Love:its meaning..fan fic!!Last part pg31

hey guys ! I was bored so i thought i would write a fan-fic because i have read so many fan-fics which were excellent! so here goes:

Love: Its Meaning?

all our maurya characters have gradutaed from maurya and now they are thinking of settling down...but the main change is that ashi and ranveer are together and are deciding to get married and tia is in a very serious relationship with yuvi!

its five years after graduation and ashi and ranveer decide to double date with their friends tia and yuvi just once before they get married.. but tia and yuvi dont know about that becasue they still havent been able to forget their feelings about ashi and ranveer.so during thier date....

T: so whats up with you and camel nowadays ashi?

A: umm..tia nothing much you know we are just fooling around as a couple.

Y: phir bhi..ashi whats up with you dude? hume lagta hai ki you're hiding something from us.

A: woh yuvi..ummm its nothing much..actually

just then Tia notices the engagement ring on ashi's hand

T: ASHI....TUM AUR CAMEL SHAADI KAR RAHE HO???????????????

Y: WHAT????? ASHI..SACH SACH BATAO YOU'RE MARRYING RANVEER DUDE?????

R: bana..aise kuch nahi hai..humne bas ..

T: tumne bas kya camel? you just dcided to marry her right?? camellYOU!!

R: tia why are you so bothered.. i thought we wr over ages ago..aap to yuvi bana ke sath hai na..aapko humari itini phikar kyun hai?

T: woh....kyunki..

as she goes on stammering even yuvi is shocked that ashi is gettting married..... he starts thinking evilly and he gets an IDEA!!

he goes up to the front of the restaurant and then..

ok.SO GUYS should i continue writing or is it too bad?please post your comments either way

its really nice
plzz continue

WHOA!!!!
i mean just da story's started v have twist...gud one gurl!!!
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shud keep writing coz this fic's different

CYA
CHARZ 😆 😉

ur fic really roxxxxxxxx
it's super-duper cool, cont asap

ya its really nice....please continue

👏 👏 👏 Too good! 👏 👏 👏

KK I am writing the second part now also cuz i am bored lol..

Suddenly the lights in the restaurant goes off and the music stops ..
A: (thinking)yeh yuvi kya kar raha hai aage jakar? i really hope he is not jealous
R: (thinking) I hope yuvi bana humare engagement ko destroy na kar dein. (aloud) Ashi.. yeh what is happening in the restaurant?
T: must be some special surprise by yuvi.tia knows yuvi is a sweetheart.
suddenly very soft music can be heard.. and a voice sings:
" Na jaine kaise..lagta hai aise..tumahara hai intezaar "
Ashi is just so surprised she couldnt do anything.the only thing she kepy thinking of was that timbo-thakur aab eksaath ho jayenge and my relationship is falling apart...
tia is shocked and all her old memories kept coming back to her she couldnt resist herself.. all she wanted to do was go and hug ranveer
Ranveer is shocked too hearing this song becasue this was his and tia's special song and he hadn't heard it in more than five years.." he couldnt resist himself..and before he knew he was singing
" Dil ki yeh dhadkan, sanso ki saragam, hai kehne ko bekraar..tumhare rahenge hum..tumhare hai hum"

yuvi is happy his plan has succeded ..he turns to look at the threesome and the sight was not at all what he expected...HIS WHOLE WORLD CAME CRASHING DOWN BY HIS SIDE AS HE SAW ..

no one likes it?!?!?!?!?!?! please tell me guys if i should stop writing

plssssssssssssssssssssssssssss continue.....uv ne aisa kya dekh liya?????pls pls pls

Hey its different, evethough ashi n ranny as a pair seems weird. But please continue!