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srkm

@srkm

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Posted: 19 years ago

#191

hey guys srry for writing 2day part so late...but do read n comment though its haphazardly posted...

comment...both ways - gud or bad or discontinue...
n also tell me how is my idea of day 2 day update of the weddin is gud or is it gettin too strecthed n borin...

plzz tell me yaar guys...im confused!!

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Divya

@divya_92

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Posted: 19 years ago

#192

nice 1 Mitali, 👏

yipee im the first to reply 😉 😉

continue soon

cant wait 😉

Divya

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swati

@sweta2005

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+ 8

Posted: 19 years ago

#193

its very nice like a count down pleazzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz do contifast asap.

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nikhita

@nikki_k

Explorer

Posted: 19 years ago

#194

it really nice cont soon.... 😛 👏 👏

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Alomi

@2kool

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Posted: 19 years ago

#195

its sooo nice
continue soon 😃

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swati

@sweta2005

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 19 years ago

#196

its nice pleazzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz do continue fast asap.

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sonam1509

@sonam1509

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Posted: 19 years ago

#197

hey mitali!!!!!!!!!!!

ur fic is getting interesting but plzzzzzzz write just a bit about ashi-yuvi plzzzzzzzzzzzzz

n ya woh play ka part jaldi se post kar do plz

luv
sonam

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disha

@kutie

Inactive

Posted: 19 years ago

#198

hey mitali plz cont soon.
ab sabar nahi hota.

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komal

@komal_ashiyuvi

Inactive

Posted: 19 years ago

#199

HEY MITALI ..........

yaar plz jaldi se continue kar..........

n me 2 agrees wid kutie(can u tell me ur name)

ab sabar nahin hota

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srkm

@srkm

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Posted: 19 years ago

#200

srry guys for not writin for 3 days...but was very busy...n culdnt post...forgive me..

Day 7 (24th)
Tia was shopping all day in the heat n fell sick in the evening she went to sleep at 7pm n she had nt called up ranveer in the entire day…….so ranveer calls her up at 9.45pm
R:tia aap pura din kaha pe thiii aapne humne ek phone bhi nahi kiya aaj aap humne aabhi se bhool gayi hain aapke frdz kya aa gaya u hv forgotten me………
T:ranveer aisa nahi hai I was shopping the whole day k ur busy n tia has to do everything so its nt easy…….
R:aisaa hi hai aap humne bhool gayi he ws irritatin her widout knowing tht tia ws already unwell
S: tia tum kya kar rahi hoo go to sleep ur not well nah aur fir agar tum unwell ho jayogi toh kaise jaleega
T:haan pappa bas vo ranveer se baat kar rahi thi….
S:kk bt sleep fast
Meanwhile ranveer heard all this tht shes not well n he ws irritating her n started feeling guilty
T:haan bolo…..
R:aap ki tabeyat theek nahi hai tia kya hua apne humne bataya kyun nahi
T:kya bataun ki mein akele shopping kar karke unwell hogayi…….
R:tia hum phone rakte hain aap soo jaye gudnite n plzzz take care n im sorry
T:hnnmm gudnite byee
Tia was feeling bad she thought she over reacted n ranveer ws so concerned abt her n she had been rude to him bt thn it ws nt her fault she hs been doing everything till nw…..thinking about all this she wet to sleep
On the other hand ranveer had taken an off for tomorrow n he thought tht he will go to tia's house in the morning n be wid her the whole day tomorrow so tht she does not get mad at him n also tht he could keep a watch on her as she ws not keeping well……

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