Kaya TS: lets make friends Last Part pg 5 - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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thank u so much.
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Originally posted by: sss97

Very nice

Do continue soon


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Originally posted by: mytinypaintings

Dying to see some interaction between Tarini and Ananya but looks like hoga nahi ...so your OS was like a breeze. Its refreshing and easy on mind. Thankyou for penning it down. Loved it and looking forward to the updates.


even i want their interaction badly so wrote this.
thank u for liking this.
will update soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey its so cute dear...
loved it...such a nice bonding...
not in show but tumhari TS main to Ananya-Tarini interaction mila...
continue soon...
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Awesome...
ROFLMAO... CACTUS???
I CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT UPDATE...
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Part 2
Ronnie and Ananya reached Kabir's home.
Tarini opened the door.
A: Hi Tarini, finally tumse milna ho hi gya. Kabir talks alot about you.
T: really?? Tum dono ko time mil jata h baatein krne ka? As far as i know tum dono bht zyada passionate ho so... 😉
A: Ai... aisa kuch bhi nahi hai.
T: mtlb you both are not passionate about your work. Mujhe lga most of the time tum long apni news ke barey me hi discuss krte rhtey hoge.
A: oh... about work.
T: tumne kya socha tha? (Making innocent face)
Ananya blushed hard and Tarini giggled at this.
A: achha leave it. Issey milo...
he is my best friend Ronnie.
T: hi Ronnie...( and she extends her hand and Ronnie get it immediately for a hand shake)
R: hi. Aap to apni photograph se bhi zyada pritty lagti h.
Suit and all. Full indian.
T: excuse me...
kuch zyada hi frank ni ho rhe aap.
Ananya hit him on his shoulder.
A: iska mtlb hai tum indian attire me bht achhi lg rhi ho.
haina??
R: ha...
haaan. Just a genuine compliment.
T: thanx for your GENUINE compliment. You know what jab koi mere sath flirting krne ka try krta h na tb mai usey achhe se mza chkhati hoon.
Aisey hi genuinely bata rhi hu. You know for information...
Ananya laughed at this.
A: ye tumhare liye Tarini( and handed her flowers and choclate box)
T: thank u so much dear.
R: ji maine suggest kiya tha ye lene ko.
T: apka bhi thank u. Ok
R: aap tum kahiye na...
afterall mai apke friend ki girlfriend ka friend hu.
At this Ananya whispered to him: zyada ho rha h. Ab bus kr.
R: bus kyo kru? Meri wali to wo le gye. Ab koi to chahiye na mujhe. Zindagi bhr sadhu banke thodi bathunga.
A: phir jab wo chapplo se maregi to mujhse mat kehna.
R: haan haan. Thik hai.
T: ye cactus kiske liye hai Ananya? Kabir ke liye.?
A: wow Tarini. You are really smart.
T: thank u...
A: Hamari khoob pategi.
T: pakka pategi.
R: maine smart bola hota to flirting pe lecture dene lgti aur ananya ne bola tb flirting nahi thi.
pr ananya kaise flirt kregi...
wo dono ladkiya h. Lgta h mera dimag khrab ho gya h.

Just then Kabir came.
K: hi Ronnie. Hi Ananya.
Ye flowers... mere liye??
A: nahi nahi. Apke liye to mai kuch bht khas layi hu.
K: Really... kya??
A: ye lijiye...( giving him cactus.)
Kabir was shocked and annoyed.
K: cactus. Ye layi ho tum mere liye.
A: aur ni to kya. Bilcul apki zaban se match krta h. Issey behtr kya hoga apke liye.
Kabir smiled, move close to her and whipers: mere liye jo gift best hai wo to mai le hi lunga bus ek bar in dono ko jaaney to do. Abhi to puri raat baki h.
Ananya blushed hard at his comment.
T & R: hum dono bhi hai. Thoda hamara bhi khyal kro. Live romance dekhney ki adat nhi h hamari.
K: to akhne band kr lo. Kisney mana kiya.
Ananya was shocked at this.
to avoid the topic she said: andr chaley ya yhi khadey rhna h sir.
and they settled themselves on Sofa.
A: kabir sir aap coffee piyenge?
Kabir who is aware that she can't even boil milk was shocked to hear this. But replied in positive: haan zaroor. Kyo nahi?
A: okk. Tho wo rha kitchen. Hum sbke liye bhi bna dijiyega.
and both Ronnie and Tarini bust into laughter hearing this.
Though kabir was happy to see his angel giving him orders yet pretends to be irritated.
K: what?
A: what nahi.coffee bnaiye.
T: kabir abhi se adat daal lo. Future mein kafi kuch jhelna h.
R: all the best sir.
Bhagwan bachaye apko.
k: ha ha thik hai. Bnata hu.
and he left.

A: so Tarini... kuch btao na apney baare me. Apni aur kabir ki frndship ke barey me.

T: kya btau?
Kha se start kru. Mai aur kabir ek saath kam krtey the phir hum bht achhe dost ban gye.sb kuch achha tha phir ...
A: phir kya??

T: phir shreya ne sb barbaad kr diya.

you know Ananya Mainey kabir ko toottey huye dekha h, bikhrtey huye dekha h.
Bhikhr kr phir uthtey huye bhi dekha h. But jeetey huye...
Jeetey huye ab dekhna shuru kiya h.
Ab kabir ne jeena shuru kiya h. Tumhare sath khush hona sikh rha h kabir.
mainey uskey chehre pr ye khushi pehle kabhi nahi dekhi. Wo khushi jo tumhara naam sunte hi uskey chehre pr aa jati h. Jaisey kisi bacche ne kisi angl ko dekh lia ho.
Hum sbney bht try kiya tha ki kabir khush rhe pr ye koshish sirf tumney sach kri h.
Ananya tum ye mat sochna ki mai tumhe koi salah de rhi hu ya tumhare pyaar pr shaq kar rhi hu. But plz Ananya...
Kabir ka sath mat chodna. Wo tumhare pyaar ke saath ek kya 10 shreya ko chutkiyo me sambhal lega. Bus tum apney pyaar aur apni care ko aisey hi EVERGREEN rakhna.
Tumhara trust uski sbse badi taqat hai and jaisa wo hamesha kehta h...
You are the SUNSHINE of his life.
be with him always. He loves you alot.


Trio had tears in their eyes.
Ananya thought in her mind: how can any one doubt their relation. How can someone dobt this pure soul.
Tears started falling from her eyes.
A: don't worry Tarini mai tumhare friend ka sath kabhi nahi chodungi. Kabhi bhi nahi. Agar wo chahengey to bhi nahi.
but one thing i should say now...
Kabir is very lucky to have a friend like you.
and They smiled a beautiful smile.


Dear friends sab jaag jao. Finish ho gya.
i know this part has very little kaya scenes but i want Tarini and Ananya conversation. So plz forgive me.

Precap:
Kaya romance!!


do tell me how was it.
Good or bad.
Edited by krazykaju - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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great!!!!!!!!!!! thanks for the pm !!!!!!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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It was aweosme
Better than the 1st part
I couldn't stop smiling !
Amazing
Update soon
And a longer update please
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Yes, the combo of Ananya and Tarini should be shown in the serial.
Lovely writeup.
Thanks for the pm!

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