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My fanfic Dhadkan consists of Ranveeer-Tia pair now.Link:
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=225686&TPN=2 1
Part-23...Kusum:Kumud looks down. Kusum:Garv had a severe accident after we lost Tia.He was paralysed 4 many yrs.
K is shocked:then?now?
Ku:now he has recovered from it.
K is relieved. Ku:his friend's wife…1 widow is living there 2 look after him.charu
K is shocked:charu?
K remembers meeting akshat-charu in the holi party.K thinks:Akshat is dead?poor guy
K:why did u kill kshitij?
Tia starts crying. K:was'nt he loving?
T:yes.but his luv was disgusting.he was too possessive.he cud'nt even stand me seeing dadi-dada.he did'nt even tolerate saakshi dadi's affection 2wards me.he hated me having friends.bcoz he thot that wil make him lose me.so I did'nt hav friends at all.i was always alone.my only relief was garv papa.i did'nt hav any connection with papa 4 yrs.later I got papa's letter.i came 2 no about his accident,paralyses & recovery. i told him 2 send letters only 2 college.thus I was relieved with his leters I got once in a while.later….dad's friend & his son the rock star Ranveer came 2 our house while dad was'nt there.i was seeing ranveer 4 the 1st time.he sang.that time dad came & shouted at them.he threw them away.dad's friend tolerated it as he respects dad a lot & he had an inferiority complex as he's from a middleclass family.i felt sad.so I went 2 ranveer's house.
Tia tells Ranveer:sorry 4 my dad's behaviour.
R:I tolerated ur dad's behaviour only 4 my dad.
R was very angry..R:I pty u 4 living with such a horrible dad.
T felt sad:plz tell that u 4gave us
R:ok,I 4giv u only bcoz u r a nice girl.
T smiles.but R was serious.later when T went,R smiles.
Kumud:thus u both fell in luv?
T:no,we came really gud friends.later we started luving each other.but as I scared dad was against it.he even sent ppl 2 kill ranveer.luckily he got escaped.i cud'nt tolerate it.later saakshi dadi became really sick.b4 dying,she told me 2 truths….my mom was forced 2 b in the mental asylum bcoz of dad & garv papa paralyisis is caused by the accident created by the lorry driver who was sent by dad.
K is shocked. Tia cries:I cud'nt tolerate anymore.i felt that I'm in a hell.i was living there with heavy fear.dad tried 2 lock me inside a room 4 days.e did'nt bother about my sufferings.he was that selfish.i tried 2 escape from that house.but dad caught me.
Tia:leave me dad.i hate u.i luv only garv papa who adopted me.i'm going there
Ks:I won't allow u 2 b with garv;who snatched my beloved & daughter.
T:beloved?my mom was never urs.she was always my papa's.
T:he tried forcefully 2 push me inside a room.in that struggle, I pushed him.his head hit the wall & he fell dead.
T keeps crying.K sheds tears:that devil made my daughter suffer so much..
The police officer who is in charge of this case is Omkar nath.Ranveer goes 2 see him:sir,I want 2 reveal a truth that I'm the killer of Kshitij.
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=225686&TPN=2 1
Part-23...Kusum:Kumud looks down. Kusum:Garv had a severe accident after we lost Tia.He was paralysed 4 many yrs.
K is shocked:then?now?
Ku:now he has recovered from it.
K is relieved. Ku:his friend's wife…1 widow is living there 2 look after him.charu
K is shocked:charu?
K remembers meeting akshat-charu in the holi party.K thinks:Akshat is dead?poor guy
K:why did u kill kshitij?
Tia starts crying. K:was'nt he loving?
T:yes.but his luv was disgusting.he was too possessive.he cud'nt even stand me seeing dadi-dada.he did'nt even tolerate saakshi dadi's affection 2wards me.he hated me having friends.bcoz he thot that wil make him lose me.so I did'nt hav friends at all.i was always alone.my only relief was garv papa.i did'nt hav any connection with papa 4 yrs.later I got papa's letter.i came 2 no about his accident,paralyses & recovery. i told him 2 send letters only 2 college.thus I was relieved with his leters I got once in a while.later….dad's friend & his son the rock star Ranveer came 2 our house while dad was'nt there.i was seeing ranveer 4 the 1st time.he sang.that time dad came & shouted at them.he threw them away.dad's friend tolerated it as he respects dad a lot & he had an inferiority complex as he's from a middleclass family.i felt sad.so I went 2 ranveer's house.
Tia tells Ranveer:sorry 4 my dad's behaviour.
R:I tolerated ur dad's behaviour only 4 my dad.
R was very angry..R:I pty u 4 living with such a horrible dad.
T felt sad:plz tell that u 4gave us
R:ok,I 4giv u only bcoz u r a nice girl.
T smiles.but R was serious.later when T went,R smiles.
Kumud:thus u both fell in luv?
T:no,we came really gud friends.later we started luving each other.but as I scared dad was against it.he even sent ppl 2 kill ranveer.luckily he got escaped.i cud'nt tolerate it.later saakshi dadi became really sick.b4 dying,she told me 2 truths….my mom was forced 2 b in the mental asylum bcoz of dad & garv papa paralyisis is caused by the accident created by the lorry driver who was sent by dad.
K is shocked. Tia cries:I cud'nt tolerate anymore.i felt that I'm in a hell.i was living there with heavy fear.dad tried 2 lock me inside a room 4 days.e did'nt bother about my sufferings.he was that selfish.i tried 2 escape from that house.but dad caught me.
Tia:leave me dad.i hate u.i luv only garv papa who adopted me.i'm going there
Ks:I won't allow u 2 b with garv;who snatched my beloved & daughter.
T:beloved?my mom was never urs.she was always my papa's.
T:he tried forcefully 2 push me inside a room.in that struggle, I pushed him.his head hit the wall & he fell dead.
T keeps crying.K sheds tears:that devil made my daughter suffer so much..
The police officer who is in charge of this case is Omkar nath.Ranveer goes 2 see him:sir,I want 2 reveal a truth that I'm the killer of Kshitij.
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