yuvi+tia=???? (the poem)

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Posted: 19 years ago
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remember the poem i was talkin abt????? in that *i hate uv* post?????the one for which my life was almost endangered???neways here is it....hope all of u like it....(i risked my life for it and completed it finally)

never enuff

tick tick tock..its quater past two...

i sit and day dream,

while i twirl my locks

lookin past oblivion-

in a plae where i see u

the clock strikes two

i hear my dog barkin,

yet i dont move

i just lay back and stare--

stare at ur picture

someone calls out my name

i dont bother to answer

i just sit and wonder--

wat u must be doin at this hour---

my cell phone rings,

interruptin my reverie--

cursin graham bell--

i put it on silent.

i get up and check my email---

hopin to get a mail from him,

no luck...just some stupid forward--thats it

irritated i get back o my chair,

and look at your pic again

angry--i tear it up in bits and peices

after sometime i realise wat i have done...

tears well up and i try to fis it with cellotape

but its beyond repair---

i retire,crying

i think about the pain i go thru

i ask my self y i put up with it....

my heart answers,coz u love him idiot--

i curse myself for fallin for him

but not fallin for him is impossible--unthinkable infact

unrequited love--hate the feeling

but u know wat??

for him,for his smile--

everything is worth it

by the way ppl everyting i ve ritten is true...happened yest mornin...and not answrin part....was me not nswerin to my mom...and dats y i got the scoldin....

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Posted: 19 years ago
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awwwwwww...cho chweet.,..u cud hv been describin my feelings fer all u know..xcept dat till now ive nvr regretted fallin in luv wid him..nt even once.. ๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wowowowowo tia thats the best poem ever ๐Ÿ‘
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Posted: 19 years ago
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๐Ÿ‘ wow tia.......awesome poem as usual....im sure raj is gonna go through it n is gonna drool all over ittt
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Posted: 19 years ago
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what a poem yaar it roxx ๐Ÿ‘
i relly wish i cud rite lyk u
but koi baat nahi i enjoy readin anything uve ritten ๐Ÿ˜‰
me not much of a poetry reader ๐Ÿ˜• but yet i always lub readin ur work ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 19 years ago
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THREE CHEERS...JUST TOO GUD ๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 19 years ago
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man tia u rok at poetry awesome...dam cool!!
keep it up!! ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Beautiful poem!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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SINDHU..............................ARGHHHHHHHHHH........
I NEVER REGRET FALLIN IN LOVE WITH HIM....I REGRET HIM NOT FALLIN FOR ME........U KNOE WXACTLY WAT TICKS ME OFF

and ppl ur ssoooooooo sweet..................
i love ur comments
hope raj reads it
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: fate

SINDHU..............................ARGHHHHHHHHHH........
I NEVER REGRET FALLIN IN LOVE WITH HIM....I REGRET HIM NOT FALLIN FOR ME........U KNOE WXACTLY WAT TICKS ME OFF




of course i wud know hun..im ur 'behna' after all๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†

nd ya..read ur poem again..frm my view..its relly as if u regret fallin fer him coz hes the reason fer all ur scoldings..๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†juss kidding..i know wat u meant :p

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