Remix'd teachers Part 6 on p13 READ PLSS

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Posted: 19 years ago
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hi guys...this is my first fanfic...plsss post ur comments...

Part 1


Everyone has been called to the gym. They are all wondering what's going to happen.

Sid-Dude… (Nudging Yuvi) What do you think…kya hone wala hai?
Yuvi- Mujhe kya pata? Mitra ka koi aur ek rule hoga…
Ashi smirks.
Ashi- Ha most probably!
Meanwhile Tia and her angels are talking about their fashion show and Shyla and Latty are lurking near by, deep in conversation, planning evil deeds.

Jumbo enters followed by Prof. Mitra, who is wearing black as usual. Everyone stops talking and look at the pair. They are all thinking the same thing-"aab kaun sa rule bachahe?"

Jumbo- Aap log sab soch rahe hoge ke suddenly meine aap logo ko yaha kyun bulaya.
Everyone starts muttering in agreement. Prof. Mitra raises his hand in a threatening manner to quieten the group.
Mitra- Quiet, varna tum sab ke weekend plans cancel hogaye ge.
This stops everyone instantly, especially Tia n her angels. Their Fashion show was to be held in the weekend.

Jumbo- Tumhare teachers aur meine ek surprise plan kiya hai tum sab ke liye.
Yuvi, Ranveer and Ashi exchange confused glances and so do Tia n her angels.
Everyone is thinking- "Surprise? Kaisa surprise?"
Edited by niya - 19 years ago

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Posted: 19 years ago
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it's really gud plz continue 😊
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Its awesome!
plz cont soon....mitra and surprise dun go togehter unless its somthing evil!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Its really good plz continue.......
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Please continue fast its good 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Wow! 😃 Great fic! 👏 👏 Please continue 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
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puhleese reetwija ko suspense mein mat rakhna
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Good work 👏 I always thought you wrote well, but had never seen fan fics from you.

Am glad that you are putting your writing skills to good use.

Keep it up and waiting to read the next chapter
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow......very nice different beggining....do continue asap
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Plz do continue
it's very well written

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