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Posted: 19 years ago
#11
pls continue

good start 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
#12
cont.but make it little more longer
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Posted: 19 years ago
#13

ATLAST TIA'S DREAMS CAME TO LIFE. RANVEER AFTER MUCH PERSUDATION HAD COME BACK TO MAURYA. THE HAPPIEST PERSON WAS TIA BUT DIDN'T SHOW THAT ON HER PRETTY FACE COZ SHE DID NOT HAVE THE COURAGE TO TELL RANVEER HER TRUE FEELINGS FOR HIM. SHE WAS SCARED TO DEATH WHAT IF RANVEER REJECTED HER LOVE? WHAT IF HE CHOSE SOMEONE ELSE. LITTLE DID SHE KNOW THAT RANVEER FELT THE SAME FOR TIA; HE LOVED HER MORE THAN ANYONE


IN RANVEER'S ROOM HE IS STARING AT TIA'S SNAP AND SAYING
"TIA BAS EK BAAR KEH DEEJIYE KE AAP HUMSE PYAR KARTE HAI BAS EK BAAR" ASHI ENTERS AND SAYS "CHALO THAKUR CAF ME HUM SAB KITNI MASTI KAR RAHE HAI TUM YAHA AKELE BAITHE HUE US TIMBO KE PHOTO DEKH RAHE HO. BUCK UP DON'T B SUCH A PSYCO, YE LOSER GET UP TUMHE SUIT NAHI KARTA HAI. CHALO"
AT THIS RANVEER GETS UP AND WALKS TO THE CAF WITH ASHI.
EVEN TIA IS AT CAF. WHEN SHE SEES RANVEER SHE FEELS SOMETHING IN HER HEART ALL OF A SUDDEN SHE COULDN'T GUESS IT WETHER IT WAS HER LOVE OR HER PAIN. BUT THERE WAS SOMETHING. RANVEER SITS NEXT TO VRINDA ASHI NUDGES VRINDA AND CALLS HER AND SAYS " MATHE TUM MERE BAJOO ME BAITHO US TIMBO KO THAKUR KE NEXT SEAT BE BITHAO GOT WHAT I SAID?" VRINDA NODS AND SAYS "TIA IDHAR AAO NA RANVEER THODA MOVE KARO NA" TIA RATHER SHYLY COMES NEAR VRINDA AND SITS. RANVEER.
ASHI SUGGESTED A GAME OF SPIN THE BOTTLE GAME WHERE THE PERSON SITTING OPPOSITE ARE SUPPOSED TO ASK THE PERSON TO WHOM THE BOTTLE POINTS A QUESTION AND THAT PERSON IS SUPPOSED TO ANSWER TRUTHFULLY. FIRST TIME THE BOTTLE POINTED TOWARDS LATI SID WAS THE ONE WHO WAS SITTING OPPOSITE HE SAID "LATI DO U LIKE SNITHING OR IS THAT UR HOBBY?" EVERYONE LAUGHS AT THIS LATI WILL FEEL EMBARASED AND WILL WALK AWAY. THE GAME PROCEEDS. .
AFTER A FEW ROTATIONS THE BOTTLE POINTS AT ASHI HERSELF. NOW UV HAD TO ASK ASHI A QUESTION. HE ASKS" PSYCO HAVE U EVER BEEN TO A MENTAL ASSYLUM" AGAIN EVERYONE LAUGHS. . ASHI ANSWERS "YA HAMESHA MUJHE HI TUMHE CHECK UP KE LIYE LEJAANA PADTA HAINA?" AGAIN ALL WILL GIGGLE.
NOW THE BOTTLE POINTS TOWARDS TIMBO. VARUN WAS SUPPOSED TO ASK HER A QUESTION. HE SEES RANVEER'S FACE AND ASKS TIA " TIA KYA KABHI BHI TUMNE KISISE SACHCHA PYAR KIYA HAI; KISISE APNI PYAR KA ISHAR KIYA HAI?" TAIA WILL SEE RANVEER'S FACE ONCE AND RANVEER TOO LOOKS AT HER. THEN SHE SPEAKS " HA TIA NE KISI DEHAATI SE ITNA PYAR KIYA THA. PAR US CAMEL KO KABHI TIA KE FEELINGS KA KUCH PATA HI NAHI CHALA. HAMESHA TIA USE HI PYAR KAREGI TIA HOPES KI WHO BHI TIA SE HI PYAR KARE TIA KE ITNI KAREEB AAJAYE KI VAAPAS JAANE KA KOI DARR NA HO."
AFTER THIS THEY ALL PROCEED. NOW THE BOTTLE POINTS TOWARDS PREE RANVEER SAT OPPOSITE TO HER HE ASKED HER "AAP IS DUNIYA ME SABSE ZYADA PYAR KISE KARTE HAI PREE?"
SHE ANSWERED "TIA AUR MEHER"
AFTER THIS THE BOTTLE POINTED AT NAKOOL SO MEHER SAT OPPOSITE TO HIM SHE ASKED "WHOM DO U LUV THE MOST IN THIS WHOLE WORLD?" HE SAID "U OFCOURSE BABES"
THERE ENDED HIS TURN NOW THE BOTTLE POINTED AT RANVEER SO, NAKUL ASKED HIM AFTER A FEW NUDGINGS FROM ASHI AND YUVI "TUM KISISE PYAR KARTE HO? WHO IS THAT GAL NAKOOL IS WAITING JALDI DUDE OUT WITH UR HEART"
RANVEER SAYS " HA HUM KISI EK KHOOBSURAT LADKI SE BEHAT PYAR KARTE HAI. I THINK KI WHO BHI HUMSE PYAR KARTI HAI LEKIN DARTE HAI KEHNE SE." NAKOOL SAID DOOSRE QUESTION KA ANSWER DIYA NAHI" ASHI SAYS "ONE QUESTION AT A TIME. THEN IT WILL B THE TIME FOR THEM TO GO TO THEIR FIRST CLASS.
SHALL I CONTINUE?

Edited by rock - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#14
puhleeeeeezzzzzz get tia and ranvir together 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
#15
plz........................continue!!!!!! i luv it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#16
wow coool dude! 👏 👏 👏 continue fast!! 😊
hurry up!! 😉
r u sleepin!!?! 😆 😆 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
#17
goooooddddd job 👏

wake p if ur sleeping, puhleeesssseeee 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
#18
hey dude u may not like ur fan fic but love it so....................... plzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue 😃
rock thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
#19
yeh rite guys.
and
they go to the class. ranveer gets a call frm his home so, he had to leave
ah im not getting deas puhlees help me. 😳 will sum1 pm me wat they want?

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