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Ananya was sitting on stool in middle of ladies. She was wearing her lehenga and performing the ritual. Her mother applied turmeric paste on her face and then her other relatives. Her eyes were filled with tears and her mother consoled her.
Richa: "Is this the same paste which applied on Kabir Sir".
Ananya Mom: Yes Richa. It is a ritual that the bride will apply the haldi sent by his groom's family after applying on him.
Ananya: Did he actually apply it?
Richa: Yes darling otherwise you would not be able to apply it.
Ananya: I want to remove it as soon as possible.
Richa: He will do lot of things with you and you want to escape from his applied paste.
Ananya: Shut Up...I am not going to do anything with him.

Kabir was looking pale due to turmeric paste applied on his body. He looked at himself in the mirror and then his ring finger. He glowered and went to his bed. He logged into his Skype and attends the call from his brother.

Manav: Bro...You look so pale. Have you caught yellow fever?
Kabir: Yellow fever is even good. I caught up with worse than it. This paleness is to remind me that I am going to marry that Ananya Kashyap.
Manav: Soon-to be Ananya Kashyap Sharma.
Manav chuckled and Kabir frowned at him.
Manav: She is not a bad girl. I really like her.
Kabir: Why don't you marry her?
Manav: No Bro. I can't even think in this way for her. She is my Bhabhi and Bhabhi is like mother.
Kabir: Then she will be my mother too.
Manav: Bhai...I said that she is like my mother but not my mother. Your duty is to make her mother not to be his son.
Kabir: You are getting naughtier these days.
Manav: I learned it from you.
Kabir: When will you come?
Manav: Tonight. Before your bachelor party.
Kabir: Thank You...

Ananya was wearing green dress and some ladies were applying henna on her hands and feet. Then she observed a girl writing Kabir' on her hand.

*Statements in bracket() are inner thoughts of KaYa.

Ananya: Kya likh rahi ho?
Girl: Aapke pati ka nam likh rahi hu Didi. Kitna pyara nam hai Kabir'.
Ananya (in low voice): Pyara...My foot. Sadu hai pura.
Girl: Didi apne kuch kaha kya..?
Ananya: nahi Kuch bhi to nahi.
Girl: Di apne unme kya dekh kar haa kaha?
Ananya: Maine haa hi Ni ki, karwayi gayi...
Girl: Ji..
Ananya: I mean mai unhe dekh kar itni mesmerize ho gayi thi ki Mom ko mujhe answer dene ke liye bolna pada
(Mesmerize to see him...My foot. Mom forced me to say yes otherwise I will never marry that sadu. Pagal kahi ka)
Girl: Kya bat hai di. Aap to jiju ko ap aur unhe kar ke bat karte ho.
Ananya: Wo mere pati hai, bhagwan jaise hai, unhe izzat nahi dungi to kise dungi.
(ap aur unhe..And that's too to him. Never in my dreams. I am just adressing him with such respect because Mom has ordered me to do so.)
Girl: Didi Queen dekhi hai aap ne?
Ananya: Yes. It's a nice movie.
(Because I too want to go alone on my honeymoon.)
Girl: Ap bhi Kangana ki tarah ye pray kar rahi ho ki apki first night acche se ho jaye??
Ananya blushed fallaciously and think "Main to yeh pray kar rahi hu ki first night ko shakal hi na dekhu uski".

Then she received a call from Kabir and her cousin picked up the call.
Cousin: Hello Jiju...
Kabir: Why are you saying me Jiju..?
Cousin: No Jiju. I am Ananya Di's sister.
Kabir: Oh I am sorry. Where is your sister?
Cousin: You are getting so impatient Jiju. Do din me apke pas aa hi jayengi. Is every second getting heavy on you?
Kabir: That's so sweet. I have to talk something important to her.
(Impatient to meet her. No ways. Mat bhejo do dinbad rakh lo apne pas hi. I am feeling like my watch has become rocket).
Cousin: Jiju is missing you Didi
Ananya : Missing me???

Ananya: Boliye...
Kabir: Ap kon bol rahe ho?
Ananya: I am your to-be wife.
Kabir: Ohh...Ananya bhag gayi kya?
Ananya: I am Ananya.
Kabir: Really...Is your screw loosened?
Ananya: Why are you saying like this? I know you love me.
Kabir: Love you...Leave it. I think you are out of you mind now. Ok Tell me the name of you favorite flower.
Ananya: Are you going to gift it to me?
Kabir: Of course I do. I will gift you cactus plant.
Ananya: That's so romantic...
Kabir: Romantic...If you consider it romantic, then I will decorate my room with cactus plant.
Ananya: Ye kaisi baat kar rahe ho ap humari first night ke bare me. I am blushing.
Kabir: Have you turned nuts?
Ananya: Wait for a minute...
Kabir: Why will I wait for you? I dropped the idea of cactus decoration as I am going to share the same room with you. I will gift you seven cactus plants
Ananya: And I will bang those cactus plants on your head. I was nice with you because my cousins were constantly glaring at me.
Kabir: Thank God that you have not turned insane. I was so worried. So, which is your favorite flower?
Ananya: Red Rose
Kabir: Your personality doesn't match with your favorite flower. Rose signifies loving nature and you are most irritating girl of the world.
Ananya: Even your personality doesn't match jasmine. You are not so peace loving.
Kabir: I am hell irritated now. Don't increase my irritation further.
Ananya: Same here. Bye and I hat...I love you.
Kabir: I love you too.

Ananya and Kabir were astonished with each other's last sentence. Ananya went back to hall and then her cell phone buzzed. She checked her cell and read a message...

Kabir: Y dd u sy me ILU
Ananya: My csns hd cme thre bt y did u sy ILU2
Kabir: U r nt d one in d wrld who hv csns..
Ananya: Cn't u spk straightly?
Kabir: GTG. TTYL
Ananya: Fine Bye.

Ananya was watching the performances and dance by her cousins and other relatives. She smiled and then someone talked about her farewell which made her cry. She hugged her mother like a small baby. Her mother put her hands on her cheek and tried to calm her but she was not so strong to hold her own tears. Both mother and daughter embraced each other and cried for an hour. Finally, her mother wiped her tears and asked her to stop crying. Ananya smiled and then her cousins took her for a dance. She danced whole heartedly and went back to her room. Ananya was sitting on chair and adjusting her hairs in front of mirror. Then Richa peeped in her room. She greeted her with smile and Ananya did the same. She went near her and looked at her hands.

Richa: Heyy your mehandi turned dark. It means that Kabir Sir will love you a lot.
Ananya: He will love me...Oh C'mon Richa. We can't love each other.
Richa: Can you see Kabir Sir's name in henna on your hand?
Ananya: I am not interested in searching it.
Richa: Change your policies about him yar. He is going to be your husband in two days.
Ananya: I wish it could be a nightmare.
Richa: But it's not.
Ananya: Yaaa

Ananya looked at her henna and then at her engagement ring...
Ananya asked Richa if she could sleep as she was so tired. Richa nodded and left the room. On the other hand, Kabir was all set for his Bachelor party. He dressed himself in black Armani suit. Then he saw a figure behind him in a mirror. He turned to look the person and found his brother Manav there. Manav smiled and hugged him.

Manav: You are looking dashing as usual.
Kabir: I know...I always look handsome.
Manav: Do you know many girls are unhappy with your marriage? They were crying to know that you are getting married.
Kabir: Even I am crying to know that I am getting married.
Manav: Bhai ap bhi na. They were asking you to call them. Here's the list of 30 contacts. Call them and reply the mails of rest.
Kabir: Fine...Now, can we proceed to bachelor party?

Kabir and Manav entered the venue of bachelor party. Kabir was greeted by all his friends. They took the brothers to dance floor. After few minutes, a woman presented her item number on Subah hone na de from Desi Boyz. Kabir and Manav danced like desi boyz in movie desi boyz. Afterwards, Kabir was having vodka competition with his friends and then he felt a tap on his shoulder. He looked back and found his old girlfriend. She asked him to accompany her on dance floor and he agreed. Manav can't help himself with his naughtiness and he recorded the video of their dance and send it to Ananya. "Kal to Bhai gaya". He again observed them and found their dance little uncomfortable. He realized that his brother is out of his senses and the girl is getting cozier than she should be. He went near them and asked the lady to take him to home as they have to leave now and have to prepare for his wedding tomorrow. Manav drove to home and took him to his room. He made him lay on bed and departed to his room.

Next day, Ananya woke up by the sun rays refracted through glass window in her room. She checked her cell and saw the notification of video by Manav. She hit the download button and after waiting for minute, she watched the video of her to-be husband. She glowered and promised herself to teach him lesson on right time. She freshened up and went to her mother. She glanced at the decoration and saw her mother. Her eyes got little moist and smile spread across her face. She went to her mother and hugged her. Her mother asked her whether she liked the decoration and she replied in affirmative. Richa asked her to eat some food to which her mother replied that she can have fruits only till Kabir fed her in evening.
Ananya spend her time in eating fruits, cracking jokes and cursing Kabir. On the other hand Kabir's time was passed in calling his lovers, replying their mail and having commiseration of his marriage.

It's evening time now. Ananya has worn her bridal dress and girls were doing her makeup, hairs and jewelry.
In Kabir's house, Kabir was dressed up in his wedding attire. He was wearing an off-white sherwani with combination of maroon. Manav came in his room. He captured the selfie with his brother for informing about his brother marriage by posting it on his social networking accounts. He adjusted his jewelry and outfit and complimented him with smile. Then Manav took a look at his cell which was continuously beeping.
Manav: Bro! I got 50 likes and 30 comments in 5 minutes and that's too of girl. Incredible..
I am going to tell you comments.
Lisa: #Kabir OmG.!!! Kabir is lkng sxy as a groom.
Riya: #Kabir U ll brn us wih ur htnss Kbir..
Ruby: Ur rlly lcky #Ananya 4 hvng our handsm hunk #Kabir in your life. God blss u bth..
Nia: # U r mrryng sm1 else..I am so sad today..❤️

Kabir: I'll read it in night. I will not have other work to do that time.
Manav: Who will make me uncle then or Are you going to update about it on your social networking accounts?
Kabir: Don't crack double meaning jokes now.
Manav: Fine..Let's go to hall.

Kabir and Manav went downstairs to hall. Kabir sat on couch and his aunt performed some puja. Then, Manav performed the tradition of putting turban on groom head by his brother. Kabir and his family went at their entrance where Kabir's father handed him a sword and made him sit on the horse.
After an hour, Ananya could hear the sounds of crackers and some music. She didn't take a moment to realize that Kabir has come to take her with him. The girls present in her room went to balcony to take a look of their brother-in-law. Ananya closed her eyes and reclined on chair.

Ananya's mother welcomed Kabir on entrance. She applied tika on his temple in his honor and took him to mandap. He sat on his place and waited for Ananya to come. After few minutes, Ananya arrived in the company of her friends and cousins. She stood in front of him and looked at his face.

Kabir's Pov..
First time in my life, I must say that Ananya is beautiful. She is looking fabulous as a bride. The combination of golden and red is looking perfect on her skin. She is creating some spell bound on me. I am hypnotizing by her beauty. Kabir..Come in your senses. She is Ananya. How can you think so positive for her??

Ananya's Pov
OMG!! I can't believe that he can look handsome at this level. I am feeling my legs week and its getting tough for me to breath heavily. I am feeling something ticklish in my stomach. I never felt in such way for any boy in my life. What are you thinking Ananya? You are praising this sadu..You are really out of your mind.

Richa handed them garland. Ananya has to put the garland first. Kabir's friend pulling him back and it's getting tough for Ananya to put garland around his neck. Sudden a idea strikes her mind.
Ananya: Vo dekh kabootar
Kabir: Kaha???
And next moment, Kabir can feel flowers around his neck. Guests clapped and showered petals on them. Now, its time for Kabir and Ananya was playing the same game. Kabir knew that he has to think something different. He looked down and smiled.
Kabir: Cockroach ke pas cockroach a raha hai
Ananya: Cockroach...Where???
Ananya advanced towards Kabir and he took the advantage of opportunity. Ananya realized that Kabir has put garland around her neck and he was playing prank on her. Ananya and Kabir sat down on their places to process the ceremony further.
Kabir: You are looking Ok Ok...
Ananya: You are not even looking like hero.
Kabir: You are not Cinderella for whom I dressed like a Prince Charming.
Ananya: Have you read Frog and the Princess? I am princess and you are that frog. You will turn into a man when I'll kiss you and I am not going to do so.
Kabir: No, you got it wrong. I am prince of Snow Dwarf and seven Dwarfs who will help you in getting rid from the effect of rotten apple and the rotten apple is your mind.
Ananya: She ate poisonous apple, not any rotten apple. First of all, you should read the story.
Kabir: Haven't you studied in your primary education. Rotten apple is toxic in nature.
Ananya: I didn't come first from last too.
Kabir: You didn't top the journalism exam even.
Manav: You should focus on your wedding now. Keeps some conversation pending for night guys?

Ananya's mother performed the tradition of Kanyadan. She put Ananya's hand on Kabir's hand and performed further customs of Kanyadan. Ananya's eyes got wet when she saw the tears trickling from her mother's eyes. Her mother handed bundle of money to Kabir. He refused to take it but he took a coin of one rupee as her blessing. Ananya was impressed with him first time in her whole life. Her mother asked him to take care of her daughter and he assured.
It was the time to take seven bows with seven rounds of fire. Kabir was preceding her in first three rounds and after that Kabir took the rounds behind her. The priest asked them to join their hands and pray for their married life.

Kabir: "It's going to be tough for me to handle her but I'll try my best to make this marriage successful. Please give me lots and lots of energy to handle her".
Ananya: "I know this marriage is against my will but I don't want to ruin it. Please give me power to tolerate him".

Kabir and Ananya sat down at their place. Kabir lifted jewelry clinging on her forehead and filled the parting of her hair with vermillion. Ananya closed her eyes and Kabir looked at her. He picked a pendant with chain of black beads and placed it around her neck.
The priest announced that the marriage was completed and Kabir and Ananya were now husband and wife. They took blessings from their elders. They had dinner and Kabir made her eat a desert which was the last stage of her fast.

Kabir searched for his shoes and he was unable to find it. Manav come to him and asked him about his problem. He told him about his shoes and Manav helped him in searching it. Then, Manav observed a group of girls progressing to them.
Manav: Gaye aap ke shoes
Girls: Your shoes are safe with us Jiju and if you need them, you have to fulfill our demands.
Manav: What are your demands?
Girls: We need Rs. 25000/- cash.
Ananya: Why don't you ask for more? Do you know that your jiju get 25% hike in his salary last month.
Kabir: Your Di also got a hike of 25% in her salary. She can also fulfill your demand of money. Vaise bhi jo iska hai wo mera hai.
Ananya (in low voice): Kanjoos
Kabir: leave her. She is so kanjoos. Keep this money and please return me my shoes otherwise I have to go bare foot.
Girls: We are bringing your shoes Jiju.

Ananya was crying and hugging her mother tightly. Her mother is taking her to car. Richa handed her some rice. She threw it back to ensure the prosperity of her house. She hugged her mother, Richa and other relatives again.
Ananya: Mujhe nahi jana. I don't want to go with this man.
Ananya's Mom: What are you saying Ananya? He is your husband now and you have to take care of all his needs. Don't worry beta. We are living in same cities.

Kabir: Dad..She is crying a lot. Yahi chod ke chalte hai isey.
Kabir's dad: Kabir..!!!!

Richa made her sit in the garlanded car and Ananya's mother joined her hands in front of his family in purpose of request of taking care of her daughter. Manav and Kabir touched her feet.
Ananya's Mom: Please forgive us if we made some mistake.
Manav: No Aunty. Please don't do this. We are like your children.
Kabir: Yes Aunty. Manav is right.
Ananya's Mom: Kabir...Please take care of my daughter. Please forgive her on her mistakes. She is little juvenile. Please don't mind her mistakes and pardon her on her mistake thinking it as act of immaturity.
Kabir: Of course Aunty. I will take care of her.
Ananya's Mom: Thank you son. I'd love if you call me Mom.
Kabir: From now onwards, I'll call you Mom.

Kabir walked off to his car and seated himself on back seat with Ananya. They looked at each other and driver looped the key to start their journey.

TBC

I know guys. This Chapter is worthy for rotten tomatoes and eggs.
But Please comment to kar hi dena yar...

Sanya

Precap: SR

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Edited by KaYa_licious - 9 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Fantastic!
Please update soon and add me in you're PM list! 😃
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thank u so much for this much long part.
amazing chapter.
sanya plz tell me yar from where u get the dilogues of kabir and ananya?
they are too hillarious.
i actually choked water on reading VO DEKH KABOOTAR part.
their self thoughts were mindblowing.

dont u dare to say anything against this chapter.
m so excited to read further.
try to update soon.
thank u so much for pm.
lots of love.
lavi.
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thank u so much for this much long part.
amazing chapter
m so excited to read further.
try to update soon.
thank u so much for pm.
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awesome update
this made me laugh a lot "Ananya: Mujhe nahi jana. I don't want to go with this man.
Ananya's Mom: What are you saying Ananya? He is your husband now and you have to take care of all his needs. Don't worry beta. We are living in same cities.
Kabir: Dad..She is crying a lot. Yahi chod ke chalte hai isey.
Kabir's dad: Kabir..!!!!"
update soon
waiting for your pm
thanks for adding me to your pm list
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Starting was hilarious but turned a bit heavy. ..hoping for some funny moments between the two enemies. .

n SR I think it's going to be one hell of funny ritual with both fighting each other
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Fantastic
Kaya are so funny
Thanks for pm
Continue soon
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Awesome story! :D please pm whenever you update in future thank you! 😊
Edited by rosal_awesome - 10 years ago
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