if poem [pls pls read]

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Posted: 19 years ago
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this poem is written espically 4 if ,,,,pls read n reply 4 tis

poem - A TRIBUTE TI IF

this is my zubaani,

it isnt any rubbish kahaani,

thers no confusing raja and rani,

it is as pure as paani[didnt get anything else]😆

it's a poem abt a place or can say sight[site],😛

which spread's friendships' never dimming light,😊

here we remain together,

tied to arope really tight,

so we remain frnds 4ever.

sometimes here there is a change,which is slight,

some endup in small fights,

which is 4 a short while,

so friendships' light becomes more bright.

the light which spreads 4 much more than a mile.

sometimes i feel it is a tree,

birds come here to talk free,

with the branches supporting these,

proud to say one bird is me ,

this tree grows biggers with the entry of many newbees,

have u really understood my words??

i hope its not as confusing as algedbra's surds,😆😆

coming here proud every1 be,

i think u no the poem's trees ,bees and birds,

yeah u guessed it right it's IF where ther's no I or u but only WE

did u like the poem ..i hope its noice pls pls reply

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Posted: 19 years ago
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awwwwwwwwwwwww..its lovely....... ur so rite
IF ROCKS
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Wow its awesome ya😳 ... ..2 gud 👏 ..i esp liked d last 2 paras 😳

keep it up 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey its really sweet dear!!! 👏

thank u soo much......i enjoyed readin it 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
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dam gud!!.....very well written...v rok man!! 👏 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
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too good...IF simple rox! 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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😆 😆 Yea if rocks!! 😆 😆

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