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Posted: 20 years ago
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iam writing a story on tia and anveer so plz give your comment.

TIA AND RANVEER

TIA AND RANVEER AND ALL OTHERS ARE PRACTISING THE BIRTHDAY DANCE . THAT DAY CHEE CHEE GAVE SOME VERY DIFFICULT DANCE STPS TO BOTH TIA AND RANEER. THEY HAD TO PRACTISED A LOT.

TIA WAS GOING TO THE GYM BUT SUDDENLY.

PRI AND MEHER: HEY TIA WHEE AE U GOING .

TIA :TIA HAS TO PRACTICE THE DANCE STEPS WITH THAT DEHATI CAMEL . OK BABES CIYA . TIA WILL CATCH U LATER.

IN THE GYM

RANVEER: TIA AAP KHA THI AAP KO PATA HAI PRACTICE KARNA MAI TIME KITNA LAG JAYEGA.

TIA:YOU CAMEL,DEHATI. TUM APNA AAP KO LUCKY SUMJO .TUM TIA AHUJA KA SAATH DANCE KAR RAHA HO. ABHI YAHA ARJUN NAHI HAI.NAHI TO TIA ARJUN KA SAATH HE DANCE KARTE.

RANVEER:AB APNA BOYFRIEND KI TAREEF KARNA BAN KIJAYA .

RANVEER AND TIA BOTH PRACTISING THE DANCE.

RANVEER AND TIA :THEY AE DOING PRACTICE TOGETHER.THEY ARE SO CLOSE TO EACH OTHER . THEY BOTH AE JUINTO THEIR DREAM WORLD.

TIA:U CAMEL TIA KA ITNA CLOSE MAT AYO, ARJUN WILL NOT LIKE IT.

RANVEER:IN A JEALOUS WAY , HUMA KOI SHOOK NAHI HAI APKA SAATH DANCE KARNA KA . VO TO BAS CHEE CHEE NA FORCE KIYA NAHI TO HUM REVA KA SAATH DANCE KARTA.

TIA :THAT BITCH REVA VO TIA KI PARY MAI KAISA AYEGE

RANVEER :AAP REVA SA ITNA JEALOUS KYU KARTE HAI. VO ITNE SWEET HAI.

TIA:SHOWING HER DIRTY FACES.

TIA :RANVEER AB TIA KO CHALNA CHAIYA .

RANVEER:SMILING IN A NAUGHTY MANNER AND DIDNT ANSWER BACK

TIA:WHEN TIA WAS GOING SOMETHING STOPED HER ANS SHE ASKED RANVEER , REVA TUMAHARA LIYA BAHUT IMPORTANT HAI.

RANVEER:VO HUMARA LIYA SAB KUCH HAI.

TIATO TUM TIAATH JAYO NA.

RANEER:WHEN TIA WAS ABOUT TO GO RANVEER CATCHES HER HAND AND TELL HER THAT HUMNA DANCE ABHI TAK KHATAM NAHI KIYA HAI.

TIA:NO ANVEER TIA DOSENT WAT TO CONTINUE.WHEN TIA LOOKED UP SHE WAS CRYING.

ANEER:AAP ROH AHE HAI . HUMNA AAP SA PEHALA BHI KHA THA KI HUM AAPKO ROHTA HUA NAHI DEKH SAKTA.

RANVEER:AAP APNI FEELINGS KO KYU CHUPATI HAI TIA . DANCE KATA WAQT HUMNA AAPKI EYES MAI HUMARA LIYA PYAAR DEKHA THA.

TIA:ANVEER TIA CANT SEE U WITH ANYONE. TIA LOVES U .

RANVEER:HUM AAPKO BHI BAHUT PYAAR KARTA HAI . I LOVE U TIA.

IF ANYONE CAN WRITE THE STORY AGAIN WITH THIS BIRTHDAY DANCE ONLY SO PLZ WRITE IT .

Edited by reema_19 - 20 years ago

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shwepri thumbnail
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Posted: 20 years ago
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😊 reema very interesting ....
continue... 😊
hunkashish thumbnail
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Posted: 20 years ago
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reema good work... keep up
nishi thumbnail
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its good reema !!

keep it up !!
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Originally posted by: shwepri

😊 reema very interesting ....
continue... 😊

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Posted: 20 years ago
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plz write in english only
writing hindi in eng is very confusing. most of peole wil not understand it
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hey dat was 2 gud..plz continu fast 😃
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Its was fantabulous !!!! 👏
pls continue and ya write sum on ashi-yuvi too !! 😊
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Posted: 20 years ago
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ok i have another story on birthday dance but this is an another story on tia and ranveer.

IN THE CAFE

CHEE CHEE IS SEARCHING FOR THE COUPLE OF THE BIRDTHDAY DANCE.

CHEE CHEE :HEY TIA DARLING WHERE ARE U . I WANT U TO COME WITH UR FRIENDS IN THE GYM IN 5 MIN.

TIA :OK CHEE CHEE

IN THE GYM

ALL COUPLES ARE DANCING

WHILE TIA AND RANVEER ARE ALL DANCING WITH EACH OTHER .

SUDDENLY REVA COMES TO MEET RANVEER.

REVA:HI RANVEER

RANVEER: HI REVA . AAP YAHA KYA KAR RAHE HAI

REVA:MAI TO TUM SA MILNA AYE THI

TIA IS SO JEALOUS

TIA: TUM TIA KI DANCE PRACTICE KYU KHARAB KAR RAHE HO.

RANVEER:TIA AAP REVA SA AISA BAAT NAHI KAR SAKTE.

CHEE CHEE . WHO IS THIS SO GIRL

RANVEER :CHEE CHEE YE REVA HAI

CHEE CHEE: RANVEER TUM I THINK REVA KA SAATH DANCE KARO . U WILL LOOK GOOD.

RANVEER AND REVA ARE DANCING TOGETHER. TIA GETS SO UPSET.

TIA: CHEE CHEE TIA TO RANVEER KA SAATH DANCE KAR RAHE THI NA . TO YEH REVA.

CHEE CHEE : TIA YEH DONO KITNA ACHA LAGTA HAI

WHEN THE DANCE PRACTICE GETS FINISHED .

RANVEER AND REVA WENT FOR COFFE.

TIA ALSO GOES AFTER THEM

TIA LISTENS ALL THE CONVERSATION BETWEEN RANVEER AND REVA.

RANVEER SEES TIA THAT SHE IS LISTENING THIER CONVERSATION .

RANVEER TRIED TO FLIRT WITH REVA MORE TO MAKE TIA JEALOUS .

AND TIA GETS MORE UPSET AND GO TO HER ROOM.

THN RANVEER TELLS REVA THAT HE HAS SOME WORK SO THEY WILL MEET SOME OTHER TIME.

SO RANVEER GOES TO TIA 'S ROOM.

RANVEER: TIA AAP HAMARE AUR REVA KI CHUP CHUP KAR BAATA KYU SUN RAHE THI.

TIA :OH SHUT UP CAMEL . TIA KA PAAS ITNA FALTOO TIME NAHI HAI KI VO US BITCH AUR DEHATI KI BAATA SUNA.

RANVEER TIA AAP JOOT KEH RAHE HAI . AAP JEALOUS HO AHE THI KI HUM REVA KA SAATH DANE KAR RAHE THA.

TIA :HA TIA WAS JEALOUS COS TIA DOSENT LIKE TUM US REVA KA SAATH RAHO.

RANVEER: RANVEER STARTS COMING CLOSER TO TIA AND TELS HER THAT AAP BOL DEJAYA TIA.

TIA :TIA KYA BOLA.

RANVEER:KI YAHE AAP HUMSA PYAAR KARTE HAI.

TIA :TIA GETS SHY AND STARTS GOING TOWARDS HER BED BUT RANVEER CATCHES HER HAND.

RANVEER:TIA I LOVE U .

TIA :TIA ALSO REALLY LOES U RANVEER.

THEN THEY BOTH HUG.

IF ANY BODY CAN WRITE A BETTER STORY THEN PLZ CONTINUE AND WRITE.

Edited by reema_19 - 20 years ago
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👏QUOTE=reema_19]check this out guys

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