An Unexpected Rendez-Vous *Ashi-Yuvi* OS - Page 2

Now coming to your one shot, you know when you gave its intro, I didn't expect to like this and I was this close to not reading it because I couldn't imagine Ashi running away from college just like that and never coming back. But then I was bored out of my mind and so decided to gave it a try and man am I glad that I did? I really loved this one shot and especially how you explained Ashi's behavior of running away and related that to her character and impulsiveness. It was amazing to see how you have matured both the characters and I could actually visualize the entire scene between them happening right infront of my eyes

The prank by Ashi and the stubbornness of Yuvi (staying at cafe till she is free) is so apt of their behavior 😆 Shows that despite being so badly heart-broken, their relationship is still the same...that Ashi stills considers it as her right to prank Yuvi and with yuvi all I can say is..."tu haan kar chahe naa kar teri hai marzi, kehte rahenge tujhse baatein hum dil ki"☺️

Sweet shot payal, although an open-ended ending would have been more effective which is just a suggestion. But really liked it and keep writing more on Ashi-Yuvi😳