'if you were mine'..ay one shot..4 u mads

ohh great...wat a perfect mornin...first i get up 2 hrs late fer class den dat idiot sid locks me
in d shed 'accidentally' so he can be alone with with meher...as if lockin me up was nt enuff he had2 lock me wid d biggest cartoon of all time.
...madam shyla devi...
"yuvraaj....vat abt our classes...v will miss them all no??"shyla asked inquisitively...her eyes shining out of her large glasses...
"yeh ..mebbe...whu cares.."
"for u no problem ji...u hv ur appa to pass u in all subjects..vat abt me??"shyla asked indignantly
"look honey...even if i did care abt ur passing tehres nuthin i can do abt it..soo pleaseee b silent"
ashi giggled silently...this was gonna b more fun than she had anticipated....
"yuvraaj...."
"what??"he snapped..
"i am bored..there is nothing 2 do here....sing me vun song no"she asked playing with the flowers in her hair flirtatiously...
"excuse me??"
"you play in ring i heard.....no nt ring..wat is it...yes...band...u play in band no..."
"yeh its called remix...its a secret ban-.......wait a min ur new 2 this school ..how wud u kno i play in a band..?"
"i ..uh..i...have ...esp...yes ...i sense all things.."
"you know...i keep geting the feeling i know you...."
"mebbe i was ur wife in our last janam......den in dis janam also i will becoem ur wife....i wont even hv 2 change my initials...sd ..miss.shyla devi...mrs.shyla dev.."she said blushing...
yuvi stopped himself frm rolling his eyes...
"no ...u luk like ashi 2 me...."he blurted out wat had been bothering him since so mny dez..
ashi groaned inwardly....how did he guess dat...
"ayyo...u shudnt drink in mornin mornin.....it is nt gud for brain....in case u r having one...."
"wateva..."
"really ji...my appa's brother...my chaacha...he used 2 drink all day...i told him..ull get liver diseease...he din listen...now look wat happened....he is havin all holes in his liver..i am telling him...but he is nt listenin....like dat u also dont do..along with holes in wallet u will get holes in liver also...."
ok ok i know im paranoid...dis female is certainly nt ashi thoh she rants a lot abt random things....just like ashi...there i go again..gt her out of ur mind yuvraj dev...ur thinkin 2 much abt her...
"liver holes is like joke 2 u aa??i am telling and telling and ur thinkin abt dinner..."she asked exasperated...
"neway..ur hair is 2....black 2 b ashis"yuvi juss stopped himself frm sayin oily..
"vat ji..her hair is sooo datty...it is red..."said shyla dismissively"nt like my lovely hair with all smell flowers"
"hey watch it..dont call her hair dirty..shes quite cute"
ashis heart stopped for a moment ...was he sayin wat she thot he was sayin..
"wat ashi ashi u r saying....4get abt her...u r 2 gud fer her"she blushed...
"well..she doesnt think dat...her gorgeous brown eyes r 4eva on some loser..."
"leave her ...v will b perfect..."she giggled...
"what???"
"you know....i tink our jatakam will also match jii...i am having sixth sense"
"jatakam??"
"horoscope jii...kundalii..."
for the hundreth time yuvi felt like murderin sid...
"look babes..im sure ur very..umm.. attractive...but v dun match...i love..i mean i like ashi"
ashi blushed..this time for real....
"what u find lovely in her i cannot understand..she dosent evn hv bangles on her hand.."
"she doesnt need 2..her hands r 2 beautiful for ne of dat...her fingers luk divine wen she brushes her hair bak ..her spirit is amzing....yeh she can b a pain at times but its hard 2 stay mad at her for long..she makes me laff.....wen i feel awfully lonely i think of her and a smile comes on my face..."he said with a smile on his face...
ashi was shocked beyond wrds ..she had no idea he thot of her like dat....
"y am i tellin u this i cant understand....i still feel in my heart u r ashi..please tell me if it is true..."his sparkling eyes full of sincerity luked 2 her...
she couldnt resist it...she would tell him the truth.....
"i am..."
the door burst open...sid came in with a huge grin on his face....
"sorry dude..but had 2....cmon now...ive got a lot 2 tell u.."he dragged yuvi away ...the unfinished sentence hanging in the air...
it was as if a spell broke....
he shook his head nd walked out.....wonderin what had happened 2 him....
ashi walked slowly bak 2 her room....tht nite she sat her window wonderin wat 2 do....
yuvi nd her..itwas pure madness...nuthin could happen of course....
she sighed and brushed her hair back....as she did so..the moonlight caught her fingers...she looked at the dancing light in between her fingers and realised what she had known for a very long time...
she was trapped in his love..there was no way out....nd she couldnt b happier..

happy budday mads...my gift 2 u...nd ya it was ashi's idea....so our combined gift 2 u....
have an awsumm budday nd many more to come... 😳 😃

its shooooo cute 😳 i just luv the humour in ur fics sindhu 😃 u tuk me back to shyla devi days....i luved ashi so much in tht avtar 😆 the jatakam n initials thingy rocked 😆

the best lines had to b these 4 sure

"she doesnt need 2..her hands r 2 beautiful for ne of dat...her fingers luk divine wen she brushes her hair bak ..her spirit is amzing....yeh she can b a pain at times but its hard 2 stay mad at her for long..she makes me laff.....wen i feel awfully lonely i think of her and a smile comes on my face..."he said with a smile on his face...
ashi was shocked beyond wrds ..she had no idea he thot of her like dat....

wat perfect description by yuvi of hers 😳
luv ya lots sindhu plz keep posting more 🤗

👏 no words yaar... u always leave me spell bound.....u r d best totally😳..the Jatakam thing was hilarious 😆😆😆...I was so sure that that would be the best part of ur one shot

Like Rakhi said...Ashi's description was perfect...n like I always say...u know n portray Ashi in the best manner 👏👏👏 but for me the best lines were these

she sighed and brushed her hair back....as she did so..the moonlight caught her fingers...she looked at the dancing light in between her fingers and realised what she had known for a very long time...
she was trapped in his love..there was no way out....nd she couldnt b happier..

She was hardly shown like this in Remix realising her feelings for Yuvi n all...n thats the reason I found these to be the best lines in ur one shot 😳

ps. mads even if hte idea was mine the effort was all hers n ofcourse smriti's too who gave the subject for hte one shot😛...so all the credit goes to them....n not me...hope u enjoy reading it though....n thanks a lot hell for writing it on such a short notice....luv ya dear🤗....u rock 😳

omg... omg.... OMG!!! 😳 😳 😳 sindhu... madsie couldnt hv asked for a better bday present... how chweeet 😳 😳 great wrk 👏

oh my good sindhuu 👏 am sooo soooo glaad you took my concept up i realy felt the concept was unique and hatke nad you have done cent percent justice to it 👏 👏 its just beautifull cute mushy shweet its just hte way i wanted it to be 😃 realy great job 👏

the best lines ofcorse undoubtedly was the last para 👏 👏 👏 it just swept me off my feet and twitched my heart into one small knott of a happy moment 😃 loved the whole last para ashis unsaid love was so crystal clear in it....am trapped in his love and there is no way out and suddenly she dindt rember feeling happier ever 👏 👏 👏 toooo goood

thaanx a ton for completing my request so sooon loved it totally 😉

am dam sure dis is da best b'day gift madz could get from her frnd...gr8 shot!

dis is d biggest b'day gst 4 mad....njoy it

wow !!!!!!!!!! this is jus soooooooooooooooooo amazing sindhu... thanks a lot...😳 seriously, like aditi said.. the best bday gift neone cud get !!!! 😃😃😃 its soooo amzing... I love each n every sentence of it.. u r such a superb writer sindhu!!! 👏

n yea.. thanks a lot ashi n smriti for the idea...though I'm late in giving my thanks..😳 but this is sooo amazing.. u hav no idea how nice I'm feeling rite now...😃

Originally posted by: aditisilawat

am dam sure dis is da best b'day gift madz could get from her frnd...gr8 shot!

i agree simply awesum