shadows of love-part11 page 22 - Page 6

Originally posted by: hellraiser

she caught sight of a 5 feet girl with 6 inch heels...nd 3 inch clothes...

3 inch clothing😆

Originally posted by: hellraiser

"you..you...you punk"
"hmm..i dunt see 3 of me..mebbe u gotta get new eyes as well as brains"
tia was in shock....
"well..cya later...nt tht i hope 2.."ashi yawned and walked away....
"u wait...u wait rite there"tia fumed
"what for??christmas??ive nvr been so relegious neway"
"u cant insult tia nd d angels nd get away with it...tia will teach u a lesson"
"u mean theres one more bimbo...y didnt dis tia gal cum 2 dis party of bird brains??"ashi luked around curiously
"you idiot..tia is me..me is tia...me tia..tia me"said tia lapsing into stone age english

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i jus' loved this part😆😳no prizes 4 guessing why😆

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as tia prepared 2 march away....she slipped on the waxed floor breaking off her heel nt unlike the splitting of the iceberg in titanic

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😆😆😆titanic😆

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ashi cudnt control her laughter nemore...

nor can I😆

😆 😆 😆
lolz sindhu anazin part 😆

gr8 part sindhu! 😆 😆 i'm really njoying your fic! 👏

superb........i read the entire thing together n all i hhve to say is dat u rock n so does ure fic......cont asap

PART 5

ashi had a broad grin on her face ...
it dint last long..as she reached her room-to-be
voices came drifting out....to ashi they seemed like sounds announcing her death sentence
"tia babes...relaxx..tumhe p***le-"
"KYA??tia ko p***le..."she rushed 2 d mirrior nd began exmining every epidermal cell of her skin..
"tiaa...tumhe p***le nahi hai...par itni stress se ho jaayegi"pri said 2 tia whu was still squinting into the mirror for the non-existant p***le
ashi took a deep breath..nd walked into the room
"you punk..."tia stopped(her vocabulary had run out)
"yess??"asked ashi with fake politeness
"what r u doin here??"askd pri...
"well..miss moti roly..im here as ur new room mate..other wise i hv no hobby of carryin my luggage all over this random place..but u obv wudnt understand tht...coz....guess wat..u hv no brain"finished ashi brightly
she dumped her luggage on tias bed with the designer rug..which caused tia a mini heart attack...
nd walked out past pri whu was still figuring out what ashi had said...it sounded like an insult..but she was nt sure...



"hey sweety..dyu know just how beautiful u r"yuvi whispered..
"really yuvi?"the gal with long curly hair giggled
"yes tania"
"sonya"she snapped..
"see..uve even made me forget ur name by ur beauty..ur charm.."he said lukin around all d time
"what r u lukin at??"
"im seein how none of these chicks can cum near ur beauty"and wishin meher also doesnt cum here
ashi raised an eyebrow incredulously...
hidden behind a bush..she had been silently laughing over yuvis nd d bimbettes conversation..
"hey ..is dis a new form of tribal warfare??"meher asked laughing..
ashi jumped up....
"well..i was just wondering whu was smooching so loudly..i thot it sounded like yuvi"she said casually
"WHAT"
yuvi fell out frm the other side of the bush
"hi-i-i babes"he stammered..
"yuvraj dev...what the hell dyu think ur doin with tht floosy"she said gesturing to the curly haired gal still tangled in his arms
"i uhh-h..i was teaching her karate....yaa..poor gal ..so many guys harrasing this pretty girll"he said smiling angeically at her
"tumhe to main baad main dekhlungi....first i hv 2 curl my hair..firt imp 2 hair den 2 boyfrnd"she stomped away fingering her curls
"pheww...i thot i wud hv 2 leave u nd go sweety.."he whispered sweetly 2 the gal whu still hadnt moved an inch frm his arms..
ashi cleared her throat loudly
"mr.yuvraj dev..dat a luvly shade of pink lipstick"she smiled sweetly
"i know sweety...2 bad it wud luk terrible on u"he smiled ...
ashi felt sumthin deep inside her......sumthin she had nvr felt before...
she shook it off...nd walked away..
she was surprised at herself..she had nvr walked away frm a fite before...
nt even if the guy had a veryy cute smile...and-..
stop ashi..she told herself sternly..dun behave like a timbo..
she was soo deep in thought ..she dint notice the girl waving wildly before her
"hmmm..am i so forgettable??tht u hv forgotten me after just 2 hours??"
"ohh sorry..i din c u..m.p rite?"
"yeah..i was just goin fer a coffe..wanna come...?"
"sure.. luv 2"

😳 ashi getting j 😳 ashi getting j 😳 😳
dis part rocked as always read it d umm lemme c 6 tyme or soo 😳 sid u r exceptionally mindblastingly greatly superbly talented rocking gal 😆 😉

hmmm....now i see the shadows of love developing...n gr8 it started frm ashi's side 😳 poor uv ....teaching the gal karate inside a bush ha 😆 😆 😆

gr8 prt 👏 👏 👏 every part has such gr8 humour in it.....i no more miss the season 1 of remix sid thanx to u 🤗

plzz cont soon...

awesome Sid!


agree wid Rakhi, Yuvi teaching tht gal karate behind the bush? 😉 😆

continue soon!


Divya

Hey..

Great fic 👏 👏 👏 ...... I really love it.. 😃 😃

Plz cont. soon 😊

Teaching gals karate in the bush 😆 Yuvi is as adorable as ever. You are a wonderful writer Sindhu, loved the way you expressed Ashi's slightly jealous feelings 👏 Plz continue soon.