Merry X’mas, Btfl Stranger CLIMAX, PPL!!!

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Hey guys,

This is my second fanfic. The first one was a spoof on Remix - in Kekta's style... anyway, this one is about Yuvi and Ashi (my fave pair) and A Beautiful Stranger... hope you enjoy it!!

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It's Christmas time of the year again. Not that it makes any kind of difference to most of Maurya's students. Of course, if MP was still here… Ashi breaks out of her reverie and turns in the direction of the loud and unbearable noise that was issuing from outside the window.

Ashi: What the…!

She walks to the window and peeps out. Then she sees it. The most rocking car on earth. It was sleek red and simply out of this world…

"I must have a go at this baby even if I have to marry the owner for it!!!"

She runs out of the building and towards the new love in her life… then she sees something, more like someONE, and her heart skipped a beat. Hell, it stopped beating altogether for a couple of seconds… then it started beating again. Real fast. He looked like a Greek-God. Like he'd stepped right out of a Mills and Boon book. Not that she'd ever read such crap EVER… it was the garbage only Tia and her "angles" read… that is, if they had the brains to know what "a-n-d" was… of course she used to leaf through her mom's copies once in a while – just to mock it, mind you!

Anyway, getting back to the drop dead gorgeous male standing 10 feet away from her: He was looking at her now. And all she could do was stare back with awe. Towering at 6 ft 2 inches, he was all power. The muscles on his arms rippled with strength and his eyes blazed with obvious interest as he checked her out with slow, seductive thoroughness. A shiver of excitement streaked through her spine. He didn't have the typical lover-boy beauty, she realized. No, he had much more. He had the unconventional, highly attractive intensity of…no-one Ashi had seen in her entire life. His face was full of character and dark mysteriousness. His body…man, she found her knees shaking like never before…

He was walked up to her. She looked into his deep, dark brown eyes. His eyes never left hers. She couldn't bring herself to look away… not that she was crazy enough to ever want to look away from those mind-blowing, brilliant eyes. Was she dreaming? Was this unbelievably Male piece of art really standing there in front of her? Her thoughts were interrupted for the second time when he opened his mouth to speak. Then her eyes fell upon his full, beautiful mouth. She unconsciously licked her own lips in anticipation, unable to take her eyes off this new highly fascinating object. He spoke. His voice was deep and rich. She could imagine what he would sound like if those lips were whispering naughty somethings in her ear…

"I'm Sam", said this beautiful stranger.

"I…Uh… Ashi, I mean Anvesha", she finally managed to squeak out.

"What is happening to me?!!!", she thought. What indeed… she'd forgotten all about the car.

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Parachute. thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
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really good job...keep it up! 👍🏼
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Thanks guys!

But I'll only continue if I've got 7 responses... coz the only reason I'm posting it is for you guys to read... and if you're not interested, what's the point in posting?
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey plz continue...my response makes it 5...shud i post 2 more to make it 7?.....coz i am dying to know wat happens next....u hav written it in a lovely way 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey even i liked it and yeah no doubt its pretty sweet first segment, so u hav 6 readers now..and u urself read it..so 7(kidding!!!).

BTW many read d post but dont comment, so u neways hav quite a few readers hence contnue!!!!!

4 bhaggu's sake,puhlease...
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Posted: 19 years ago
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see my reply again makes it 7....and wat torsa said is right...ppl read but dont comment...and we r commenting....sooooooo plz continue
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey! ibet u'll get more than 10. its gr8, so keep it going atleast 4 ppl like who read u'r fics.


happy remixing!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey bhaggu !!!!!!
plzzzzzzz post the next part soon !!
else 😡
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey bhaggu sonali 😡 😡 😡 ...from when we r waiting for the next part...when will u post it????????
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Posted: 19 years ago
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plz continue...u hav a talent 4 writing 😊 😊 😊

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