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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: stary_kajal
PART-11

Gopi sharma kar janey lagti hai aur achank se uska balance bigata hai aur ahem usey pakdta hai aur woh dono bed par gir jaatey hai.. Ahem stares gopi...... How cute! Rashi sees this❓ and she goes in anger.... 😡She calls her mom( Urmi). She picks phone... Rashi says mumy ( she start crying nt exactly but pretend to) woh gopi aur ahem ek dusrey ke kareeb aa rahey hai.... Humhey jaldi se kuch karna hoga. Warna aapki beti naukrani ban kar reh jayegi is modi mehal ki..... Urmi 😲 says " rashi beta tu mat ro, teri maa ney ek aisi kalakari sochi hai ki sab tere vash mey ho jayengey"... Rashi says " Woh kya mumy". Urmi says " tu is khandan ko waaris de dey waisey bi tera bacha agar pehley janam lega toh is ghar ka bada beta keh layega"... samaj gayi na.. Rashi "Par mumy mey iyni jaldi maa nahi bana chahti aur aapko toh pata hai yeh bachey vachey mujse nahi sambaltey....😕

Urmi says " dekh rashi beta agar tu is ghar pe raaj karna chahti toh yeh karna padega jaisey kagadi raaj karti hai kyunki ahem bada hai".. Rashi says "par mumy". Urmi says " Ab tu dekh ley tujhe kya karna hai, warna merey pas roney mat baithna". Rashi says "theek hai mumy, mey sochungi is baarey ,mey JAI SHRI KRISHNA". She cuts the ph... She thinks and thinks..........

how was the story....

Hey good one...even i was thinking about the khandan ka waris wala thing the othere day.....jarur competition lagega Gopi and Rashi mein

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addicted2tv

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Posted: 14 years ago

#22

good job.....it looks like i am watching the show...i can totally relate it with original...dialogues and all...good job...keep it up...i think soon they will appoint u as a Cv

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kajal

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Posted: 14 years ago

#23

😊 Thank u so much my frends for your support

love you radhika, addicted2tv, fun girl,rusha, nihira fan thank you everyone

i will be updating todat for you all.........

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kajal

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Posted: 14 years ago

#24

Next part:

In the morning phone is ringing, mani phone uthati hai. Mani says "hello". from the other side (elesh mother) "jai krishan, kya mey kokila behan se baat kar sakti hu". Mani says"ji ek min". Mani goes to kokila and says "woh woh". Kokila says😡"aey dofer su chey, kya woh woh kar rahi hai". Mani says " woh kinjal behan ki saas ka phone aaya hai, woh aapse baat karna chahti hai". Kokila says" pehaley batana chaiye tha, chal mey aau chey.

Kokila picks up the phone. Kokila says " jai krishna sambdhan ji". Elesh mother's says " Kokila behan woh aaj shaam humarey ghar mey party aur aap sabko aana hai". Kokila says "ji". Elesh mother hangs up the phone. Kokila says to parag( ahem father) "Suniye kinjal ki saas ka phone aaya tha, unke ghar mey party hai. hum sabko bhulaya hai. aap shaam ko tayar rahiyega..

Kokila gives this news to kinjal.rashi,hetal,gopi, chirag, ahem & jigar. Rashi feels so happy and says🥳 "wow party". Kokila says " ha lakin kinjal ke sasural walo ke liye kya bhent le jaye" Hetal says" chinta ki koi baat nahi hai kokila, mey jigar ke papa se kehti hu". Kokila says" ji mota bhabi"... Kokila says to rasji and gopi "aaj shaam ko koi bi gabad nahi honi chahiye ayaa samaji gayi na chokri"...

Rashi and gopi sees kokila............

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kajal

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Next part:

In the evening sab log elesh ke ghar mey sab usey badhai de rahe hai, wahi modi pariwar ki entry hoti hai sab ek dusrey ko miltey hai..Gopi and ahem are looking so cute. Ahem ne black black suit with white shirt aur gopu ne light green colour ki sari pehani hai😍... Rashi ne blue colour ki sari aur jigar ne brown jacket aur with white shirt pehani hai black jeans ke saath.. aur rashi jigar sey thoda naraz hai.....

Jigar gopi ke pass aata hai and says" gopi bhabi aapse kuch baat karni hai". Gopi says "ji devar ji kahiye kya baat hai". Jigar says "woh gopi bhabi rashi mujse naraz hai, woh mainey usey nayi sari nayi lakar di na, isliye mujhe usey manana hai. aap meri madat karegi na". Gopi smiles "ji karungi, par kya karna hoga". Jigar says "woh sab aap mujh par chodh dijiye bas aapko mera saath dena hoga".. Gopi goes along with jigar. Jigar elesh ke kaan mey kuch kehta hai.

Suddenly lights off. Spot light on elesh. Elesh mike pakdta hai and starts saying "pyare dosto aaj is khuski ke awsar mey aapsey kuch kehna chahta hu, mey aaj bahut khush hu because aaj mujhe zindagi ki sabse badi khushi milney ja rahi hai. meri life partner "kinjal modi". Spot light on kinjal. Kinjal is shocked 😲. Aur mey chahta hu ki aap sab meri is khushi mey shamil ho.

Tabhi spot light on jigar he start singing that song for rashi ( mausam ki izzat hai chehraa movie song feat bipasha basu, dino morea singer kunal ganjewala and shreya ghoshal). Rashi bluses☺️. Jigar start singing the song for rashi "mausam ki izzat hai, tanhayi ka mauka hai -2, then gopi sees ahem😊 sings" ji bharke karo tum pyar kisney tumhey roka hai, ho ji bhar ke karo tum pyar kisney tumhey roka hai". Then again jigar sings mausam ki izzat hai. Ahem thoda sa hasta hai... In whole song gopi imagine ahem { hey guys u can listen the song and imagine the secene as i have tried to make it little real... but this song suits jigar bec kunal ganjewala has given his voice and imagine gopi taking shreya ghosahal voice.................. how cute}. All of them comes to the floor.

In the end ahem sees gopi and gopi blushes☺️ All people claps and jigar hugs rashi.. even rashi also become happy😊. Gopi goes to ahem and stands there. Kokila sees this (Kokila BG music starts} gopi become little embrassed 😳 in front of kokila.

So frnds how was the story.. hope u all like it.....

Edited by stary_kajal - 14 years ago

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kajal

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Posted: 14 years ago

#26

Hey frnds i am back with the next part:

In the morning every one is sitting in the living room.Kokila ask mani" mani yaha aao". Mani says "ji". Kokila says "jakar rashi ko bhula kar lao". Rashi is sleeping {BG music start} and smiling. Mani comes and says "rashi bhabi rashi bhabi". Rashi says "kya hai". Mani says "aapko mota bhabi bhula rahi hai"

Rashi hadbadi mey uthati aur kehti hai"kya, arey baap re" . Rashi jaldi sey tayar hokar nichey living room mey aa jati hai aur kehti hai 'ji kaki ji, aapney mujhe bhulaya". Kokila stares at rashi "rashi tumhey jo saman ki list bananey ke liye kaha tha tumney banayi". Rashi 😲 "ji woh kaki ji". Kokila says "kya woh..... ha ha bolo rashi,arey tum chup kyu ho.... mey sun rahi hu, kya kaha tumney,,,,,,,👏 awaaz nahi aa rahi rashi, kya kaha tumney". Rashi says nothing. Kokila {BG music starts} says "yeh dikhye mota bhabi yeh hai aaj kal ki bahuiye jiney kaam karwaney mey toh maza aata hai , lakin jab kaam karney ki baari aati hai toh woh woh karti hai". Hetal says "Kokila jawa diwey bachi hai woh bhul gayi hogi waisey bi kal party thi na". Kokila becomes angry 😡 and says "jawa diwey kaisey jaaney du mota bhabi yaha baat meri beti kinjal ki shaadi ki hai. kaisey jawa diwey mota bhabi". Kokila turns to rashi and says "tum sach mey koi kaam karna chahati ho ya phir yeh sirf tumara naatak hai zimedar ban ney ka". Rashi 😭 says "nahi kaki ji aisi baat nahi hai". Kokila says toh kaisi baat hai "itna sun lo rashi yaha koi tumari shadi ki terha natak nahi chal raha hai ki muh utha kar chal diye shaadi karney......

Everyone is shocked to hear this especially rashi😭. { poor rashi 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣........ lakin is rashi ko theek karney ka yahi ek raasta hai} Hetal says " yeh tum kya keh rahi ho kokila, dekho tum gussa mat karo mey abhi sabhi ki sabhi list bana deti hu. Kokila ko aur gussa 😡aata hai aur woh kehti hai "kab tak aakhir kab tak iski galati chupati rahegi aap mota bhabi. Here hetal also becomes angry😡 " bas kokila bas karo, aakhir kisi cheez ki hadh hoti hai kab tak tum sabke saath yuhi sakhti sey pesh aaogi. Kokila 😲 says "mota bhabi aap aisa bol rahi hai". Hetal says " ha kokila mey aisa bol rahi hu kyunki baat ab hadh se aagey badh chuki hai, galtiyo se sikha jaata hai, na ki unhey kured kured kar baar baar jagadey ka kaaran banaya jaata hai". Rashi feels so happy😛............

Edited by stary_kajal - 14 years ago

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kajal

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Posted: 14 years ago

#27

Next part:

Her secne start wher rashi is happy😊. Kokila says to hetal " mota bhabi aaj aap is rashi ki wajah se mujhe keh rahi hai na, dekh lena ek din aap bahut pachtyegi". Aaj se kya abhi sey rashi meri beti kinjal ki shadi kekisi bi kaam tak ko hath nahi lagayegi. Aur agar usney koshish bi ki toh mey yeh ghar se hamesha hamesha ke liye chali jaungi... kokila stares at rashi with angry 😡 looks and went away.

Hetal tears 😭in her eyes and says to baa "yeh kya ho raha hai baa is ghar mey, mujhe kuch samaj nahi aa raha hai, mey jitna sambhalney ki koshish karti hu baat utna hi bigad jaati hai, aaj tak mainey kokila ka aisa apmaan,aur apshabd nahi kahey..... lakin aaj hadh se jayda baat badh gayi thi baa.... mey kem karu chu...... Kokila comes to baa room and sees this and says to hetal "mota bhabi kuch karney ki zarurat nahi hai jo hona tha ho chuka, mujhe bas itna kehna hai ki agar rashi ki wajah se koi bi adchan aayi toh mey usey is ghar sey dhakey maarkar bhaar nikal dungi. aur aap log kuch nahi bolegi. Hetal and baa are shocked 😲.......

Gopi comes to kokila and says "maji kya baat hai aap theek hai na". Kokila says "jab tak tum dono behaney is ghar pe ho tab tak kuch bi theek kaisey ho sakta hai, aaj sirf tumari us rashi behan ki wajah se hetal bhabi ne mera apmaan kiya hai mera, mey us rashi ko kabhi maaf nahi karungi". Gopi says "maji lakin". Kokila 😡 says "
kya hai woh woh". Ahem listen this all and says gopi to go.. Gopi goes.....

Ahem goes to kokila and says " mom kya baat hai aap itni pareshan kyu hai". Kokila in tears 😭 says 'kuch nahi ahem dikra bas itna jaan lo ki tumari maa ki yaha koi izzat nahi hai". Ahem says "mom aapke aur hetal kaki ke bich kya hua hai mujhe pata hai, lakin mom jayada sochney ka koi fayada nahi hai isey se aapki tabiyat hi khrab hogai, aur aap janti hai mey aapki aakho mey aansu nahi dekh sakta". ( so sweet ahem👏 muma's gud boy) .. Kokia wipes her tears and says "mujhe tumpey bahut fakar hai beta ki tum merey betey ho kokila modi ke betey" Here ahem gives smile😊.....

lakin tabhi achank se shor ki awaazey aati hai...........

so frnds hw was the story.......

Edited by stary_kajal - 14 years ago

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Nihira-fan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#28

wah mazaa ayaa..........can't wait to read more.

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kajal

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Posted: 14 years ago

#29

😉 Next part Achanak se shor ki awaaz sunayi deti hai ahem aur kokila bhagkar aatey hai aur dekhtey hai😲 "khoon se latpath gopi sediyo sey nichey gir gayi hai.... Uskey seer, bhaju, se khoon aa raha hota hai... Sab ek dam shocked😲..... Ahem sees this aur chilata hai "gopi. "

Hetal calls ambulance... Baa see gopi with teary eyes 😭 Kokila ask mani"yeh sab kaisa hua". Mani says "woh mujhe nahi pata jab mey aayi toh gopi bhabi sidhiyo se nichey gir rahi thi bas sath mey kinjal behan thi". Kokila stares at kinjal... Kinjal😲 says "maa mey thi waha par mey toh gopi bhabi ki awaaz sunkar waha aayi, mujhe toh pata hi nahi yeh sab kaisey hua". A hem gopi ko uthkar bahar ambulance mey le jaata hai... Sab gadi mey bethtey hai...

Ab hospital ka secne. Sab ICU ke bahar ahem😔 (sad BG music start) ki nazrey ICU ki lali bati pey, baa says "hey kanha ji mari dikari ko kuch nahi hona chaiye, woh toh humse sabse jayda aapko manti hai".. Hetal says "baa humari gopi ko kuch nahi hoga, kanha ji toh uske priya hai, woh uski raksha karengey"... Kokila, rashi aur jigar , chirag aur parag are also nervous...

tabhi doctor bahar aata hai ahem says "doc kya baat hai, gopi meri patni hai, woh woh theek toh hai, usey kuch hua toh nahi na {hmmm ahem ji itnI fikar lagta hai aapko pyar hogaya aa hai...🥳}.. Doc says "dikhiye abhi humhey gopi ji ko observation mey rakhna hoga 24 gantey ke liye tabhi hum kuch bata sakegey". Ahem ek dam jhatkey se beith jaata hai. Kokila says😭 "dekha ahem jab humhey insaan ki kadar nahi hoti tab tak hum uski kimat nahi samjhtey, lakin jab wahi insaan aapsey dur janey lagta hai tab usey khoney ka darr sab se jayda humhey hi lagta hai,par tum chinta mat karo sab theek ho jayega, gopi theek ho jayegi".....

Waha urmi rotey rotey 😭 {DRAMA QUEEN) chilatey huey kehti hai "hey rey mari dikari ko kya hua, gopi mari beti itni si thi jab tere maa baap tujhe chodh kar chaley gaye they humari godh mey tab sey phool ki terha rakha hai tujhe".. Hetal says " urmi behan sambhaliye apney aap ko gopi ko kuch nahi hoga"... Urmi says "nahi nahi hetal behan mujhe toh apni bachi ki chinta ho rahi hai heyyy kanha ji aapne aisa kyu kiya".... Nurse come and says "shhh awaaaz mat kijye patients ko distrub hota hai... Kokila comes (BG music starts)😡 " Urmi behan apna yeh rona dhona band kijiye, gopi bahu theek hai usey kuch nahi hua hai". Urmi stops crying and goes to rashi. Rashi says "mumy kya zarurat itna roney ki, aapko toh natak bi nahi karna aata... kar di kokila ne bezati aapki". Urmi says "tu nahi samjhey gi kabhi kabhi karna padta hai, magarmach ke aansu bahaney padtey hai". Rashi says "ji mumy"...

Kokila comes to rashi and says "ghar jakar sabke liye chaiye aur kuch dhokla, chuda, methi ke tahpley bana kar le aur ha baa ko ghar lejao unhey dawai aur khana khila kar saaman lekar aana, samaji gayi". Rashi😕 says "ji kaki ji"...

Kokila says hmmm......

Edited by stary_kajal - 14 years ago

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kajal

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Posted: 14 years ago

#30

😭 Next part

Ahem ICU ki khidaki sey dekhtey huey gopi ko oxygen chadha hua hai ( ahem BG music) kehta hai maan hi maan" yeh sab meri wajah sey hua hai sirf meri wajah sey, tumhey hamesha apmanit kiya hai mainey, tumhey bura bhala kehney mey kabhi koi kasar nahi chodi mainey aur aaj tum is halat mey bi ,eri wajah sey ho"....Jigar comes and says "bhai aap chinta mat kijye gopi bhabi ko kuch nahi hoga, bhagwan achey logo ke saath kabhi bur nahi honey detey aur gopi bhabi toh kanha ji ki bhakt hai". Ahem says nothing...

Rashi ghar pe kitchem mey kokila ko kosti hui "yeh kagadi ko toh jaan se maar dalney ka maan karta hai, kya halat kar di hai meri, { Aata uske baalo mey lag jaata hai} Gadi ki tarf dekhtey huey "
hey bhagwam bahut late ho gaya hai, kagadi toh meri jaan le legi, yeh gopi bi na isey bi aaj hi girna tha". Hadbadi mey rashi thapley mey namak ki jagah shakar ayr chaiye mey shakar ki jagah namak daa det hai {🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 teri toh band baji rashi dikari, ab kya hoga mamu}

ha ha ha ha ha...........

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