving.

Rashi: shall I start the pooja, come Gopi.

They start the pooja and starts to sing. After a while everyone had the chance to do the aarti. Furthermore it was time for Aehem to do it. Aehem came and stood there. Nani speaks up: gopi vau go

They do the pooja and gopi starts to feel sick and she wasn't well as she was having nausea since last night.


They all go to the dining table and sits down. Rashi and Gopi serves everyone. They all eat. Koki: aarre vah rashi, khana to acha hai.


After the mens leave for office, rashi and gopi cleans the house and suddenly Gopi collapses. Rashi who was at the terrace checking the cloths suddenly goes downstairs and calls the Doctor. Meanwhile, they did not disturb the men at office.


Gopi was lying down in the room. The doctor comes and sees her. She does her check up.


The doctor stands up and says : go and call everyone.

Mani goes and call everyone and they arrive. She again speaks: don't worry she is a little weak, but...

Koki: but kya dr?

Doctor: you have to take care of her, don't make her do any work, make sure she completely have bed rest, she is pregnant, you becoming a dadi

Koki is shocked as how can she be pregnant, Aehem has never touched her once since marriage. Inside her she was happy, after a long time a baby is coming to this house.

The doctor goes, Rashi and everyone was happy except Koki. Rashi hugs gopi and says: congrats, Aehem jiju will be happy.

Gopi:i don't think so, since marriage he has not touched me once, I wonder how did I get pregnant. But you know I have to leave, I can't stand one minute here now, I have took back all the vows. Until Nani is here, I will stay then will leave.

Gopi then thinks: this kid is Aehem ji, I will take care of it, no matter what but I have to leave somehow, I have to.

Aehem comes home and notices everyone, chirag, parag, jigar etc were waiting for him. Jigar comes and hugs him.

Baa: come here

Aehem: ji baa

Baa: your a father now, Gopi is pregnant of your child.

Aehem face was worth watching. He turns towards Koki and speaks: How can she be pregnant of my child, when I have never touched that gavar once in my lifetime. What is this, all know this except nani that I can't stand her then what is this? What kind of tamasha is this?

Nani who was shocked to see this side of Aehem and asks: what is he talking about. Why is he like this koki? Tell me ?


will nani find out the truth? will rashi know her true side? Will she be able to stop gopi or anyone in the house? What will happen? read on to find out .........

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Nani is stunned to hear what he was saying. She asks koki what he is talking about. She repeats the question several times and koki speaks up : maa, aap apne pootai say poochalye ga, mere paas himat nahi hai,
Aehem is quiet.

He is shameful that koki handed the responsibility to tell nani what happened between him and gopi but then gopi from behind speaks up with a bag in her hand, and rashi stopping her : nani mai batati hu, akhair mein hoon kaun, parhai, bhar wali, is ghar wali nahi.

Nani : kyun bol rahi hu aisa?

Gopi: bachpan mein, maine apne ma bap ko kho dala accident mein, os din to laikar aaj tak, mami kai saath rahi hoo, mami ne aaj tak mujko parne likhnae nahi kya, naukarani ki tarha, muj ko pura ghar samhal dala. Phir ek din, rashi ke liye rishta aya, maaji aye or dekha, rashi Aehem ji kai liye laik nahi hai, bohot... Modern hai, to maaji nai buj ko chuna. Rashi buri tara toot gaye aur aapne aap ko kamrai me bhand kar diya. Phir aehem ji ke saath sagai ho gyi, kinjal ne bataya, aehem ji koi Anita naam si larki say bohat mohabat kartai hai, aur shaadi karne chahtai thai. Kis ne muj ko khat behja rashi ne para kai aehem ji muj se shaadi karna chahtai the pur jub Aehem ji nai para to os me nikha that wo shaadi nahi kar saktai.

Shaadi ho gay, 5 lakh ka necklace aya, mere naam par jub maine order nahi kya, aehemji gusa ho gay, os ko pata chala unpar ho to ek pehnti ( slap) laga daye.

Kuch arsay baad maine shaadi tor daye, 7 phere vows bapas le liye, toh aehem ji anita ke pas chale jai. Ab aur parishaniya ho gaye, kinjal ka lagan ho gya, mei ghar chor kar chale gaye. Aap agai, aehem ji mujko lai aye phir se, aap kai samne natak kya.

Aehem is shocked, and stunned to hear all this, her childhood. Nani suddenly sat down in a shock.

Gopi : maaji, ab waqt aa chuka hai, mein maikai vapas jao. Dhawal bhai aa rahe hai.

She takes the mangulsutra off, and her tikka. Even her sindoor. She goes towards aehem who was looking on the other side. And b rings his hand forward : yeh mangalsutra aap ka, anita ko pehna daina, maaf karna jo kuch bhi howa, ab ja rahi hoon hamesha kai liye. Anita sai baat karli voh aap ko phone kari gi, jub os kai pas time ho ga.

He was shocked, and felt pain in his heart.

Dhawal arrives and picks up her bag and stands outside. Gopi looks around the house takes everyones blessing and slowly goes beside the doorstep. She turns around, and sees everyone crying, koki and aehem had tears in their eyes. Koki broke down as she lost a gem of hers. Rashi crying badly as she lost her sister and now no one to help her and fight with.


What will happen? Will ahem realise her worth ? Find out soon.
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mind blowing continue please soon
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loved your twist! continue please...

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