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Posted: 14 years ago
#31
Very Nice OS dear....loved reading all the parts....
do post the next part soon

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Last Part 5
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This is the moment for which Gopi was waiting all her life till now. She got everything in her life. She can now even die peacefully in her 'Aham ji's arms'. And also has tears in eyes.

And Aham, he has 'his life in his arms', he can not afford distance from her any more. He tightens his arms around her waist and wants to crush her against his chest as this was like his dream come true. Gopi is all numb and breathless in his embrace.

Aham detaches him from her, holds her face between his palms, looks into her ocean deep eyes as he wants to drown in her eyes. While Gopi does not know what to do? How to react ? She is unable to look in his eyes full of passion, she cant take his gaze any more and close her eyes, which makes her tears rolling out of her eyes.

Aham keeps looking at her face. Drops a kiss on her forhead, kisses off her tears on her cheeks and only a few mili meters away from her lips. Gopi opens her eyes when she feels burning sensation on her face cozing by his breath, and feels like to hid somewhere away from him to save herself from his gaze which is cozing her to melt in his arms. On seeing him such close and almost abt to kiss, she pushes him away and says 'someone will come'. Saying so she starts limping towards kitchen with a heart beating so fast that it can come out of her chest anytime.

Aham comes out of his trance, looks at her limping towards kitchen, smiles and talks to himself 'this is like my gal, innocent n naive, she thinks she can run away from me with this limping walk, how sweet'. He follows her and catches her before kitchen, backs her on a pillar, looks at her mischiveously. Gopi struggles to release herself from his hold and says 'Aham ji, leave me plz i hv many things to complete b4 maaji wil come'. On seeing her struggle and eagerness to complete tasks he smiles again roves his fingers in her hair and says 'dont u know today noone wil come back home, thanx to this strom' Gopi is shocked. Aham njoys her expressions n continues 'yes my dear wife, today u can take rest instead of running like a busy bee around this house and I m...' saying so he sweeps her in his strong arms and poor Gopi is helpless.

Aham assures her that 'from now onwards he wil keep her like this always, safe and sound from every problem n tension of this world. As his life resides in her, if something wil happen to u i wil dif for sure' Gopi puts her hand on his mouth and nods her head to not to say this. Aham kisses her hand and screen freezes on both of them looking at each other lovingly.

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all done njoy
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Posted: 14 years ago
#33
i don't have words... reallly... it was simply awesome
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Posted: 14 years ago
#34
Fab job my friend! Loved it... If only!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanx diya.

Tammie, what this 'if only' means. Thanx 4 liking
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: -tellyaddict-


Thanx diya.

Tammie, what this 'if only' means. Thanx 4 liking

If only the CVs would give us a story like this... <sigh>
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Posted: 14 years ago
#37
hailaa...kitni romantic....😍 i absolutely loved the confession and the ending was too cutee!

it was a great story sadhliben!

Cheers!
~Naina
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Posted: 14 years ago
#38
Awesome Part dear......really wish CV's could show us some of more Ahem and Gopi scene.......but not to worry after reading ur OS i am really happy...it was really nice....loved it.......plz update the next part soon....thanks for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#39
sadhli it is so great that i m crying out of happiness. oh god when will the real aham behave like this. hope he does before i reach my old age.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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It was fantabulous!!!especially the last part...but i wanted to read more...will you be back with another FF...you're an amazing writer...just loved how you narrate the story...please come up with some more FF...will look forward to it!!

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