Ratan-Diya-Yash _DESTINY FF (part7 updated on page 8)

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jaanulovejaanam

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Posted: 7 years ago

#24

Part 4

diya is busy in choosing dress for her to wear in engagement
Just then someone sees her and knocks the door .
diya sees him.
diya:data hukum aap?
Ratan:Kyu hum nahin aa sakte kya?
Ab is keliye bhi aaapki ijaazat leni padegi kya?
Diya :data hukum aap bhi na! Hum pehle hi itne pareshaan hain aur ek aap hain ki..
Ratan:bas! Hum samajh gaye! Apki pareshaan ki wajah hum hain na..hum Chale jaate hain...
He starts going in anger but diya holds his hand.
Diya:Humne aisa kab kaha?
Aap humare best frd hain naa?
Ratan:hmmm..koi shak?
Diya:to humari help kijiye pls hum aaj sagai par kya pehne?
Ratan: ohh! Bas Ittisi baat!
When data hukum is here, no need to confuse more!
Diya smiles..
Ratan chooses a bright heavy dress for her !
Ratan:ismein aap bilkul pari lagengi!
Diya:ye?? (She gets sad inside but doesn't show her sadness )
Bohot achchhi hai!! (She fakes smile )
ratan:ye hui naa baat! Hum humari diya ka neeche intezaar karenge!

He goes downstairs happily singing song
aaj mein upar a as main neeche!
aaj mein aage. ...zamana hai peechhe. .. and he in his own world hits yash banna and about to fall from stairs...
but yash holds him...
yash:data hukum aap theek to hain..?
He gets worried for him ..
yash:aapko lagi to nahin!
Ratan:nahin wo diya..
yash :diya?
Ratan :kuchh nahin!
Yash:aapko diya an kahan hai data hukum?
Abhi aap gir jaate!
Ratan:but give to nahin naa! Chill yash banna ! Chill!
He goes happily.
Yash :chill? ? Ye data hukum bhi naa!

Scene shifts to diya room .
she was wearing her dupatta .
Yash enters..
yash :ups sorry..
he turns his face closing his eyes..!
Diya :yash banna aap hum ready hain !
Aap andar aa sakte hain.
yash: ohh!
diabaisa wo
He was about to say something but gets stops and looks at her confused face and dress
Diya fake smile to him .
yash:kya hua? Aapki choice itni different kaise ho gayi ?
Diya gets sad and makes confused face!
Diya:hai naa.. Hume pata tha , Hum bilkul achchhe nahin lag rahe !

Yash: Humne aisa kab kaha dia baisa?
Aapjo bhi pehnenge, achchhi hi lagengi?

Diya:sachchi?She gets confused
yash :haan! But aap Itti tension mein kyun hain?
Diya thinks he can't tell yash about her plan
She feels sad .
yash:kahan kho gayi aap?
hum kuchh poochh rahe hain aap se?
Diya:wo kuchh nahin ..ye dress kaisi hai?
Yash thinks he should respect diya choice
Yash :aapko pasand nahin hai kya?
Diya:nahin wo..ye hume ratan ne di ..
unki pasand..to humari pasand..
yash smiles as he thinks diya is happy with ratan
Yash:aaj aap donon ka din hai !
Ratan sa ne giftki hai to achchhi hi hogi !
Diya :aap theek keh rahe hain
Yash :baisa hukum hum security check kar ke aate hain abhi ..
he starts going.
diya too moves backward and her dupatta get stuck in corner of bed
Auch!

she was about to fall backward and someone held her hand tightly .its yash.
he helps her to stand..
yash:baisa hukum aap ka dhyan kidhar hai? Abhi lag jaati apko?
Diya smiles:but lagi to nahin naa?
Yash :hmm chaliye ab aap taiyar ho jaiye
Diya thinks how much her bestie cares for her ...
diya:rukiye yash banna! Aap apni dost ko taiyar nahin karenge ?
Yash:hum?
Diya:uff..she tries to free her dupatta
yash sees it.
Yash helps her freeing her dupatta.
Both frees the dupatta together
Yash and diya :ho gaya(they both say it together!)

Edited by jaanulovejaanam - 7 years ago

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Jasmine

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Posted: 7 years ago

#25

sad that diya didnt like ratan's selection of dress.poor diya doesnt express it 4 not hurting ratan.but yash is so understanding that he realized that its not diya's choice.yash holding diya from falling n helping to remove the shawl was cute n romantic

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jaanulovejaanam

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Posted: 7 years ago

#26

part 5

diya takes her dupatta and stands confusedly.

yash adores her.

song plays..

Tum mere ho iss pal mere ho
Kal shayad ye alam naa rahe
Kuch aisa ho tum tum naa raho
Kuch aisa ho hum hum naa rahe

Yeh raaste alag ho jaaye
Chalte chalte hum kho jaaye

diya busy in selecting jewellery for her..

yash smiles thinking of diya ..

he remembers their moments spend together..

Main phir bhi tumko chahunga
Main phir bhi tumko chahunga

he remebers their friendship.

them solving each problem together.

Is chahat mein marr jaunga
Main phir bhi tumko chahunga
Meri jaan mein har khamoshi hain
Tere pyaar ke nagme gaunga

Main phir bhi tumko chahunga
Main phir bhi tumko chahunga
Is chahat mein mar jaunga
Main phir bhi tumko chahunga

she sees him lost.

diya:khan khogaye aap...yash banna?

yash:ji aapne kuchh kaha?

diya:hmm..humari madad kijiye jwellery chunne mein!

she shows him jewellery

yash smiles and says ok!

yash thinks she will like simple piece of jewellery which looks good on her

he chooses a necklace and says :ye lijiye ..aap ye peheniye ,ye aap pe khub jachega baisa hukum!

diya:mmm! manna padega aapki choice ko yash banna!

apne bilkul wahi necklace chuna jo hume pasand tha

yash:wo kehte hain na best frds ki choice bohot milti hai!

ab aap jaldi se taiyaar ho jaiye

hum neeche aapka wait karte hain!

he starts going..

diya holds his hand ..

Aise zaroori ho mujhko tum
Jaise hawa ye saanson ko
rukiye,ye necklace to pehna ke jayie,humara haath nahin pahunch raha!

yash comes and makes her wear necklace and sees her in mirror...

Aise talashun main tumko
Jaise ke pair zameeno ko
he remebers how she used to taunt him before if he will ever choose his girl to marry

Hasna yaa rona ho mujhe
Paagal sa dhoondhun main tumhe
yash:diya baisa !kitti ajeeb hai na ye zindagi!kabhi bhii palti maar leti hai,pata hi nahin chalta,!!

diya:mmm wo to hai! but aap itte emotional kyun ho gaye!

Kal mujhse mohabbat ho naa ho
Kal mujhko ijazat ho naa ho

yash:ab emotional hone ka bhi hak nahin hai kya hume,after all humare sabse achchhe dost ab parayi hone jaa rahi hai !

Tutte dil ke tukde lekar
Tere darr pe hi reh jaaunga

he gets a bit sad and tries to hide his love,

diya looks in his eyes through mirror and says :dont worry aapki dost itni jaldi aapka peechha nahin chhodne wali!

Main phir bhi tumko chahunga
Main phir bhi tumko chahunga
Is chahat mein mar jaunga
Main phir bhi tumko chahunga

and both smiles full of emotions.😊

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Jasmine

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Posted: 7 years ago

#27

yash choosing the necklace diya liked and making her wear it was romantic. poor yash is hiding his pain.their conversation was lovely. song selection was beautiful and pics too

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floral

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Posted: 7 years ago

#28

beautiful update dear

please do continue soon 😊

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jaanulovejaanam

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Posted: 7 years ago

#29

Part 6

After 1 hour of waiting, diya came downstairs
and yash keeps staring at her .
But yash was confused why diya didn't wear dress ratan choosed ?
But he knows she is looking more pretty in the dress she choosed to wear .
ratan gets shocked and angry a bit as she didn'twore the dress he choosed .
Diya was confused , how will ratan act as she didn' wear dress ratan choosed
Yash tries to make them chill
so he gets the lights off .All get shocked where light gone?
They try to go and check the light too one by one
suddenly voice came .
And all came in hall back.
lights flashed on diya and ratan
and on yash in center of stage.
yash sings song for both of them and ratan plays guitar for her.
hawayein song plays...
Diya thinks ratan is too good and she will never forget this gift of her besties yash and ratan ever...
Diya too dances on song bole chudiyan!
After some time, diya goes to ratan and asks her:aap hum se naraz hain data hukum?
Ratan: o pls diya,stop saying me data hukum ?
Diya :data hukum wo..
Ratan:stop it , I said
diya:but hua kya?
Ratan :kuchh nahin
and he leaves the party in between confusedly and goes outside the palace.
yash sees and runs behind data hukum to stop him.
yash :data hukum rukiye!
Ratan:hume thodi der ke liye Akela chhod dijiye..
Yash runs fast even more as data hukum kept running .
yash catches him finally .
Yash holds his hand
ratan:chhodiiye humara haath, yash banna!
Yash:data hukum aap kisse bhaag rahe hain?
Ratan :kisi se nahin!
Yash:aap apni zimmedariyon se kaise peechha mod sakte hain

ratan:hum kisi se muh nahin mod rahe but confused hain!
Yash :kya? Par kyun
aap aur diya baisa to ek dusre se pyaar karte hain na?
Ratan:nahin!
Ye pyaar vyaar sirf ek natak hai bas !
Yash:kya? Aapko andaaza bhi hai ki aap kya bol rahe hain ?
Ratan:ye hi Sach hai ! Diya aur mein just frds hain and ye sab natak hai dushman ko pakadneka

Edited by jaanulovejaanam - 7 years ago