Ek bar phir.....zara hat ke...(prt 2;pg3)

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This is a fictions story about my favourite topic……… REMIX

Written by…of course me. …Ritz!!!………This story is a typically Ritz theory…with loads of pix as well as writing from my side…. the pix are from the episodes of remix…its gonna be a fic with loads of emotions as well as loads of songs…romance…feelings … the life of the foursome as well as the life of students as well as life of young lovers!!!!! Soo what are we waiting for?????? Lets move on with our new remix fic!!! Okey here its not a completely new one coz its like a revival of remix…. many parts would be similar to the episodes…. I thought of doing it kyunki then we would be able to live remix again… but in all aspect in wont be the same as in there are changes but the field would likely be the same.

Chapter---1

Its 19th of April…the first day of maurya high school…the best and the institute for rich people…it's the day for the earlier students to meet the freshers…all are really very very excited…all the earlier students are thinking about the plans rather the tricks which they could play on the freshers to bug them as a style of ragging………… so now its time to get into the school and get to know the students and the teachers quite nicely………… lets roll in………………

………… This is yuvi...yuvraj dev… the hottest dude of maurya high……… he is the one and only son of Mr.yashwant dev… the M.P. and a high post officer in Mumbai politics…all girls dream of going out one evening with yuvi…the great. He is the most popular guy in Maurya High. He initially does not believe spending his whole life with only one girl…so his girlfriend changes every one-week.

…………… This is tia………tia ahuja… the most famous girl of maurya high. She is apparently the "angel" of maurya. She is not alone she has 2 other friends of hers…pri…initially priyanka…and meher. They are an angel group! And tia's favourite line is…."tia ahuja hona koi aisi waisi bat nahin hain."

She is the girl who all the guys wanna go around with. But she does not have a boyfriend…. rather lover yet…coz she belives that her prince charming has not yet come and she is ready to wait her whole life for her prince charming…she is the daughter of the famous industrialist… Sumeet Ahuja…her motto in life is friendship and she cannot live without 2 things…her angels and make-up!!!!!!

………… These are tia's angels…the one on the right is pri…priyanka………she is tia's best friend…she is obsessed about two things in her life loads of junk food and the fact that no guy likes her…poor she…

One on the left is meher…she is a total tia ahuja…she is a total make-up freak. She is right now the recent girlfriend of yuvi.

In short these three angels rock!!!!!!…………………………………………

………… These are yuvi's… friends… they can be called the three musketeers. The one on the extreme right is called as Sid… as in siddharth kapoor…he is yuvi's best friend…

The one next to Sid is nakul…………rather NA-KOOL!!!!… They think themselves to be coolest dudes in town rather in maurya!!!!! They run after gals but the gals…………………… don't even look at them………………………………………………………………

Today is the first day at maurya all the ppl are really very excited…… in the cafeteria the YUVI gang is sitting and talking about something

Sid: yuvi dude… mera maan kehe raha hain ki is bar bohot hi hot hot babes aane wali hain

Nakul: haan haan tumhaara maan to antaryami ka hain naa… waise naakool is sure that is bar nakool koo sabse hot sabse best chick milegi… what ay yuvi dude??????

Yuvi (who was thinking abt something): haan kya tum log kuch kehe rahe the?????

Sid: yuvi dude tum ne inte time se kuch bhi nahin sunna hum logo ne kya kaha???? Arrey wats up wid u??????

Yuvi: kuch nahin yaar… just tensed abt one thing…

Nakul: lemme guess…… meher prob?????

Yuvi: nahin nakul don't I have a lack in life???? Main meher ke bare main soochunga who bhi itne tensed hokke gone mad or wat??? Maine toh yeh baat leke parreshan hoo ke this time I heard there are gonna be new enrolled scholarship students…

Sid: so wat abt them???????

Yuvi: nahi… I was just thinking would they be able to match up with us?? Our way of living and they way we lead our lives????

Yeh baat app ko kisne kehe di ke hum app logo ke way of living ke saath match nahin kar payenge???

…Yeh kaun hain?????????

Hi hum yahan ke nayee scholarship student……….Ranveer…Ranveer Sisodia.

………… Kya hua???????? App log sab chup kyun ho gaye?????? Hum app logo ki tarah hi ek insaan hain… koi janwaar nahin han bhaale hi hum sanganeir see ayee hoo

Sid: sanga…wat?????????

Ranveer: sanganeir…ekk chotise gauu rajasthan main

Yuvi: toh tum rajasthan see ayee hoo haan???? Lekin kaffi cool hooo...Good to meet u dude…… this is yuvraj dev… yuvi for all… yahan ka sabse famous aur sabse handsome guy

Ranveer: app se milke bohot khushi huii

Sid: dude this is Sid… yuvi ke baad the most handsome looking guy in maurya

Yuvi: haha dikhraha hain…

Ranveer: aur app banna????

Nakul: hey man this is nakool!!!!! The coolest dude of maurya… by the way tum ne mujhe pehele din hi banana kyun bulaya??????? How dare u???

Ranveer: nahin nahin hummne app ko banana nahin bulaya hummne app kaha banna… jiska humaare sanganier main matlab hota hain khas dost

Nakul: okey man cool

Yuvi: hey tum kya yahan akele ayye hoo??????

Nahin nahin hum bhi hain inke saath… inke ek laute behen Vrinda……… app logo ki doobara se introduction ki koi zarurat nahin hain maine saab sun liya hain………… bhaii the most imp baat hi app poochna bhool gayi?????

Ranveer: kya??????

Vrinda: kya yeh humse dosti karenge?????

Yuvi: arrey sure sure why not yar tum log seriously bohot hi accha hoo and we would love to be Ur friendzzz……… kyun Sid aur nakul???

Sid and nakul as usual were staring at Vrinda………

Yuvi: nakul…Sid………

Sid: haan han yuvi…sure kyun nahin…and lends his hand to vrinda……… nice to met u

Vrinda shakes hand with him… ya mujhe bhi………… vrinda understood the fact that Sid and nakul in a way liked her… but she did not like dis fact coz she thought that I was a real short time for them to like anyone…soo she turned to yuvi

Vrinda: hey yuvi kya tum mujhe plzzzzzz help kar doge?????

Yuvi: ya sure babes…im sorry lekin I address all girls as babes hope u don't mind…… and if u mind im sorry but u deserve to be called as a babe.

Vrinda fells shy and with a shy face she thank yuvi: thanks a lot yuvi for the compliment

Yuvi: ya bataoo kya help chahiye…… yuvi is always ready to help girls…

Ranveer: aahhhhh yuvi app bhool rahe hain…vrinda humaari behen hain.

Yuvi: ohh cammon ranveer dude itne bhi over possessive maat banoo… get a life njoy it an let her njoy too coz rite now Ur in maurya and more over Ur yuvi's friendzz…soo chill okey.

Ranveer: okey okey…vrinda app kya pooch rahi thi????

Vrinda: main pooch rahi thi kya tum log plzzzzz mujhe girlz hostel dikha doge?????

Sid: Girl's hostel????? Sure sure hum le chalte hain……… kyun vri is it okey????

Vrinda: vri??????? Wats dat…. if its my short form sorry to say I did not like it…plzzzz call me vrinda okey????

Yuvi: nahin its okey Sid main hi jaata hoon mujhe meher se kuch baat karna tha…room no.????

Vrinda: ahh room no. Wait lemme check… ya room no. 6

Yuvi: what???? Room no. 6????? Ur dead…… are u a make-up freak?????

Vrinda: kyun and why am I dead????? Koi bhoot hain kya uss kamre main?????

Yuvi: usse bhi khatarnak… tia and her angels stay there… ur dead babes

Vrinda: tia and her angels???? Yeh kaun hain???? Are they some paaris or wat??? Whatever is it plzzzzz leke chalo mere ko im really tired after two days journey

Yuvi: ya ya chalo…… ranveer dude tum yahiin rukko ya phir do one thing do towards the boys hostle… Sid, Nakul ranveer ko room dikhado…I think he is in our room kyunki mere uske haath main room no.5 dekhliya tha…hain naa dude???

Ranveer: bapre app to Sherlock Holmes se bhi zyada tez hain…ji haan room no.5 hi hain.

Yuvi: Vrinda chaloo…ladies first……………………… soo yuvi and vrinda leave towards the girl's hostle

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aditya_rikh thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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yeah i've read it................ofgourse remix was relived b me.the start is not like what it was in the original version,but it's really ery good..............what is the kinda help needed
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: aditya_rikh

yeah i've read it................ofgourse remix was relived b me.the start is not like what it was in the original version,but it's really ery good..............what is the kinda help needed

hey thanxka lot for commenting ya i no dat teh start was not teh same but i wanted no fighting u no kyunki in teh begining yuvi and ranveer had fite even in tia's case so u no.................. btu teh help which i want is i cannot decide a name for my fic.............all teh names have ben used up soo i want u ppl to suggest a name for my fic plzzzzzzzzz and haan plzzzzzzz tell me r the pix visible to u or not coz they are seriously not visible to me 😆 and yes i had pix in them

ritz 😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
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guys plzzzzzzzzzzzz tell em weatehr teh pix are visible to u or not coz this is probnably teh 3rd time i jhave edited my post and posted teh pictures..............they are not visible to me but r they to u??????? plzzzzzz bataoo
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Posted: 18 years ago
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u knoe wat ek picture bhi visible nahi hai
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey ....awesum fanfic...keep it up!!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey tia di wonderful beginnig.
i can remember da remix scenes now very well.
i liked it very much.
plz cont soon,.
will be waiting for da next chapter.

titli
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wonderful,mind-blowin,fantastic,awesum........
ur fic is superb....
& v cant c da pix.....
plz cont......
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Posted: 18 years ago
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It's rocking!!! Ritz, jaldi se continuekaro. Aur name ke liye how about..... A new beginning. Agar achha lege toh bataana.

love,
komal
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey ritzie...it's really nice!!! luved it!!! 😳 pleej cont. soon!!! today itself...nd i can't see the pic btw will think over title...nd let u know if i get nething 😃 ...though i m not gud at it

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