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Posted: 19 years ago
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k guys...seeing d trend i too am starting fanfics!...lol...i loved d other two...sal_remix was very very cute..congrats sal...here's mine..i have cut off a few characters n added a few old and one new...hope u like it:

ashi, yuvi n ranveer r all upset...sitting in the common room they r discussing the future of REMIX..

Yuvi: guys, tia ke bina kuch hone nahi wala...apne band ka toh band hi baj gaya dude..

Ranveer: yuvi, aap himmat mat haaro...kisi aur ko le lenge...

Ashi: look guys, mujhe timbo se pyar toh nahi hai, magar haan..uske jaisi replacement kahaan se doondenge? woh REMIX ki glam quotient thi..Hey bhaggu!! yeh sab kuch abhi kyun karna tha yaar??

just then, a cute gal walks in...she seems nice n sweet...though shez all nervous coz shez new n doesn't know the way around..shoulder lenght dark brown hair, light brown eyes..and a cute face...

"um...xcuse me.. kya aap plz mujhe bataa sakte hai ki prinicple ka office kahaan hai? " she asks the trio apprehensively...

"its just round d corner...sidha ja kar left le lo...gloria tumhe help kar de gi..btw, tumhara naam kya hai?" yuvi asks her inquisitively

"i'm anandita...just joined in..12th grde mein hoon" she answered

"oh..toh tum hamare saath ho...gr8..welcum to maurya!" cheered on ashi

ashi offered to take anandita to jumbo's office...inside jumbo's office, after a short talk about rules n crap, anandita was given ashi's room to stay in coz vrinda had shifted to meher n pri's room...all had taken science n so it got better to study together..

FOLLOWING IS D SECOND PART GUYS:

"woh nayi ladki, anandita, hume toh woh bahut sweet lagi..use dekh te hain toh tia ki yaad aati hai...woh bhi bahut sweet thi...agar Mr.ahuja apna business transfer nahi karte the, toh aaj bhi hum sab saath hote...REMIX ki practice kar rahe hote..." ranveer said dreamily as he sipped his coffee...

"dude, i agree ki anandita tia types hai, magar i think tia se thodi mature hai...u kno..a better vrsion of tia..."yuvi added

"hey guys, yeh anandita hai kaun? subhe se sun raha hoon...ashi, phir tum dono...who d hell is anandita?" sid interferes...

"sid my man, anandita koi nayi ladki hai...pretty nice n sweet..i guess woh yahaan aati hi hogi..." yuvi explained..

just then, anandita enters wid ashi...she is wearing a simple plain red tshirt with beige coloured cargos...wid her hair left open and d usual cute smile on her face, she attracts loads of stares from almost every guy in d canteen...ashi introduces her to sonal masi and rinku...

ashi then takes her to ranveer and yuvi's table...

"hey anandita..this is sid, my best buddy..and sid this is the anandita we were talking about..." says yuvi as he introduces sid and anandita..

"hey sid!" says anandita as she puts her hand in front for sid to handshake... sid stares at her dreamily and stops only wen ashi yells "HEY BHAGGU!! bas bhi karo yaar...woh sirf ek ladki hai!!!"

everyone sniggers, sid is a lil embarased and flashes his cute baby smile..

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Posted: 19 years ago
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how cuute!!!
sid is soooo cute 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
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itsssss very good but why dont you post all the parts in the same topic??

cuz i am kinda lost
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: devilangel

itsssss very good but why dont you post all the parts in the same topic??

cuz i am kinda lost



yeah i agree with shreyasi pls dnt open new topics again nd again u can alwys continue yr fan fics in the same topic u created b4 pls do dat next time or else ill be forced 2 lock yr topic

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