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Posted: 19 years ago
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Wow he said sorry to tai ..... 😛 I am shocked 😕 Anyways then what next pls continue...... 😳 😳 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
#42
omg u have to cont soon!
i like this fanfic!
awesome part...cont soon!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Here is my next part guyz...................

ranny starts moving after telling tia sorry.tia is happy.when he moves,jumbo shouts.

jumbo-ruko!!!tum kahan ja rahe ho.maine tumse jane ko thodi hi kaha hai.

ranny is shocked that now what he wants.

ranny-kyun sir aapne jo kaha wo maine kiya.(in little worried voice).by seeing this tia giggled.ranny saw this and he became little frustated and was also stunned to see tia giggling.

ranny in his mind,

she looks so beautiful when she laughs.i have never seen any girl looking so preety while laughing.

rox-arre rocky ye ranny ko kya hua hai ye jumbo ko answer kyun nahi de raha hai.

rocky-haan yaar,main bhi yahi soch raha hun?aur ye tia ko aise kyun ghur raha hai.mujhe lagta hai ye phir se pitega.

ranny was stiil staring at tia.tia did not knew about this.jumbo kept on telling..............telling,but ranny was unaware about this.

jumbo-tum sun rahe ho main kya keh raha hoon.tum ye saara canteen aaj saaf karka hi ghar jaoge.ye tumahri dusri punishment hai.

sumeet was relieved after hearing this.

ranny came back to his senses when he heard the word dusri punishment.

ranny-kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa???sir lekin humne tia se maafi maang li hai.ab aap aisa nahi kar sakte?

rocky n rox were shocked that ranny who never pleaded or begged in front of anyone not even his dad,is pleading before jumbo.

i will write the next part tom.surely.but u all have to comment on this part.and the next part is going to be cool.

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Posted: 19 years ago
#44
hey only one reply,not fare.plz comment guyz.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#45
it's good continue soon plzzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 19 years ago
#46

sorry guyz for the late posts,so here it goes...............

TIA sumwhere felt guilty for ranny.she thought as ranny who never used to plead in sumone ,he is now begging for forgiveness.she told...........

tia-sir?tia ko lagta hai ki hume isse jaane dena chahiye.ranny ne tia se maffi mang li yahi kaffi hai tia ke liye.

ranny was shocked as tia was defending him,he just kept looking at her....

papa-tia ye tum kya keh rahi ho?is ladke ne tumahre saath batamisi ki hai aur tum usse yuhin jane deh rahi ho.

tia-papa tia knows ki ranny ne tia ke saath batamisi ki hai,but he apaulajize with tia,yahi tia ke liye imp hai.

all this time ranny was looking at tia with a diff behaivour in his eyes,he forgot everything what was happening around,he just wnted to look at tia n hw he is defending him......

papa-okk princes jaise tum kaho.mr.jamwal mujhe lagta hai ki hume yahan se chalna chahiye.tia main tumse baad mein milunga.(he said by huggung her)

tia-okkk bye papa.

tia left frm the canteen with her frnds.

ranny was shooked by rox n rocky.

rox-hey helleo?kahan kho gaye?wapas thapad khane ka irada hai kya.

rocky-u bet dude.

ranny-tia kahan gayi?

rox-isse dekho itna kuch bhi hone ke baad pooch raha hai ki inki madhoobala kahan hai.

rox n rockystarted laughing.

ranny-isme itna funny bhi nahi hai.

and he runs out frm the canteen in search for tia........

he saw tia standing with sum of her frnds.ranny came there were tia was standing with her frnds..............

ranny-tia.............

by seeing ranny all her frnds left....by saying bye to tia.

tia-tia ko tumse koi baat nahi karni.okk.

ranny-tia plz.meri baat suno.actually i am sorry jo kuch bhi maine kiya uske wajah se.

tia was shocked,but she forgived him........

tia-its ok ranny(smiling)no probs.tia ne tumhe maaf kar diya.

ranny-really.so can we be frnds.he said this by letting his hand forward...

tia-why not........she said by shaking a hand with him.......

so this was my next part guyz.i hope u all will like it.comment on it.plzz.

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Posted: 19 years ago
#47
hey guyz this was my next part.plz comment on this,n the next part will be cool with a grt chemistry btw tia n ranny.promise.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#48
ya its nice pleazzzzzzzzzzzzz do continue fast your both the fics.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#49
hey kutie ur fic is too good,i am really have become a great fan of ur writing skills and the way u have written it.plzz cont soon.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#50
ye bheja humko de thakur .jisne ye brilliant fic likha

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