OS: The Apology! PART 1

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi guys this is my first story and its just a try hope you like it. I thought about it and here it goes.
Ananya was forgiven by Kabir but she had a regret in her heart for insulting him in public and accusing him of unnecessary things. She knew Kabir would love her no matter what and his love was true and pure but she had begun to think that she didn't deserve Kabir. She realised that Kabir could get a much better girl than she was. The other day was Kabir's B'day and she wanted to break off wid him not because he was not good but because Ananya didn't deserve Kabir.

A day before kabir's bday.

Ananya was sitting in the cafeteria and was in her own thoughts. And then came a warm hand on her shoulder. She knew it was Kabir.

Kabir: Kya soch rahi ho?

Ananya: Nothing. Bas yu hi!

Kabir: Tumne jhooth bolna kab se seekh liya huh? Batayo kya hoa? Humari shaadi ke baare mein soch rahi ho!

Ananya(just smiled thinking he was perfect): Aap bade naughty ho rahe hain aaj kal? Aap ke paas zaada free time hai kya?

Kabir: Yes my darling aajkal hum apni jaan ke liye haazir ho jaate hai par kya hai na humari jaan ke paas humare liye time nahi hai.

Ananya: Ohoo. Jab mein yeh kehti thi toh aap humesha kaam ki ramayan japte rehte the. Accha kal aap mujhe Hotel Sona mein lina ek nayi lead mili hai.

Kabir: Ok as you say. Vese bahut unromantic ho gayi ho aajkal.

Ananya: Mera romance ka kota aap jo pure kar dete ho. Chalo bye! Mein kaam karne ja rahi hoon.

Kabir knew she was hiding something. He knew that his Ananya was upset about something.

Ananya was searching a file in her drawer than she saw her spectacles. Uff. they were kept for such a long time. She remembered how Kabir had removed them during the Baaghi case and how he gave it back to her. She was sad that she would no longer with Kabir after sometime. It was for Kabir's good. SHe wore her spectacles and went back to work.

It was evening and Kabir came out of his cabin searching for Ananya and then he saw his love working hard and his eyes went on her spectacles.

Kabir: Ananya aaj chashme mein! Aaaj toh mein mood mein hoon chalo masti karte hain!😆

He texted Ananya to come in his cabin immediately. Ananya got worried and hurried upstairs.

Kabir: Ananya mere head mein bahut pain ho raha hain plz kuch karo.

Ananya: Yeh kya ho gaya aapko ! Mein medicine laati hoon.
And started searching for his medicines. Kabir was smiling secretly seeing Ananya's concern for him and got up and went near her and grapped her by her waist.
Kabir: Tum pareshan hoye kitni khoobsurat lagti ho!

Ananya blushed and turned around .

Ananya: Kya aap bhi dara diya na!

Kabir: Mujhe tum chashme mein bilkul pasand nahi. I can't see ur eyes darling! Chalo I'll remove them For you.
And he gets close to Ananya and removes her spec using his lips just like the Baaghi scene.
ananya's face becomes red😳

Thanks for reading.

Plz do comment its my first time and tomatoes and chappals are welcomed. Sorry if you find it boring. Plz do tell if I should continue or not.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Me first to comment on your first OS...
Very well written... 👏
Please write more and do continue please ASAP..
can't wait to read next part..⭐️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome Job
Super rommantic
Brought back a lot of old memories 😊😊😊
I hope Ananya ko jaldi hi akkal aaye
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey...continue! Don't leave cliffhangers please...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#5
Awwwie ! That was cute ! Ananya --- can't you think straight for once dear ?!
Continue soon plz...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#6
Yes please continue... Par thora jaldi
It's good...please continue
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey Kavika Great Update
You should write more often .
Atleast yaahaan anu ke dimaag ki bati jalli

Continue soon .
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow yar the story is very very nice... u wrote really good👍🏼
waiting to read ahead & from now on plz PM me whenever you
write something as i have snt you the buddy request... & plz
continue sooner waiting to reah ahead...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow .. Spectacles are back .. Loved it !!!
Please continue if you are thinking of second part ...

And its nothing like first time , you are too good 👍🏼
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Kavika awesome yaar
M loving it..!!!

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