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Posted: 18 years ago
#21
April 26-
Continued from yesterday' scene

On the accident site

Nahar comes to the accident scene. He tries to help the person inside and is stunned to see Saloni who has been hurt and unconcious. He immediately picks her up and takes her to his car and rushes to the hospital.



At the Hospital

When she is been wisked away on the stroller to the emergency room, Nahar tells the doctor please hurry up...nothing should happen to Saloni. The doctor assures Nahar not to worry. Nahar is pacing ouside the emergency room when the doctor comes out and says that Saloni is fine now. Nothing to worry about, due to the accident she is still in shock. Nahar asks the doctor if she is still unconcious and the doctor says yes. Nahar asks the doctor if he can see her and the doctor says go ahead. Neel is outside and says to himself why luck always is not with me?. Being so near to Saloni I am always far. I feel like coming to you right away but I can't. If you were alone it was another matter but I don't know how to answer Nahar if he asks me how I came to know about the accident. Why is this always happening to me ?.why Saloni.?

Nahar comes near Saloni 's bed and sees her all bandaged up(her hands and her forhead). He lifts her hair strand from her face and says," seeing you like this I am tortured. I can't see you like this. I have a strange feeling of scariness, I can feel your pain. Its a coinincidence that I was present at the accident scene otherwise I don't know what would have happened. You want to stay far from me...stay but please take care of yourself. Just then Nurse comes and gives him flowers which he had asked for. He then says to saloni..these are for you just please get well soon. He then turns and puts the flower in vase. Saloni then utters Nahar's name continuesly. Nahar looks back aat saloni then goes and calls the doctor.

Narpat's house

Nahar calls up saloni's parents house. Ambila picks up. Nahar says to her that there is nothing to worry about but Saloni met with an accident and she is in the Parvati Hospital. Ambika then asks is this Jamai saa (Son-in-law) speaking.? Nahar doesn't say anything and hangs up. Ambika gets hysterical and shouts for narpat. she tells him that Saloni met with an accident we need to go there. Narpat asks how does she know? She says the I got a phone call from Jamai Saa.

At the Hospital

Saloni regains councisness and asks the Doctor what happened and how did she get here. Doc says that she met with an accident and your husband nahar Singh brought you here. The doc asks the nurse to call Nahar and she informs him that he already left.

They come to the hospital with Gaytri, Kaveri, Samar and Neel. Nahar sees them and hides. He then leaves. The wardboy asks the doctor where is the person who came with saloni? the doc says he has left...why? The wardboy tells him that Nahar forgot his wallet. The Doctor takes the wallet from him and calls up Nahar's house.

Brijesh's house

Tara picks up and the doc informs her about the wallet that was forgotten. Tara gets worried and asks the doc what hapened to Nahar, was he hurt? the doc then informs her about Saloni. Tara hangs up and give the info to Bhabho. Bhabo tells Tara that we need to inform Nahar. Tara says Nahar already knows about it because he is the one to take Saloni to the hospital. they are pondering over the situation when Nahar wallks in looking very disturbed.he goes to his room. Bhabo follows him. She asks him, " did you forget something at the hospital. Your wallet..You are highly worried, because of saloni. You can't bear her pains. U still love her, don't you? I know everything. Relation of love is very strong, a gust of wind can't break it". Nahar denies it says that i did what I did because of humanity. If it was somebody else instead of Saloni I would do the same. Bhabo says that you might have done that but you would not have pain in your eyes.Y r u lying to yourself, why don't you agree that u still love Saloni. Saloni is a part of your life, nobody cantake her place. Your tadap(i don't know the word in english), your tears which you have hidden....says how much you still love Saloni. Don't deny it. This is the truth. she then leaves him alone. Devika sees this and says my plan was failed because of Nahar. Nahar save Saloni's Life.

At the hospital

Saloni is surrounded by her family. They all are happy to see her well. Narpat informs her that everybody was worried . I called Neel to let him know and and he left everything and came here. Ambila thanks god. The doc says along with god you should thank Saloni's husband who bought her to the hospital at the right time. The doc then tells Neel to bring medicine from outside since they are not available in the hospital. Narpat tells Ambika that you were right. the phone u recvd was from Nahar. Kaveri says that Nahar only phoned because he wanted to proov he is nice and is worried about Saloni.If he was worried so much, he should have waited hee till Saloni got allright.All false worries(sab dikhve ki hamdardi hai) Gaytri then says..there is no doubt that Nahar still loves Saloni. Kaveri says if Nahar still loved saloni, He wouldn't question her character. Just then bhabo and tara walks in.

All go out accept gaytri. Bhabo tells Saloni don't get sad...your family's anger is justified.I don't have any complaints. Tell me how r u? Saloni says I am alive. Bhabo says don't saylike that.May god grant you a long life. atleast in this way, we came to know that Nahar still has feelings for you. Tara says no matter how much Nahar is angry with you...he lovesyou a lot. To this Saloni says that I don't if nahar did all this because of love or hmanity. Bhabo says...don't think like that...you take rest. Saloni says I am fine, your love and blessing are with me. Bhabo says our blessings are always with you. Just see everythng will be allright. whatever happens, whoever comes in between you both or anybody tries to put a wall between you, there cannot lessen the love in Nahar's heart for you. even if its Chandni.

brijesh 's House

Neel comes to Devika and says," don't ever try to play with Saloni's life next time otherwise the outcome will be bad.Next time if you even look at saloni, you will lose your life. Devika asks him what are you saying and why.When did you start worrying about Saloni so much. neel says he doesn't have to answer her but remember that don't include Saloni in your horrible game, you won't harm her. If anyhing happens to her you will beg for your life from me..I am not threatning you i am warning you.i can do this. very well understand this.He goes.Diveka realize that Neel loves Saloni and she might you this info for her own good.

Nahar is in his room and thinking about his past with Saloni and Saloni is doing the same in the hospital. Nahar looks at her photo lovingly. Nice song in the background"Kyonki itna pyaar tumko karte hai hum" He then comes to some conclusion.

At the hospital

In the morning they show him going into the hospital with flowers. He is walking and walks into someone coming from the opposite. the flowers falls from his hand. The other person bends to pick up the flowers and so does Nahar. nahar glances at the peron helping him and is stunned to see that it is none other than yug. Nahar gets angry

Episode ends on his angry and shocked face.

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Posted: 18 years ago
#22
April 29-
Nhar bangs into yug.. Nahar is shocked, yet angry to see him… he understands that Yug is here to meet saloni and yells at him saying that he is here to meet 'her' and he has already destroyed his life, and ruined everything for him… Yug stares at him… nahar leaves in anger… Yug wonders who he was as he couldn't recognize him…

Nahar goes to saloni and rudely says that she must be happy now, nw that Yug is back.. Saloni is overjoyed to know that Yug is back.. She questions nahar enthusiastically as to where is he?? Nahar gets furious and leaves from there..

Saloni gets up to go find Yug.. Yug is with the doctor. The doctor says that he will try to get his memory back, but he cant seem to find any link. He questions him as in where is he from, etc… Yug answers that he doesn't know anything. The doctor says that medicines wont help, he will have to try hard to think, or may be someone knows him, even though he doesn't know - a friend or an enemy.. Yug remember Nahar yelling at him. Yug tells the doctor about a guy identifying him. Just then neel comes there but doesn't see yug.. Neel talks to the doctor, yug turns back, but neel leaves… Neel and nahar crooss each other. Neel questions him as to why is he here? Nahar replies angrily that his friend is enjoying and is at peace, since Yug is here.. Neel is shocked and speechless.. Nahar says that yes, Yug is here, so saloni doesn't need him.. Neel wonders what Yug found out about saloni, nahar says that may be neel himself knows and leaves angrily.. Neel is utterly shocked.. He goes to saloni's room.. He looks for saloni.. Saloni comes there smilingly yet restless.. Neel looks at her and questions her.. Saloni says that Yug is back, now he is the only one who can helo her out.. Neel gets nervous…

Nahar sits int eh car and leave, Yug tries to run after him, but in vain.. Yug feels sad that this guy only could have helped him out, and whenever he sees him again, he will know about his life..

There shubra's husband gets vegetables for home.. Shubra yells at him that pritam gets good vegetables that there is no need to get vegetables from outside.. Shubra's hubby says that he has got this from pritam itself, so he doesn't need to come here.. Pritam just then comes in and says that he is here to give the change, as sir gave rupees 500 and left off… shubra asks him to take rest and asks him if he wants water.. Pritam says that he will only take tea.. Shubra asks chamiki to make tea.. Shubra's hubby leaves off in anger.. Shubra looks at him sternly…

Devika calls the mystry man and says that she is so close to her goal and she should now be quick, the man asks her to not be hasty… she replies that now that she has this part, she can connect it to the other half which he has, and match them up. The guy agrees.. Devika puts the piece in her purse and leaves the room…

She goes out and finds nahar there.. Devika tells nahar that her friend is going to america tomorrow, and she wants to see off her friend, and if she can go? Nahar says that off course, she is his guest, she can go anywhere she likes.. Nahar adds that he would have come too… but he cant.. So ask sher to take the driver… devika says NO, nahar insists, but devika says that she will go.. Devika goes back to her room.. Nahar leaves for his room..

Shubra and her hubby are on their way to a resturant, shubra asks chamki to take care of piyush. Just the bua calls, and tells shubra about saloni's accident.. Shubra asks her hubby to leave with her.. But her mom - in- law stops him and says that a lawyer is coming over to talk to them, she asks shubra to leave and tells her that she will join them later… shubra gets annoyed but leaves.. The mom in law asks shubra's hubby to go inside, as she will call him when the lawyer comes… chamki then questions the mom in law, she replies that kuvar is acting like a pet animal since he is insecure about shubra and pritam, but now is the time to use the trump card, she tells chamki the plan (we don't hear it),, chamki is over joyed…

Devika gets ready to leave.. She bangs into tara and the stamp piece falls down.. Devika looks into the pruse to find it, but cant.. tara sees and picks it up.. Devika sees her and snatches it saying that she was looking for it and leaves…

Chamki goes to kuvar and says that he has changed, and now that his work his done, he left her… kunvar gets annoyed and asks her that he doesn't have anything to do with her.. She replies that but he is realted to her kid.. He gets confused… she replies that she is pregnant with his kid…

There Brijesh comes home and asks tara if everyone ate, she replies hat only they both are left, she adds that she saw something unusal with devika today, brijesh questions her, she replies that she saw something in Gold, which looked like some kind of ancient seal. Brijesh shows her a picture (an old pcture, where an old guy is at the table, and the seal is in front of it).. Tara says that yes, this is the same seal.. Brijesh gets confused as to why will devika or chandini who ever she is, need the seal? And that too the seal which was lost a long time ago…

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Posted: 18 years ago
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April 30-
Brijesh's room:

Continuation from yesterdays scene…

Brijesh tells Tara that the Mohar she saw with Devika is their khandaan ka "Shahi Mohar", and when he was very young they lost it. And no1 could trace it from that day. And Brijesh wonders how that Mohar into Devika's hands. He says that it's more important now to know the purpose, why Devika came to their house.




Devika at the mystery man's place:


Devika goes to the mystery man's place. It's like a big ashram. She meets a boy there, who greets her happily. She gives him a chocolate; n enquires him where Baba is. He informs her that he is in pooja.

Baba is doing Shivji ka pooja… As he finishes, Devika comes there… He is happy to see Devika there. He asks her to go to his room and wait.

Baba comes there and asks Devika to show the Mohar… She takes it out from her bag and shows. His face lit up with happiness… he takes out a small star from his pocket, tries to fit in Mohar's groove. It fits perfectly…he is overjoyed. He tells Devika that since how long he is waiting for that. And he thanks her… He then tells her what she has to do after this. Devika agrees n leaves the place.

(the actor who is playing Baba, I saw him many serials n movies as villain, but I donno his name. So, it's an imp character then..)




Kunjan's place:


Chamki is cleaning the house. Seeing Kunjan coming into the room, she acts as if she is very sick. Kunjan is concerned n asks her what's wrong. She tells him that because of Pregnancy she is feeling very drowsy n sick… He advises her to go to the Doctor… But Chamki asks him to take her to the Doctor, to, which he agrees… (bechara)



Narpats house:

Saloni is back at home from the hospital. And she is sitting with Gayathry. Shubra comes there to see Saloni. They both ask Gayathry buva, that what name they have chosen for their daughter. Gayathry tells them that they both decided the name "Garima".

Sal excitedly informs them that's it's a gr8 name, and herself n Nahar wanted to name their daughter with the same name. Immediately she gets sad, after realizing the situation in which they are now.

Gayathry n Shubra too feel very bad..


At the Hospital's entrance:


Neel gets down from the car; n takes out Yug's photograph from his pocket, and shows it to the watchman there and asks him whether he has seen the person anywhere in the hospital. Watchman recognizes Yug…n tells him that he has seen him in the hospital..

Neel tries to get more info from him…but he says he doesn't know anything about him, except that he comes to the hospital 2 or 3 times in a week.

Neel then calls someone, and asks him/her to keep an eye on Yug, when he comes to the hospital next.


Kunjan's house:


Everybody is at the dining table having dinner. Kunjan is not able to eat properly, seeing this, Shubra asks him what's wrong and why he is not eating well.

Chamki, then acts as if she is about to vomit. Shubra asks Chamki what's wrong with her… She says stomach upset, but Shubra doesn't believe that.. Chamki then tells her that she is pregnant.

Shubra then asks Kunjan to call Chamki's husband and inform her about his wife's pregnancy… Kunjan feels very uncomfortable to that, yet he goes n picks up the phone. Chamiki then stops him hurriedly then informs Shubra that she cant inform about this to her husband as this kid is not her hubby's… n also informs her that Kunjan is the father of her child.

Shubra gets shocked… She goes n questions Kunjan… He keeps quiet… and doesn't answer her question… Shubra gets mad at him, n about to slap him, but Padma thakurai comes there n holds her hand.. and tells her that Shubra doesn't have any guts to raise her hand on her son. He after all accepted somebody else's son as his own…n Chamki is having his child… So, she will stay in their house only and raises her son there. She also tells Shubra that, if she has any problem with Chamki staying there at the house, then she along with her son can leave the house and go.

Shubra is very angry… she picks up her son and leaves the house.




Brijesh's house:


Devika returns home from Baba's place… she goes into her bedroom and hides the Mohar in a drawer in her cupboard, n locks it… A servant comes inside the room and informs her that Brijesh wants to meet her.

Devika goes to meet Brijesh…

Brijesh asks Devika about Shahi Mohar, and asks her where it is, n how she has it.

Devika says she doesn't know anything about what he is talking…

Tara then reminds her the incident when she bumped into Devika while she is coming down from the steps…n how she snatched the Mohar from her hands and left.

Still Devika denies…

Brijesh then tells her that he will search her room now and then..

She is worried, yet hides it, and tells him that he can search her room if he wants to.

All three of them go to her room.. Tara n Brijesh start searching her room.

The keys to that drawer were lying on the bed… Devika slowly hides the keys under her a dress that is on the bed.

Brijesh searching all the cupboards, n he finally tries to open the drawer in which Devika hid the Mohar. He finds it locked, n asks Devika for the keys. She says she doesn't know where the keys are.

But then… Tara starts searching the bed, n finally finds the keys..

Brijesh inserts the key into the key-hole, and about to open the drawer… Devika's face is fully worried expression…


Tomrrow:


Bhabbo , Saloni along with Shubra are at the temple, they all will be thinking about how to solve the problem with Devika… Shubra then tells them that she can help them in this.. and she has a plan too…

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Posted: 18 years ago
#24
May 1-

Brijesh is looking into the drawer, but he cudnt find anything, Tara also helps him, devika is tense and nervous…but they cannot find the Mohar. Brijesh asks her again where is the mohar?(how can u find the mohar lalluram?director ne hide ki hai, they are wasting our time also and urs also by dragging) Devika denies it . Brijesh and Tara leaves the room angrily. Devika goes and check the drawer, but to her surprise the Mohar is not ther, she asks herself where the Mohar has gone? ( it has gone to reserve bank of india, you cannot keep tht)



Narpat's house:-

All are sitting in hall when shubra enters with her son, she is crying. Her mother comes closer to her and ask her what happen?( arre meri laddo aaa gayi tu rone ke liye? aansoo please) Saloni also comes and she takes her in her room and ask shubra the reason. Shubra tells her

(teri taqdeer mein ronaa hi likha hai chipkali)



Baba is getting angry with Devika on phone saying that you have wasted my life's saving and tells her to get the Mohar at any cost.(arre lagta hai tum kissi nautanki mein kaam karte ho, dress aisi pahni hai, yah ravan ke gharane se ho?) Devika promises him,( ek aur chudail aa gayi hai, can someone tell me how many more chudails will come in future?) suddenly Neel comes in her room smiling cunningly ( aao Mr.Besharm,namak haram) and he takes out the mohar and shows to her and tells this is what you are looking for?Devika says it is not good to take the things in someone's absence. Neel tells her that you have come in this house with bigger mission(maqsad)( haan Mr.James bond ke chele) than Nahar, you want to marry Nahar but there is more than that also. Devika replies that we were not supposed to ask the questions, I hope you remember that, you don't know me so please don't mess with me. Neel tells her than i will go and ask from Brijesh about the mohar and he starts moving out, Devika gets panic. She says that i will tell you everything. Why you want to know everything? Neel:- i am not interested about your maqsad or mission as long as it doesnt come in my way.( yaar you are coming in our way, ghar jaao aur bhelpuri khaao)



Hall:-

Brijesh , Tara and Bhabho are standing and Bhabho tells Brijesh that this Mohar is important to us as it belongs to the ancestors. Brijesh says that why Devika has come in this house? and what she wants?.



Devika's room:-

Devika:- this is my maqsad and i will help you, if we are together. She smiles at him and they both shakes hands.Now give me the mohar Neel. But Neel says to her, no i cannot give you the mohar now cos your maqsad will come in my way in future. Devika gets furious, but she cannot do anything.(arre jamoore you are both comin in Nahar banna and saloni's way)

Narpat's House:-

Kaveri taunts shubra that this house should not be called Narpat's house but it should called be ashram as everybody comes here and stay. She goes from there( oh chudail number 1, you are also stayin in ashram thn, i will send you to sahara desert). Saloni tells Shubra that dont listen to her, she is like that.You should not keep quite, but fight for your rights. Shubra says how can i fight? he has relation with her maid and she is pregnant and didi can i ask you something? you have left Nahar, why you are not figthing for your rights?.(wah shubra baby

kya baat kahi hai, isko kahte hain nahle pe dahla)

Baba's house:-

Baba is getting angry with Devika and tells her that you have to find the shahi mohar at any cost and i cannot tolerate nonsense, go and get the mohar from that guy(Neel).(babaji, pakode khaaoge? Boil pakode...itna nahi chilaao jee, mera dil kamzor hai)



Narpat's house:-

All are sitting in the hall, saloni is playing with Piyush, Neel comes and ask Bua sa to sign some papers, she asks him what are these papers about?Neel says that he has got the admission in sarvodaya school for Bua sa's child, she says that school is very expensive, Neel replies that i had got the admission for Piyush, shubra and everyone looks at him. He stares at her.(Abhi paida hi nahi hua hai aur school mein admission, arre yaar yeh kya ho raha hai?story writer ne sharab pee kar story likhi hai...pls yaar neel get admission for my son also..i am gng to marry after two years)...



Kunjan's house:-

Chamki is sitting on sofa and eating , Thakurayen comes (aao chudail number 2, lagta hai ur from manthra's family?rem ramayan?) and says to her that im very happy that you have done the wonderful job by throwing Shubra out of this house. She gives her some money and tell her to go away. Chamki replies how can i go now Thakurayen? i dont want money, im carrying tha baby of your son and i wont go now from this house.( wah chamki, tum toh chamak gayi, washing powder se)

Thakurayen:-Take the money and leave the house, your work is over now, you are blackmailing me?( get the dollars from her,blackmail aur tumko, tum ho hi black ander se mrs.champu bai...tujhe dekha toh yeh jaana thakurayen..chudail hoti hai kaisi thakurayen...)

Chamki:- I will not go now, very soon i will be the owner of this house, if you stop me then my tongue can slip, you will be in problem thakurayen, dont think about throwing me out of this house.

Thakurayen:- Hey Bhagwaan, maine to apne jaal mein phans gayi( im trapped in my own web now).(Haan tum toh gayi, now go and sell vegetables, bhindi paanch rupaiye kilo, isko kahte hain nahle pe dahla..),



Temple:- Saloni, Bhabho, Tara and Shubra are sitting and thinking, Saloni says to Bhabho that we have to find the truth of Devika. Bhabho tells how can we find?Saloni and Tara also say how, Shubra tells to saloni that she can help her in some way at least give me a chance, you have done so much for me, now it is my turn.just leave it to me.



Shubra is holding Piyush and fighting with a guy in front of Devika's house, her aunt comes out and ask her whats the matter and why he is fighting with you?, The guy tells her to mind her business as this is between husband and wife, but she tells him to go from ther and brings shubra in her house. Shubra is in the hall and looking at the house, a old man comes with devika's aunt, she tells him about Shubra's problem. Shubra says that she wants the shelter, she willl do any work,as her husband is an alcholic and beats her . The old man says to her that we are looking for a maid, can you do that job?Shubra agrees saying that atleast her husband wont come in the house(haan abh yehi kaam rah gaya hai tumhare liye, mere ghar mein ek kaamwaali bai chahiye, bolo gangu bai?). At night Shubra go aroung the house looking for the mohar, but she cudnt find the mohar. Suddenly she sees a picture and stunned and ask herself how this picture is here?.(Shubra u will get the offer from james bond movie, and u will get oscar award for spying)



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Posted: 18 years ago
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May 2-
At the temple:



Shubra comes to temple with the photograph she found in Aruna's house. She will meet Tara, Bhabbo n Saloni. She shows the photograph to them. Saloni, looks at the photograph n says, "this is Devika's photo…what can it prove?"

Shubra asks Sal to look at the ring Devika wearing in the picture... ( I dint understand this logic…)

Sal then recollects and tells everybody that Nahar has given the same type of ring to her. Then she says that the person in the photograph must b Chandini since she too is wearing the same ring… Shubra tells them that the photo too looks old…

Meanwhile the photo frame falls down, n glass breaks.

Saloni picks up …notices that the white boarder on the photograph is missing on one side.. She opens the frame, n takes out the photo…to her utter surprise she finds that picture is folded in half…n kept in the frame in such a way that only Chandini is shown. In fact, the picture is of both Chandini n Devika standing side by side, n folded into half..

Everybody is surprised at this revelation.

Saloni then asks everybody to be more careful reg Devika… She says Devika definitely came to the house with a big goal… She asks Tara n Bhabbo to find the phone numbers to which she calls often. Shubra tells that she too will find the phone number list from Aruna's house.

They all leave!


Neels room:



Devika comes into Neels room…n requests him to give the mohar back. For which he refuses. Devika then tells him that she can give any amount of money, if he gives her back the Mohar.

Neel then tells her that…since the mohar is very important to her, he won't return it to her, until his mission is accomplished. He tells Devika that she needs to win everybody's trust in the family..n stay in the house till that time. Devika is helpless.. Now she has to follow what Neel told her…


Aruna'a house:



Shubra goes back to Aruna's house n searchs for the telephone bill with phone numbers, which she has seen the previous day… She finds it finally. Aruna comes there just then…asks Shubra where she had been. Shubra then tells her that she had gone to meet her husband…n he has come there to take her back. Aruna lets her go, after warning her hubby to take proper care of Shubra.

Shubra n Preetam come out of the house, happily… they both will be laughing at their accomplishment.. Shubra compliments Preetam that he is a very good actor… Preetam is in fact her classmate in the college…

Kunjan sees Shubra n Preetam together… n watches them talking to each other n laughing… he gets angry n goes away from there.


Brijesh's house:



Devika is sitting in the hall, worried, n her cell is lying beside her.… Bhabbo comes there, sees that n gets an idea .. … She calls Tara n asks her to go into the kitchen n ask the cook to make some coffee for her, as she is having headache... Devika tells Bhabbo that she will go and make coffee for her. After she leaves, both Babbho n Tara check her cell n finds that she called a person called Baba very often. They note down the number..



Bhabbo n Tara meet Saloni n Shubra at a garden. They give her Baba's telephone number… and they find thru the telephone bill Shubra got, many calls are made to the same person, from Aruna's house too,.

Shubra calls up the telephone department, and gets the address… ( I missed the place's name)

They wonder who this Baba n how he knows everything about their house and people… they all are worried thinking what can be the motive for all this…


Kunjan's house:

Kunjan storms into the house angrily… His mother asks him what's the matter. He then tells her that, she was always right about Shubra, and she really is characterless… n he tells her that he saw Shubra with Preetam…

Padma thakurayan is very happy… Kunjan then tells her that he will never allow Shubra to enter the house anymore… n goes away from there.

Chamki comes and touches thakurayan's feet.. She tells her that soon she will be the bahu of the house… and she has to get used to her!

Padma is very irritated n worried about Chamki…


Saloni waiting…



Saloni is waiting on the road; Bhabbo comes there and picks her up. They both are going to the address they got from the telephone company… Bhabbo n Saloni decide that they have to be very careful from then on, and decide that no1 should know about their mission, especially Devika.

Saloni, asks Bhabbo to proceed to the temple and wait for her, as she has to go somewhere n attend to an important work..… She tells Bhabbo that she will join her at the temple as soon as she finishes her work…

Edited by snmirza - 18 years ago
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May 3-
Neel is on the phone with someone and says that Yug shouldn't come in frot of anyone, otherwise his plan will fail… and asks the person to find Yug… he leaves the room.. Devika listens to all of this and understands that Yug is neel's weakness and thus, she needs to catch hold of Yug in order to make neel fail…

Bhabho and saloni reach a place, bhabho wonders if it's the right address.. Saloni says yes, they walk in the gate and see a lock there… they look disappointed.. They walk out.. They ask a man coming outside about the baba.. The man says that baba was at home, but… and e sees baba sitting in a car… saloni and bhabo spot him and follow him in their car… baba reaches a temple… he gets out with a kalash in his hand, bows down and walks up the temple.. Saloni and bhabo reach there… baba goes in the temple and begins praying.. Saloni and bhabo climb u pthe stairs.. They see him doing the pooja… baba turns around… bhabo is utterly shocked to see him.. Baba doesn't see them yet, he bows in front of the idol and shuts his eyes….. Bhabo says that this is padam singh.. The guy who killed her husband and the guy who nahar's dad sent to jail for the murder.. Bhabo adds that she remembers that padam sngh had two daughters (twin), named chandini and devika.. And now devika is taking revenge by her father's help… bhabo yells - padam singh… baba opens his eyes and is shocked and scared to see her and drops the kalash… bhabo goes to him and slaps him… she looks at him angrily.. Saloni witnesses all of this…

There devika reaches some place where its dark .. Looks like a very old place.. She comes there with a torch.. She looks around.. Goes down the stairs.. There is a shiv idol there.. With a cow's head on top of it.. She says that yes, this is the place - share dhara.. She puts her hand in the cow's mount as removes a hollow cylindrical pipe (where the kings used to keep letters) she open the pipe and removes a piece on cloth and reads it.. She gets excited and says - finally, the thing she wanted for the last so many years, she finally has it.. And now she'll take the mohar from neel and then baba's dream will come true… she decides to call baba and tell him.. She calls his phone, but no one answers.. She wonders whats going on.. And thinks that first she should take the mohar and then go to baba,, but for that, she will first need to find Yug…

Devika looks for ishant in the living room, but aditi's hubby says that ishant has gone to school, but she can remember him sometimes… davika questions about aditi, he replies that aditi is sleeping, she keeps sleeping all day.. Devika sits on the sofa and says their family is so nice, they accepted an outsider, but a few people don't care about this… devika says that saloni left his house, she didn't even care about this house… and then questions as to why did saloni leave?? Aditi's husband says that its b/c of a third person, and tells her that a guy named Yug, who is completely hopeless, came between them, saloni and him were friends, and nahar didn't like that… devika questions him about Yug.. Aditi's hubby says that he has a CD and shows him Yug's performance at the party…

There saloni's family has lunch.. Sameer asks about saloni, shubra says that she has gone to bekaneer.. Sameer questions as to why?? Bua and shubra get worried.. Bua asks shubra to get food from the ktichen.. Kaveri says that she too wanted to go to Bekaneer, but saloni went with Bhabho, so she couldn't go, wondering who else might have gone with her from nahar's house… sameer gets mad… he questions everyone that why didn't no one tell him, and why didn't they stop saloni… as there is no need to help nahar's family.. If nahar has broken relationships with saloni, then why go help them??? Neel comes there… sameer tells him about saloni.. Neel says that if saloni doesn't listen to the, she wont listen to him either… shubra asks them to not intefere in saloni's matters… kaveri asks her to not talk, as if she cant handle her family, she should not speak in saloni's issues if she doesn't know anything… sameer says that there is only one solution - second marriage… bua says that saloni will not agree.. Kaveri says that this is the best option.. Neel gets happy..

Saloni and bhabo are in the car, saloni says that they need to play a game and expose devika, but they cant do that tomorrow, since its Ghanghol (a festival) and they cant do anything mean like this… bhabo agrees and says that nothing wrong should happen in the festival.. Saloni says that devika will be exposed the day after…

There kaveri goes to nahar's house.. Aditi's husband comes there and says and welcomes here… nahar doesn't bother.. Kaveri says that she went to the temple and thought she'll stop by here.. Aditi's hubby laughs and says that those were two shocking statements, 1. She visited a temple, and 2. She came to vist them.. Kaveri says that she had to, since now things between saloni and nahar are solved.. Nahar gets annoyed.. Kaveri adds that this is the reason that saloni went with bhabo to get the Ghagol at bekaneer.. Nahar gets shocked..

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May 6-

Kaveri says that she is happy that saloni and nahar are back together.. Nahar calls tara.. Tara comes down and questions him.. Nahar asks about bhabo, tara hesitates and says that she had mentioned that bhabho has gone to beekaneer to get Ghaghor.. Nahar asks who has she gone with? Tara falls silent, but then says - saloni.. Nahar gets furious that why wasn't he told?? Kaveri says that she is sorry and didn't want to create a scene, she leaves.. Tara looks at her angrily… nahar yells that why are things hidden from him? Bhabho enters then.. Nahar asks her that why wasn't he told that she went with saloni, bhabo says that she went with saloni not an enemy, nahar gets irritated and says that saloni played with his feelings.. Bhabho says that saloni is her daughter too.. Nahar asks her to belive him, and asks her to be away from saloni, as he has lost a lot due to saloni and doesn't want to loose her (bhabho) too.. Nahar walks away..

There everyone are seated in the living room.. Slaoni enters.. Sameer says that he is happy that she is back.. Sameer addst aht they all wanted to talk to them.. Salni says that she knows what he wants to talk, but her answer wont change.. Everyone feel sad.. Saloni walks away.. Neel gets furious and goes into his room and thinks that why does saloni always help nahar,, and he needs to do something… just then he gets a call from a man, and is happy to know that Yug has been found at the city hospital and asks him to take Yug to the C sector bungalow.. Devika hears all this standing outside the room..

She reaches the hospital, and sees yug in the doctor's cabin.. Yug comes out.. A man comes there, and tells yug that he knows him.. Yug says that he doesn't know himself, as he has lost his memory.. The man tells Yug that he is his neighbor and can take him home.. Yug gets happy that takes him from there.. Two other men follow them.. Devika sees this and meets them on their way out, dressed up as a doctor and tells Yug that its time for his check up… yug says that he didn't know about the check up.. Devika answers that the doctor must have forgotten… she takes him in for the check up.. The three men wait outside.. After a while, the main guy goes in the room, but finds no one there… outside, devika drags Yug.. Yug questions her as to who she is? And where is she taking him?? Devika says that those people want to kill him, but she will help him out and she knows a guy who knows everything about him… Yug says that yes, he met a guy once who identified him, but that guy was angry at him… just then he sees nahar in a car.. Yug runs after the car, devika runs after him… Nahar leaves.. Yug gets upset…

Neel screams at the guys on the phone for not getting Yug.. Just hten devika comes and tells him that Yug is with her… she shows him a pic of Yug stranggled to a chair.. Neel gets shocked.. Neel says that he knows that she wont do anything for free.. So what does he need to do? Devika asks him for the shahi mahor, otherwise she will take Yug to nahar and saloni and asks him to come to the kali mandir at 11.. Otherwise, she will go to nahar and saloni…

The next day, all the men eat.. Devika asks tara, about why arent they eating… tara says that did she forget? Its Ghaghor today and they have kept a fast and asks if she didn't keep a fast? Bhabho teases her that she must have kept a fast, since devika is a lot into poojas… devika says that she did keep a fast.. Bhabho and tara laugh at each other… devika leaves the room and calls neel saying that she will be there soon… tara comes there and ask sher to sit in the pooja.. Devika says that she has to go to the old people shelter to check on her donation, tara asks her to do it later as the pooja need to be done now… just then woman come home, with covering their faces with duppata… camera focuses on one lady who walks in (its saloni) neel waits for devika, while the pooja starts… all woman sit in a row.. Devika gets impatient.. Neel gets annoyed.. Woman start the pooja… two woman at a time, go to do the pooja.. Neel calls up devika.. Devika cuts the phone.. Neel gets angry and calls her again… devika gets up, aditi stops her and asks her to come and put the tikka on the wall.. Tara wonders where she kept the thread.. Saloni (with her face covered) gives it to tara.. Tara says - thanks.. Saloni says that she doesn't want her 'thanks' but she wants her (tara) to support her… tara realizes that its saloni and smiles.. Saloni takes the duppatta off.. But covers back quickly.. Tara cries and says that she didn't know a day would come when the bride of this house would have to come so secretly.. Saloni says that its ok… its just a phase…

At saloni's house, everyone wonder where saloni is… kaveri taunts that saloni must have gone to nahar's house… sameer gets angry…

Preview: Saloni tells neel that chandini and devika are twins…

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May 7-
Ganghor pooja at Brijesh's house:


All the ladies are doing the pooja to the Goddess. One lady suddenly behaves as if Goddess came on to her…some ladies come and ask some questions.

She points Devika and tells her that, the time has come for her to get punished for all the things…n that will happen in next 24 hours…

Devika is terrified to listen to this… The lady also says that her twin sister too tried her best to destroy the house…now Devika is trying for that..

Devika is shocked…she wonders how that lady knows about her sister..


Nahar enters the hall just then… He starts shouting at everybody, for believing in these kind of things… n he drags Devika away, n asks her why she was standing there and listening to all that…

Devika tells him that, she was too shocked to respond…

Pooja is going on… Sal is praying goddess to help her in her mission…

Yug is tied to a chair… in his sleep he sees all the past images. He gets up…n wonders why that lady (Devika) tied him like that… He tries to get free.. n finally he succeeds



Kaveri calls Nahar and congratulates him for getting united with his wife… He informs nothing that sort happened. Kaveri then informs him about Sal being in their house at that moment…n doing Ghanghor pooja… He is not able to believe, n rushes to the hall.

Pooja is finished… all the ladies are leaving. Saloni too is about to leave; she bumps into Nahar who is coming into the room just at that time… Saloni's pooja thali falls down from her hands. She bends down n starts picking up the flowers. Nahar sees the ring on her fingers n recognizes her.

Nahar asks Sal to open the ghoonghat n show her face. Tara tries to stop him… But, Nahar himself opens the ghoonghat n sees Saloni there… He asks her why she is not letting him leave peacefully…why she is doing this to him…

Sal requests him to listen to her what she is about say… She tells him that he can do anything he wants, after listening to her..



Devika at the temple:


Devika goes to the temple to meet Neel. Neel asks her where Yug is. Devika takes her to the place where she has hidden Yug.

But they find Yug is missing… Yug is hiding in the house n trying to know who these people are.

Neel accuses Devika that she is playing games with him… If Yug reaches Nahar n Sal, she too will face problems. But, Devika tells him that she really doesn't know where and how Yug escaped… they both blame each other..

Yug listens to all this…



Narpat's house:


Samar is very angry and starts shouting at his parents for letting Sal go. He starts blaming Nahar and his Parivar… n he is angry that Sal is ignoring her family's orders, and going to the place… he feels that she is insulting him n the family by doing that.

Sal comes back…and scolds Samar for talking like that to her parents. He then accuses her for his behavior.. he tells her that because of her deeds he is talking like that with his parents. And he curses Nahar's family…

Sal gets very angry n informs him that she cant here anything against her family…she doesn't like anybody talking bad about it…

Yug:


Yug goes to Nahars house… and he wants to tell all the truth to Nahar… Just then a car comes…


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#29
May 8-
Yug is waiting outside when he sees the car coming, he hides and Neel and Devika comes out of the car. Devika says to Neel that (aaj ka din Manhoos raha) today was very unlucky day, it seems watever that woman had said is coming out true.(Haan Dhanno, tum ho hi manhoos, ismein koi doubt nahi hai, jahan jaati ho, wahan satyanaas karti ho) .Neel says to her tht i dont knw abt u, but if Yug reaches to Nahar's house then my whole plan will be wasted.(Tum toh ho hi gaddhar, bhed ki khaal mein bhediya, saloni ne saanp ko doodh pilaaya hai).Devika tells that you support me and i will support you..and they leave from ther..Yug says to himself that until Nahar comes i have to hide from Neel and Devika.(sahi kaha, nahi toh bali ka bakraa banegaa lallu)..

Saloni's room:-

Saloni is in tears nad Buasa consoles her, that u shud not cry and watever ur doing, u shud not worry abt the ppl and dont feel bad abt Samar watever he told you.You do what is right.(arre wah buasa tum ko toh preacher hona chahiye tha)

Dining Hall:-

Bhabho asks Brijesh tht you know Padam-singh, he used to work with us?..Brijesh replies,''What happen to him?..Bhabho:-He is killed and his photo is ther in today's newspaper..she shows the paper to Brijesh, hearing this news Devika is shocked (tu toh gayi abh, tera kya hoga basanti, arre karele ka juice pee le..) and all others are stunned. Bhabho looks at Tara. Devika goes in her room and locks and then she calls Padam singh on his fone, but the maid answers, Devika ask her where is he? She replies tht he has gone out and since last two days and i dont knw where..Devika is worried and she comes out.

Bhabho tells Brijesh that we can take the body of Padam singh and perform the last rites after all he worked with us.Brijesh gets angry and says i dont want to talk abt him and he is not worthy at all and i dont want to see his face also. Bhabho tells him to do something otherwise they will cremate his body as Lawaris..Brijesh then calls someone and enquire abt Padam singh's body and he is told tht no one has claimed his body so they are gng to cremate. Hearing this Devika gets up and start walking , Bhabho ask where you are going? She replies tht she has an urgent work and she has to go. Bhabho and Brijesh looks each other, Bhabho tells him tht we have to go now..Brijesh says lets go. Everybody leaves.(wah bhabho, aap toh Mrs. Karamchand ki bhi amma ho, Kya chaal chali hai,even James bond and perry mason are nothing in front of you)

Saloni's room:-

Tara calls Saloni tht everything is gng according to plan..and Devika has gone and we are also after her. Neel comes there..seeing him Saloni says tht Devika and Chandni are sisters and we are going to expose her, she tells him everything and leaves( Mrs.Karamchand jab ooperwaala akal baant raha tha tab tum chhanni (strainer) leke khadi thi shaayad, isliye you like to wear red saree and stand in front of bull, aa bhail mujhe maar)Neel gets restless and immediately calls Devika on her celfone, but she doesnt answer, Neel says to himself tht he has to go after Devika and stop her before she is exposed.

Cremation Ground:-

Devika reaches there and ask a man about Padam singh's body, he replies tht his body is there,it is not yet cremated. She comes closer and starts crying. Body is covered, she says"Baba, i have reach my destination and you cannot go like this, your daughter is here please get up. Bhabho, Brijesh, Tara,Dheer, Aditi, Saloni, and Neel are standing behind her and are shocked and stunned hearing this.

Devika is crying and shouting tht you have gone to chandni's place, im alone without you, you cannot go .(u also go champkali, we are tired of sseing you)..Suddenly the dead body moves (arre yeh zee horror show hai kya? yah ramsay ki film hai?), seeing this Devika is surprise, slowly it gets up and Nahar comes out, he has hatred in his eyes, seeing Nahar Devika is stunned.(haila, kya zabardast scene hai, taaliyaan pls, paisa wasool, lekin ticket toh humne liyaa nahi hai)

Nahar shouts at her, tum Chandni ho and because of you i lied to Bhabho and Tara whom i respect as my mother, why you did this to me?(tum ho hi is laayak akal ke kachche jo ho)youcame to me as orphan and i helped you, and wat you did with me in return. You are not a woman, you are disgrace in the name of woman tum aurat ke naam per kalank ho.(haila, kya bolta hai, yahan IF forum mein mostly ladies hain, chappal maarengi tumhein, bhagwaan ke liye aisa mat kaho, TRP kam ho jaayegi nahi toh) Devika gets angry and tell him ,bas enough, it was not me but it was Devika, who tried to kill Tara, it was Devika who tried to harm Tara not me.She was jealous of me, watever wrong she used to do, i was the one get scolded. (lo kar lo baat, ek nahi do do bore kerengi abh)

They are showing in flashback that Padam singh is sitting with Devika when Chandni comes ther and tells him tht she has got the prize in the school and gave the trophy to him, he is very happy and praises her tht you are good girl and im proud of you.He leaves from there. Seeing this Devaki get jealous and she snatches the trophy from Chandni and says tht this is mine.Chandni was good in studies and Devaki was arrogant and stubborn from childhood, whatever she wanted she used to get it. Chandni tells Nahar tht she was in love with him, hearing this Brijesh shouts at Nahar and tells him tht she is lying, if she loved you then why she was after me.(Arre, tum ho jo itne handsome yahan tumhare bahut se admirers hain) Chandni says that it was not me, but it was Devika, whatever she used to do, i had to pay for tht. They are showing in flashback again...A jeweller comes to Chandni and says that you came to my shop and bought a necklace yesterday, this is the bill and you have to pay now, Chandni replies that i had never bought any necklace and how is this possible,(Hello basanti apni sister ko bhool gayi kya? dabur chwanprash khaao, sab yaad aa jaayega) hearing this he gets angry and says that you had signed on this bill , he shows her, but Chandni denies that it is not her signature and i had never came to your shop. Jeweller hearing this tells her that i know how to tackle with you people. I will go to the police and then you'll pay me. Devika comes there, seeing her ther he is surprise to see twin sisters and seeing devika wearing her necklace, he says that's the necklace, so you came to my shop..Chandni goes to Devika and tells her that once again you used my name and cheated me. Devika comes closer to jeweller and slaps him and leaves from ther.(yeh achhi baat nahi hai rabriji, ek toh chori ooper se seena jori)

Chandni then tells Brijesh that it was Devika who was in love with you and thats the reason you were against the marriage of Nahar with me and you had refused. Brijesh and Nahar and all others are listening her story. Chandni then tells them that after marrying Nahar she went to her house and Devika is sitting on sofa seeing her chandni informs her that she has married with Nahar and she came to get her clothes Devika is surprised, seeing her chandni shows her the picture of Nahar, as Devika had not seen him. Chandni shows her album and tells Devika that this is the picture of Nahar, but Devika is amazed to see the picture of Brijesh, Chandni says that he is Brijesh brother of Nahar, isn't he handsome looking.?.(haay raam, tumhari toh donon per nazar hai..oh my god...)..Chandni goes inside to get her clothes. Devika is fuming in anger and says that i was going to be daughter-in-law of that house, but Chandni is ther now and i wanted to marry Brijesh..She is really upset.(abh tera kya hoga Dhanno?jogan bankar gaana gaao,..jogan ban jaaongi Nathu tore kaaran)

I hope you must have enjoyed it, waiting for ur replies, ur comments, ur suggestions as usual...aaj ki sabha yahin samapt hoti hai chatpatee masaledaar update ke saath next week hazir honge...God bless you.

Edited by snmirza - 18 years ago
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At cremation scene:


Chandini tells Nahar how Devika cheated her…

* flash back

Chandini is packing her bags. Devika comes there and tells her that, she wil send her sister to her sasural in grand style. Chandini refuses, saying that that's all not necessary, as Nahar is waiting for her. Devika then asks her to get freshened up. She asks Chandini to close her eyes n puts a beauty face mask on her face..…

Devika ties Chandini up to the chair…n she goes to Rajasthan with Nahar instead of her sister *

Chandini tells everybody that, Devika used to give her some injections to make her drowsy.. that's the reason she couldn't do anything at that time. C then tells Nahar how much she still loves him, n she always loved him…


Saloni, comes forward, n asks Chandini to stop creating stories, because she knows the reality about her. Chandini then gets angry n shouts at Saloni, n asks her what's that reality about her, which she knows.

Sal then asks Chandini to look at her back……. Chand sees Padam Singh getting down from the car with police, n he is hand cuffed. She is shocked to see her father there n in that situation.

Sal then informs everybody that Chand never really loved Nahar at any point of time. She came there with only one purpose, n that is the property.

Chand denies the allegation, n tells Nahar that she always loved Nahar a lot, n she still loves him.

Sal then asks Chand(C), if she really loves Nah so much, then why she stole the Shahi Mohar…

She is about to deny… but Sal says that she has all the proof required ..n she taped her conversation with her Baba…

Brijesh comes fwd n shows the video clip on his cell. C will b talking to her Baba n assuring him, that she will soon find Shahi Mohar… n she will see to it that Nahar n his family gets destroyed completely..

Bhabbo then tells Nahar that was the main intention of C to come back to their house.. n she says that for ppl like C n her father property is everything.

Nah gets shocked listening to all this, n everybody else too… Neel is surprised to know the entire story about C.

C then says, yes, she always hated Nahar n his family… Because of them her father had gone to jail for many years. She tells everybody how her father slogged working for Nahar's family.. she blames everyone that, yet her father was sent to jail on false allegations that he killed their father.

Bhabbo then informs C that her husband trused Padam singh a lot, yet he betrayed them by killing him.

Padam singh accuses that their father was addicted to drinking and gambling. That was the reason, Brijesh's dadaji written all the property to him..

Bhabbo denies this… n tells everyone that, in fact it is Padam Singh who is directly responsible for their father to get addicted to all the vices. She explains everyone, how he did that.

C refuses to believe this…she refuses to believe that her father can do something like that…

Bhabbo further explains, how he created problems between their dadaji n their father… n how cunningly he used the situation for his own benefit.

She also explains everybody that how Padam killed their father..


* flash back

Padam and their father are camping in the forest. They both are sitting near a bonfire. Padam gets their father completely drunk. P then carries their father into his own tent. Sprinkles alcohol all over the tent. Then he takes a candle n throws it on the ground… fire erupts immediately..*

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