rf ramayan part 6, pg 1, UPDATED!!!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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i've started dis topic again 'coz tia doesn't cum online dese days & it's a prob wen i post a new part, so i thought, let's start over:

The RF Ramayan

Starring

Shriya

Tia

Soumya

ashita

Veonal

Sindhu

Mani

Harshu

Vanshi

Esha

Veo

Mads

Pri

Reema

Parul

Sonia

Niyu

Shelly

Kavita

Charu

Saff

Part 1
Bayville High: Dangerous, enter with caution
Wind ,water.earth,fire and sky—the five elements…each so different from each other…yet…..all combine to give perfection…a balance….but then y is it that we humans lack this balance…hmm….no one knows the answer…and well as we proceed lets see..if a balance is possible..if total perfection is not maddening..

Our this journey to uncover a *ahem* truth bout us humans, the so called intelligent and *social* animal….whether we r really intelligent or "kya fool hai hum" and how social.. *ahem* anti social we r …..we visit ..Bayville high..a normal institution for abnormal people….abnormal …not as in…x men…abmormal as in ur average pangs of knoe- it- all pain in the *** teenagers……
Bayville high..a pioneer school where normal sane kids become insane animals…in the rat race of competetion…in this stupid race to prove—I am the best….


The day started usually..the old students came back to learn more how to be an animal and the new students to b initiated in the rat race…
Tia ..the ultimate brat stepped out of car….
Saff a rival to tia's snootiness…was just abt to enter the premises of Bayville high…
Mads…still at home wrapped her books with utter care and packed so sugar free fat free cake for tia—her (undeserving) best friend…
Sindhuja—applied the last strokes of blush to her face …..and covered her lovely lips with dark shade of lipstick…
Shriya packed sidharth's picture up in oilcloth…
Yes ….all the "student" were comin back to Bayville high…
The moment they entered the usual bashing…bitching…and show of he newly acquired swear words started
Tia called Saff a mad cow.
Saff told Tia to go soak her head & measure her waist.
Shriya told Mads dat her name suited her perfectly, she was mad.
Mads told Shriya to shut up & let her study.(after all u cant keep quite when the teacher sks u a question)
today was special.
Today was d first day of dis new session.(to enter the lessons of being"a human")
They had now come in d 11th grade. They had "grown up."

They had new classes, new subjects, & newcomers in skool, or shud I say the latest bakhras?

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Veo entered d skool, he was nervous abt dis new skool, wat's it gonna be like? He was still not sure abt dis place.
Hmmm…nice, Tia thot,as she lowered her ray ban sunglasses…. wen she saw him. Gud looking, looks intelligent too, can keep me entertained for a while. But not perfect. Nothing was perfect.and perfection was a bore…bad boys were fun..good boys were blah…
Saff too had seen Veo almost at d same time. Wow. Good looking, looks intelligent too, perfect for me. She had heard many ppl say dat nothing in dis world was perfect. But not for her. It depends on how u take life, & for her d best was perfect since nothing cud be better dan dat.

Hey, Saff, sed someone frm behind her.
Hi, Shriya. Did u c dat guy over dere? Dat new one?
Oh, him. Yeh, I heard someone talk abt him jst a second ago.
He's cute na.
Haan, but no one can match Siddharth
Oh, no, not dat again…

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 2
The end of beginning

"Welcome, students, to d first class of dis year. Mere paas kuch announcements hain jo main aap sabko batana chahoongi. Aapke is saal new subjects jo aapne choose kiye hain who to hain hi, saath mein ek naya subject bhi humne start kiya hai.", sed d principal, ashita…a thourogly well educated qualified …dignified….the onli prsn who cud handle the "students" of Bayville high

"Ek aur naya subject. Yeh log to pakka hume maar kar chodenge.", sed Shriya.
"Oh, shut up & let me listen.", sed Mads.
"Girls, girls, plz. Stop dis. Haan, to I was saying ki yeh naya subject hai 'Acting & Cinema' aur yeh aapko padhayenge Siddharth, jo ki aap jante hi honge RDB mein the."
"WAT!!!???", sed Shriya.
"Ab hum sab mare, yeh apni stupidity shuru kar degi & we're dead.", sed Tia.

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 3

A new year..and a whole lot of rubbish
First day of d year. Usually d time to rag d new students. But right now Tia (the usual brain child behind it)was busy. She had decided to make d first move wid Veo. And everything was ready …except that she did not have a plan

Meanwhile Saff & Shriya had decided to continue their "saintly" tradition that is were going to rag Veo to get his attention towards them. Correction, they were going to rag Veo to get his attention towards Saff & for dis, they needed help..as their brain did not support ne complicated mechanism(read as makin plans) so the answer to heir prob was???---Shelly & Harshu's..the brains (read prankstars of Bayville)

"First we need a plan," sed Harshu.
"Dats wat we're all saying Harshu. But plan kya hoga?" Shelly replied blowin a huge buuble..which burst givin her face a nice pinkish mask...
"Forget ragging. Hum log uspar koi prank play kar sakte hain. Lekin kya?"suddenly saff stopped talking..as she eyed shelly…umm nice face mask btw..pehle ki woh sly fox Tia use fool karle."..shelly uttered the words with a whole lot of contempt…as she stuggled to take the remaining of her chewing gum off her face
"Hmmm…Idea!", sed Shriya.
"KYA!!!???"
"U wait, abhi batane ka nahi, dikhane ka time hai."




U r the most beautiful girl in the world sid whispered in to mani's ears…mani just blushed…I love u too mani smiled …..sid leaned forward to kiss her…she waited for the feel of his lips on her… suddenly her face was wet…sid was lickin her then he shouted loudly in her ears…mani got up…her so called best frnd vanshika was standin with a half empty jug of water ..kya hua..??
Mharanji….subah ki 8 baj chuke hai,….alarm clock 568334 time ring kar ke tah chke hai,…..ab to aap uthiye..

Class 10 sucks naah shriya???we have to get up so early how I wish we were in 11 with saff,sindhu ,tia etc etc
Mani frowned at her
. tumbhi naah vanshi..sid was just abt to kiss me..
so y dint he??u had bad breath kya??
Haha very funny..i don't even know where to laugh…
Chill mani…see now toh he is gonna be our sir so chill naah..
Ya sid…hmm
Sid sir mani..
Ya I loooooove sid sir..
Talk abt total incest…vanshi joked
aaj Monday hai naah??
Haan aur like always two more days r left for It to b Wednesday.
******
"India's foreign policy in 1951 differs frm India's foreign policy as…"
Economics class was going on & Priyaa was sleeping. How boring cud neone get?
Shriya, time kya hua hai?
Hmmm…oh, yeh, I agree wid u Pri, completely

Stupid, main time pooch rahi hoon. Don't tel me ur thinking about Siddharth again.
Nopes not at all…shriya said defensively ..


Haan, haan, whatever. Time bata.
10 mins rehte hain class khatam hone mein.
"10 mins of sleep, gud old sleep," sed Pri, & dozed off
class 11 rocked ..so did the deaf sajid..as long as she dint snore he wud neva notice

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 4

'Think ppl, think, kuch socho", sed tia to her frnds.
"nahi to woh saff mujhe beat kar degi & I don't think ill be able to tolerate dat"
"tia, hum soch hi rahe hain, tum bhi to kuch socho, hume pareshan karne ke alawa itni der se tum aur kar kya rahi ho?", sed sindhu
"maine kya kaha???", retorted tia
"tum dono ladna band karoge? Mere pas ek plan hai", mads sed.


Meanwhile, back in saff's room
"shriya, stop thinking abt ur stupid siddharth & help me"
"aye, saff, don't u dare say a wrd abt sid sir & second of all, I am tryin to help u"
'haan, u r trying to help me by staring at sid's picture"
"den wat do I do???"
"help me!!! Tel me a way to get to veo"
"hmmmm….well, I do hav a plan, lekin pata nahi woh work karega ki nahi"
"plan kya hai?"
"hum kisi ki help lenge"
"kiski?"
Shriya smirked.
"siddharth sir ki"
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 5

"shriya, tumhara dimagh kharab to nahi ho gaya hai? Tum siddharth sir ko janti bhi ho?"
"nahi saff, lekin abhi shut up. Main kuch soch rahi hoon"
"im doomed. Mujhe veo kabhi nahi milega aur who tia use mujhse le jayegi"


"madsy, tum kya karne ja rahi ho?"
"tia, main tumhari help karne ki koshish kar rahi hoon. So keep quiet & let me help u"
"par tumhara plan kya hai?"
"us shriya ko lagta hai na ki who mujhe hara sakti hai, ab main use dikha doongi ki woh apne aap ko jitna smart samajhti hai utni hai nahi"
"mads, main apni aur veo ke bare mein pooch rahi hoon, tumhare aur shriya ke bare mein nahi"
"I know tia, isliye bol rahi hoon, keep quiet"


Meanwhile in Bayville high, there was another new student, a new starting for someone, someone who was about to enter this new world, someone who was… about to be the new bakra of the bayville students.

"Hi, I'm Saff. U look new."
"Oh, hi Saff, I'm Kavita, & yes, I'm new."
"Tum kaunse room mein ho?"
"Room 017"
"Oh, wow, cool, matlab tum meri roommate ho"
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Posted: 18 years ago
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& now, for part 6:
Part 6
"shriya, dis is kavita, humaari new roommate"
"shhhh… main plan form kar rahi hoon, shut up"
"kaisa plan?", asked kavita
"woh… kuch nahi"
"whatever, abhi shut up, will u? yahaan par mera dimagh ghoom raha hai, woh bhi tumhare liye, aur tum dono apni stupid baatein band hi nahi kar rahe ho"
"shriya, yeh koi baat karne ka tareeka hai? Sorry bolo"
"main kyun sorry boloon? Ek to main tumhara kaam karoon, upar se sorry boloon? Well, tum apni new best frnd ke saath apna plan khud hi bana lena, main ja rahi hoon"
"fine, bye"

Ass Siddharth walked thru the corridors of Bayville High, he thought, "Wow! I'm a teacher now, but I hope ki main accha teacher ban paoon, not like d teachers we used to hate at skool" & suddenly, dis girl walked by him, looking very angry &, a bit sad too.
In fact, she looked so angry that she dropped one of her books & didn't even notice.
"Hey! Excuse me? U've dropped something!"
But too late, she'd already left. He looked at the name… Shriya…

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Pri, did u hear? there's a new girl in skool & she's Shriya & saff's roommate
Yeah, pata hai shells, but guess wat.. maine suna hai ki aaj siddharth sir ki class 10 ki class mein mani ne… tumne suna kya hua?
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Posted: 18 years ago
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chalo....finally we hav r ramayana startin n i hope this time its in full swing...n abt d part...we to hav already read it b4...so letas say it again...amazing..
waise shriya...veo ko kitni baar feature karegi 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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are, it's d same rf ramayan, pri, only thing is, i posted d whole thing again, 'coz it was a real prob wen i updated
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Posted: 18 years ago
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chalooooooooooooooo...........finally aftr days we r readin r rf ramayan....now madam can we hve this goin fast!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!btw gr8 u cont n nice continuation 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thkz shriya...read all d parts again back 2 back was fun...i hope ull continue it dis time properly...

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