SP fanfic 'Pyar to hona hi tha' Last Ep.23 p.54 - Page 38

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: pop77

Nice preview..Saloni can't see Nahar eyes..how much he love her..

Shayani upset because Saloni don't accept nahar & fight with her parents..
waiting for next part..

good guess. sayani is upset because Nahar does not tell saloni that he loves her. also saloni does not understand.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: judyp

Great episode... Ofcourse its a yessssssssssssssssssssss

Keep it up

what else it can be. Nahar is the best thing she got.😛
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Posted: 16 years ago
New episode is coming shortly. 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago

Awesome preview...can't wait to read the whole update !!!

Sounds very interesting....

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: pop77

Nice parts..I laughting when Nahar & Soham went to Summeet office..

Finally Saloni agree witn that she love him..
di you stop really bad point..i waiting for next part..

that is actually a good point to stop na,😉😉😆
let u all guess. it is fun right.😊
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Posted: 16 years ago

Episode 21 New Found Love

Saloni is crying loudly hitting Nahar in his chest with her fists saying: I hate you Nahar so much. She repeats the words and hugs him tightly crying some more. She again asks; Why nahar? Why? Why did you do this to me? Why you did not tell me this before? I hate you so much.

" Saloni I always loved you . I did not know what is love and what it meant? All I knew is that I liked you very much and did not want to see you hurt or sad, Whenever some one try to hurt you it made me very angry and sad. I was always afraid of rejection. I thought I was not worthy of you and you will break relation with me and you will make fun of me. Even today you did not reply. Saloni will you marry me? I love you so much ." says Nahar lovingly.

"Nahar yes I will marry you. I can runaway and marry you right now. But Why you did not tell me this before?. Nahar how can I reject you?. You are my best friend who I can always rely on. You always helped me and showed me a true meaning of friendship. I cannot even imagine my life without you being around. Remember I told you I will marry after making condition with my husband that you will be my best friend still. Why did you hide this from me all these years and let me go thru seeing Sumeet and others? Why Nahar Why? "Says Saloni cryingly

" Saloni I asked you so many times, Remember first time after your function, I asked you to marry me and you rejected me. Then I went away and I was crying and you came. I asked you to leave me alone and you felt bad. But then sayani came and she found out that I loved you and she was also crying, Sayani told me so many time to tell you the truth and I tried. But you never took me seriously and always thought I was joking, Every time you said no I felt so much hurt." Says Nahar crying putting his arms around her.

" Nahar I am so sorry all this time I was thinking that you are really joking and never took you seriously. I always thought How can a charming wonderful loving handsome person like you want to marry me, also I thought I am not worthy of you". says Saloni lovingly holding his head in her hands and starts kissing him his forehead.

:" Saloni darling tum meri jaan ho, Mera armaan ho, mera pyar ho, meri saanse, meri dhadkan. Meri subah meri sham ho Jaan tum ho to sab hai. Aaj agar tumne mana kiya hota to shayad ye sadma mai jhail nahi pata aur shayad mar " says Nahar crying hugging saloni close to his heart. . Saloni covers his mouth .

" Nahar don't ever say that. I am angry because you did not even tell me when I ask you to meet Sumeet. You knew Sumeet was bad still you left me to him. You did not reply to my letters. You let Sumeet do this to me. Kash tumne mujhe bataya hota. Kash kash. Tum nahi jante Sumeet me mujhe kitna dard diya hai. " says Saloni sobbingly hiding her face in Nahar's chest. Nahar is holding her and comforting her gently massaging her back.

:"Saloni you never let me confess my love. You brought Sumeet and asked me to select him for you. I wanted to burn the whole world that day. I was so shocked and hurt . I thought my world had ended. But Sayani handled the situation and I thought you were going be happy with him. I always wanted you to be happy. But how could I watch my love getting engaged to some one else? I could not even see you with him. So I left and I cried for days and days. But I found some one to take care of me and she always told me I will get you. Saloni even though you were not with me,. In my dreams you were always with me. The reason I did not reply because what would I write? You know I can not lie to you. saloni all these years I have always wanted you and I have cried so many times thinking you can not be mine. Every single rejection from you gave me more and more pain. I started thinking I will never ever get you and I wanted to die. " says Nahar cryingly,

: Saloni holds his hand and says: Nahar mai bahut buri hun maine tumhe kitna sataya. Mujhe maro. She takes his hand and start slapping her face with his hand. Nahar pulls his hand. away. Saloni keeps saying:" Nahar please forgive me. I hurt the very person who always loved me so much and always protected me from everything. Nahar, . I am so dumb that I never realized this, plz forgive your stupid Saloni." Says Saloni hugging him tight.

"Please Saloni do not say such things. You are smart, kind and simple girl and you never have to say sorry. I am not angry with you. I can never be angry with you. I love you so much my dear Saloni.' Says Nahar hugging her more. Saloni is still feeling bad thinking how much she hurt every one unknowingly.

She thinks of something and takes his face in her hands and asks him to close his eyes. Nahar closes his eyes, Saloni starts kissing him, starting from his head then she kisses his eyes and his cheeks and his ears as if she wants to take all his pain away from him with her kisses as if a mother is kissing a hurting child. Nahar is enjoying this with his closed eyes and smiles. Saloni seeing Nahar smiling forgets everything and smiles back . She could not help herself and kisses his smiling lips. Nahar joins her and they are both lost in a dream world. Nahar forgets all his pain and enjoys those moments thinking is it really true or is it just his dream and opens his eyes to see saloni's smiling face so close to his and he can feel her heart breathing heavily. Nahar wishes that the time stops right there and him and Saloni kissing each other like that.

After few moments Saloni moves away completely out of breath.. As Nahar looks at her she blushes. She is thinking this is the first time I felt this way for Nahar. She blushes more as Nahar is staring in her eyes. . Nahar pulls her closer putting his arms around her waist and kisses her rosy cheeks. Saloni closes her eyes and enjoys this new found happiness and new feelings of being loved by her best friend.

Nahar then pats her face to wake her and asks: "Saloni will you talk to my mom. Let us give her the good news". Saloni nods her head smilingly,

' Mom I want to tell you something. Talk to your bahu mom" says Nahar being so happy,

" Really Saloni maan gayi beta?. Let me talk to her" Says Trishla expressing her joy. As if she is not trusting her ears. Nahar hands phone to Saloni.

" Auntiji how are you? asks Saloni politely.

" Auntiji nahi mummyji kaho beta. I am so happy. Are you happy beta?. Are you going to marry my Nahar? Asks Trishla trying to assure herself

' Ji mummyji I am happy. But I am angry too as no one told me this not even you mummiji/ I feel so stupid. Every one knew this besides me . I am also angry at myself for giving Nahar and you all so much pain. Plz forgvie me mumyyji. Would you plz talk to my parents about this." Says Saloni politely.

" Nahi beta don't feel bad or say sorry. Nahar stopped us all from telling you. Yes I will talk to Deepa right away. I am just too happy. Nahar's dad and I love you very much. We feel so lucky that you will be my Nahar's bride. ' says Trish being so happy. Trish then talks to nahar. Nahar feels like on the top of the world. Sayani sends text msg about Saloni's decision. Nahar replies yes and that we are coming. Saloni is resting on nahar's shoulder. She finally says" Motu let us go all this happiness has made me even more hungy. I feel famished,

Nahar holds her hand and they walk out. As they reach back to cafeteria no food is left as they took a long time. Nahar buys 3 ice creams and pop corn. Saloni first finishes her ice cream then takes Nahar's ice cream. Nahar smiles watching her eat. Neither Nahar nore Saloni are interested in watching a movie. Nahar is holding Saloni with his arm around her waist while Saloni is sitting there dropping her head on his shoulder. Ocassionaly picking up the pop corn or 2 from the container Nahar is holding , Sayani and soham feels so happy seeing them together and smile. Soham too holds Sayani's hand like newly married. No one is interested in watching movie today. But they want to just sit there enjoying each other's company. As movie is about to finish Sayani gets text msg from Trishla. Sayni excuses herself and goes out. Trishla discusses about some surprise. As movie ends Sayani asks nahar to rush Saloni home as there is some problem at her home. She and Soham excuses themselves saying they will meet them at Saloni's house, They have something urgent to take care right away.

Right after Trish finish talking to sal. She calls Deepa and addreses her as samdhan. Deepa is surprised. But when Trish gives her good news, Deepa is very happy. She tries to contact Udaysingh. Trish comes to her house with panditji. They decide the muhurat fot Nahar Saloni's engagement in the late evening. Both Trish and Deepa hugs each other. Trish gives good news to surajsingh. He is so happy. But Saloni's dad is still unaware.

When he arrives home he tells Deepa he has invited a friend and his son. They are coming to see Saloni. Deepa is shocked. She calls Trish and asks her come over soon. As she needs her help. Trish promises.

Nahar brings Saloni home. Trish stops Nahar from entering their house and asks Saloni to go in. Saloni tries to question Trish. But Trish does not respond. As saloni goes in Udaysing is waiting there and asks her to get ready as a doctor is coming to see her.

" Why a doctor? Saloni wonders and asks: Dad I am fine why a doctor? He replies a Doctor is coming to see you? I am not giving up. You have to get married. Saloni is about to oppose and a family walks in.. Saloni is shocked and asks to talk to Udaysingh.

Saloni gets very upset and says: why dad Why? I asked you not to find any one for me. Besides I have found some one and I am marrying him. Uday singh gets very upset and asks: Why you did not tell me this and Who is this? Nahar sees his cousin's family about to walk in the house when saloni is angry with her dad. Hearing their argument Nahar goes in.

" Dad I am not marrying any one else.. I love Nahar. I will only marry Na'." says Saloni but she could not complete her sentence. She holds her head and feels dizzy. Nahar sees Saloni and rushes there.. saloni is about to fall but Nahar catches her in his arms.

Every one gathers there Deepa and uday are sad and worried,. Nahar takes Saloni in her room and puts her in the bed. He is shocked to see his cousin. But he has heard all the conversation between sal and her dad. He assures Naahr he has no intention to marry saloni. He just came because of the force. Upon Nahar's insistence He chks out Saloni and assures every one she is fine, She needs food. When was the last time she ate.

Uday realizes his mistake, When deepa replies She did not eat anything since yesterday afternoon. He feels real bad and very sad. Nahar also feels same way thinking Saloni kept asking for a food and he failed to get her some. He gets worried for Saloni.

'I am such a jerk Saloni asked for food so many times and we did not get anything and in the hurry to come here I totally forgot. I am responsible for Saloni's condition. Oh God plz help Saloni and forgive me for my mistake. I failed." Says Nahar cryingly.

Uday comforts him and replies. No beta it is all my fault . I am the one who is responsible for my Saloni's condition. I had become so blind to marry her that I kept forcing my decisions on her without knowing what are her feelings. After she broke off with Sumeet, I was worried about her marriage and reacted so harshly toward my poor little girl. I am sorry beta forgive me. Mujhe kahan pata the meri Saloni ki zindagi me tum jaisa hira ayega. My saloni is really very lucky. Says Uday holding Nahar's hand. Nahar gets up and touches his feet. Uday blesses him "be happy, "

"Uncle when will Saloni wake up. Why is she not waking up?" says nahar hugging him and cries hard. Udaysingh and Deepa cries as well. Trish and surajsingh comforts them.

Nahar is moving and shaking Saloni asking her to wake up, Saloni occasionly mumbles Nahar Nahar with tears falling from her eyes. That makes Nahar feel worst. Nahar is thinking:" Why me? why me? I had little happiness in my life and again this What have I done wrong? Plz bhagwan help my Saloni. " Deepa comes with juice and asks Nahar to give saloni some. Nahar puts few spoonfuls of juice in her mouth with a worried face as if he is going to cry again. Both deepa and trishla comforts him.

' Beta Hamari Saloni ko kuch nahi hoga." Says Deepa lovingly.

" Nahar my sweet brother, Saloni will be fine trust me. She had not eaten for over 24 hours. Then she got a biggest shock of her life your confession that you love her and then she comes home to one more shock. Her poor body could not take all this. Just be patient," says Doctor hugging Nahar,

To be contiuned.

Plz pardon my typos. This episode os dedicated to payal, reena judy swati, Nazia and all the Nahar Saloni fans. Enjoy.

Edited by ramas - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Thanks Di, Awsome part..Finally Saloni accept Nahar love.
Actually Saloni aslo love him but she can't figure it out that love or frindship..
waiting for saloni comeback her sense//
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Posted: 16 years ago

It was fantastic... I got so caught up reading I completely forgot to call my mother...

It was worth the wait....
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: pop77

Can't wait to read part..when are U plannin? why Saloni dad angry with her..

Saloni's dad wants saloni to get married.😊
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: jaanlover

Wonderful update di !!! I really loved it...you are such a very talented writer.

I'm sure the answer of Saloni is YES !!!
Please update soon...can't wait for the next part. After reading this great part I want more...

how can Saloni reject her best friend who is always there for her. Thannsk. Upda tei is posted.

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