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Posted: 19 years ago
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Part 6

Ranveer was lying on the bed after a hard day's work n debating whether he should call tia or no

"par hum kyon fone kare??…vo kya??…come on we r frds…I can call her…..but I need an excuse…wht if she questions 'why did u call'…phir wht will I say??….wht????? wht excuse???…..let me juzz call her…

R: hello??
T: hello ranveer??..
R: yes tia….this is ranveer…
T: oh….hi…how r u?
R: good….aur aap?
T: tia toh bas tired hai….fashion week ke wajah se itna kaam hai ki kya karu….aaj toh lunch karne ka bhi time nahi mila….
R: tia….how can u do this….u should take care of urself nah…if u don't eat how will u get the energy to work?….agar aap faint hojati toh? Just imagine…omg..
T: chill!! I know ranveer I shuld take care…. Tia just had a plate full of salad…
R: salad?!!…salad se kya hoga….just salad in the whole day….tia..
T: meri deit spoil….
R: bas tia I don't know anything….aap ko ye deit sheit chodna hoga….u have already lost so much weight….u work for so long…carbs are very important tia…
T: ohh puhleez ranveer , tia ki deit….tia moti ho gayegi…
R:nahi tia….u promise to eat ur meals regularly n at proper timings…
T: yes ranveer…
R: tia im not convinced….ur just saying this…promise me…
T: tia promise….fine?
R: ya…becoz tia never breaks her promises….
T: yes…never…
R: yes..
T: so how was ur day at work…hum toh ab tak meri bat kar rahe the?
R: work is good…tiring..
T: ya…
R: tia im getting a second line n it's quite urgent…an important client…can I call u later plz…I
T: ohh k…sure go ahead…ill talk to u later…bye…
R: sorry
T: arey chill…bye
R: bye

Ranveer hangs up the phone….

It was so good talking to u ranveer….ur still so considerate towards tia….ohh ranveer tia misses u so much…tia cant forget those wonderful times we have spend in maurya…when we dating…it was so magical…vo din…oh tia's God???….why??…why has everything changed….why did college end….why do all the good things in life come to such a sad conclusion for tia???….why???
Slowly tia dozes off, frustrated….

Ranveer once done wid the call…..calls tia again…he picks up the fone n
"tia I love you…."


Edited by srkm - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#42
wow bahut cute part tha this i am saying on behalf of kriti 😳


woh-ow ranveer aur tia ka patch up ye main kabhie hone nahi doongi yeh ranveer kabhie meri fikar nahi karta and he is always after tht nincompoop tia wo-oh 😆 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
#43
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont fast can't wait plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 19 years ago
#44
hi i am kutie and i really liked your fic.plz cont soon.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#45
its very nice 😳 please continue soon 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#46
👏 👏 👏 Hope you counted me in!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#47
thkz plzz....ill post the next part in a few hrs...

remixer
woh-ow ranveer aur tia ka patch up ye main kabhie hone nahi doongi yeh ranveer kabhie meri fikar nahi karta and he is always after tht nincompoop tia wo-oh

hey shyla chill pathc nahi..;)just wait n read 😉
but the next part is very cute...thkz to my dear sister for giving me the idea....thkz sis...she is a r n t fan!!

soon then...bye
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Posted: 19 years ago
#48
here's the next part..

Part 7


Everything I do, I do it for you….there is no love, like ur love….and no other could give more love….there is no there, unless ur there….all the time , all the way..yee….everything I do, I do it for u….

Ranveer had just said the thing in his mind as his frustration had reached saturation point becoz tia wasn't picking up the phone….all he sound hear was tia'a romantic hello tune…
Pick up the fone tia….pick up....tia…

R: hello?
T: ohhh hi ranveer…
R: aap so rahi thi kya?
T: vo actually tia dozed off…
R: ohh Im sorry…u go back to sleep, we will talk later...
T: nahi…I have to finish some work…so good u woke me up…
R: tia….aap…u go 2 sleep
T: ranveer chill….i said nah…I'll start work in sometime..
R: okk…so howz life beyond work…
T: there isnt too much life beyond work as of now…
R: ya…phir bhi…
T: well…it's the same…tia n her angel, pri…tum batao howz ur life…tum aur yuvi must be hanging out together a lot rite?
R: hmnn…bahut jaada bhi nahi…kabhi kabar we go out..
T: toh tell tia nah…where do u guys go…kya chal raha hai, college ke baad…
R: kuch nahi tia…bas college ke din yaad aate hai…
T: ha tia ko bhi…specially remix…vo concerts , vo band meetings, ashi ki saath fighting…juzz jamming together…humare amazing chemistry…
R: kya?
T: a..a..tia means all 4 of us together….we just too good…
R: ya totally sufi!!!..
They both laugh
T: toh yuvi ka aasar ho raha hai…
R: nahi tia….hum ab tak same hai….
T: tia nahi manti….don't tell me…. yuvi ki taraf tumare par bhi ladkiya fida hai..
R: ha….kuch…but not like yuvi..
T: toh tum koye pasand hai?
R: nahi tia…I mean u cant just start go around wid someone u havent really meet….n I havent found some1 I can relate too…so dating is pointless…
T: ya….thts there…
R: so aap….aap par toh bahut ladke fida hai Im sure…has to be…
T: hmnn…ranveer!!!!
R: tia ur so beautiful….so…I don't blame anyone for liking u..
T: thanks ranveer….but now ur pushing it…Im not some Julie Roberts allrite..
R: unse kam nahi….
They both laugh n tia…blushes to herself..
R: so any crushes?
T: nahi..
R: how come?
T: bas…kyon nahi mila…
R: hmnn…
T: ok now its 11.30 aur tia has to get back to work…
R: yes madame….gnite…I mean sorry happy working!!!
T: how mean…
R: tia I was just joking…
T: I knw…sweet dreams….
R: ya…n don't work for too long….okay…bye
T: yes baba..bye..

Edited by srkm - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#49

hey greattttttttt going........ cont soon and one question.. how do you change the title??? like how did you add prt6page 9 and all??? plzzzz tell me..

and awesome ficccccc👏👏

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Posted: 19 years ago
#50
hey devilangel....well i love ur fic, love:its meaning...i think its great..n u change the title by goin on the first page n editing ur post(which is obviously the first)....when the editing page comes...in the subject option change the details according to the pg....
i hope u understood...or pm me...
one more thing i really appreciate u for always commenting on my fic....thkz....n ya gr8 goin for u too!!

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