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Posted: 17 years ago
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told you all am brimming with AA shot ka ideas since yesterday ☺️☺️...so just trying a hand at it...☺️☺️...am in total AA mood today☺️☺️...but oh well please excuse me if u feel its more like an AY shot😆🤣...though i would try my best not to make it AY😆☺️...am so excited am writing spontaneously after quite some ime😃...thanx to adiiiiiiiiiii for being my inspiration and making me want to writte like anything☺️🤗... last what i wrote spontaneously was a poem
though i want it to be a shot but i am writing small small parts coz writing the whole shot at a stretch requires an entire day which i dun't have at my disposal so me wld write the parts as and when i get time but i promise the whole shot would be completed in two days time flat😃 so keep reading the small snippets and keep making me die to write more by your enthusiasm😳😳
and the name of this shot issssssssssss...well hold your breath.....☺️...itssssss
TUMSE HI
i dun't know why am i stuck with the letter "t" when it comes to titles of my shots/fics😆😆 but this name fits to the T the story line i have in mind☺️
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*Breaking News*
Shakira's Gorgeous Shikaari
Aditi Sanghvi once again showed to the world that nothing is impossible if you have the courage and belief to make it possible. Shakira the famous don who was known for his sleak tact of alays managing to keep the police on the run has finally been aressted NO not by CBI pf the CID or the FBI and he likes but by one single individual and her indegniously BRILLIANT brain-Aditi Sanghvi, all it took her to arrest him was a bit of wit and immsens confidence thats he will go for the kill and like always she did went for it and emerged successful. The goverment has decided to honour her spirit and bravery with a Veer Chakra Award. Itsonly coz of the likes of Aditi Sanghvi that our otherwise doomed society still has a hope of survival. Hats off to you Aditi the youth of today and tomorrow would definatly look up to you and then should coz you are an inspiration
*article authored by" Smriti Singhvi
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Reading this in the morning daily surely brought a huge smile on Aditi's face😳...she was indeed feeling immensly proud of herself and her accomplishments and why shouldn't she?...at such a young age she had reached to this stage and above all her achievments were not just her own she was actually doing something to better her society her nation and in a way the world itself😳..morever for her this was no less than a dream given the fact that Aditi of the yester years could never even have thought of being what she is today
Kal ki Aditi did not even had the self esteem or self confidence to stand on her own two feet she needed someone around her all the time else she felt insecure. She had come to this city hunting for a woman who was not even her motnehr. Well not biologically atleast but for her she had always been the mother she neevr had wheneevr she thought of the word "mother" only one image would crop up in her mind and that was Hers. So yeah she had come to find her to quesito her why she had left her at such a tender age, little she had know then that she had nor ight to quesiton her what so ever coz there was no relatioship between them in the firs palce itself. And this truth left her shattered and disheavelled. she felt a dier need to hang on to her namesake mom's aanchal coz she felt that this was her only security and her rejection would totaly leave her bleeding. She aligned her identity with her mother's identity never wanting to have her own niche never wanting to carve a name for her own self everything in her life then revolved around her mother her only ambition in life was to be called her dotty to be loved by her and nothing else.
Until one fine day when love came knocking at her doorsteps in the form of HIM. Since the minute he stepped into her life everything changed not just the sun was much more brighter and the flowers much more beautyful and the moon much more serene and the stars much more closer to attain but besides this her life's philosophy itself changed she started seeing herslef in a new light in the light that glittered trhough his eyes, she started believing in his belief that she was somehting different thats he had the fire to excel she started seeing the dreams which he made her see which she was not even aware existed somewhere deep down in her heart she started following the road he walked not knowing that this was what her heart always wanted to follow she started looking up to him to reach out and seek him as if he were hero not knowing this was the strength the gift god had send her way and in his strength she found her own strength and in him she found her reason for existing. For her the biggest sense of achievment was not this award but that streak of pride she would see in his eyes that awe in his face which he always feels when she achieves something as if it wasn't she recieving the apploudes but rather it was he himself and i reality it really was him coz without him she was nothing. She was everything she is because he loved her....
And that "he" was sitting in Alabama and watching the Breaking News on TV and was smiling away like a maniac gone lunatic with hyper joy. His Shonna being presented with the VEER CHAKRA...his shonaa....he felt as if this was the most successful moment of his life he felt as if he had finally accomplished the mission for which he had walked this earth..it was like the happyest senssation he had eevr experianced and he desperatly wanted to g back to her and tell her how proud he was to be called hers.....but he kenw thatw ould have to wait coz right now duty was calling him but before going on he wanted to spend few secret thoughts in which he was with her.....and there sitting in her beautyful home she too wished he was here with her she wanted to see him sweep her in his arms and whilr her round and round and round with eternal passion but she knew that she would have to wait but right now what she can do is whisper "i love you" to him in the silent air hoping that somehow he would hear it and whisper the words back to her......
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hope this was a good read and the background is set to make u all go kicking and excited as to what lies ahead...to know who is this "him" and to exoeriance their magical rendezvous in their thoughts tune in here again😳...you know your comemnts and suggestions and criticisms r always what i look forward to mooost😳😳....muuuuah😳...can u all guess why did i title it "tumse hi"?😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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omg u wrote this but didn't even read my PMS! shame on you!!!! Go read! *sob*
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Posted: 17 years ago
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godddddddddd!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
looooooooooooooonyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
muaaahhhhhhhhh
lots of kisses n huggies 4m ma side bebu
wat a fic yaar ? sooooooo luvlyyyy
tujhe sachi shakespear ki heir hona chahiye tha
muuuuuuuuuuuaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhh
luv u 4 such a beatiful AA shot
luv
gun😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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firstly i must say i luv the name of the fic tumse hi...........it reminds me of one of the most beautiful song n it relates to the story so well....................kaash the kggk story goes on as the track u hve written ..........thn i wll hve no regrets fr kggk endin or hatred fr kekta....................as usual i m sayin i luv the way u write n express their feelin............its lukin as aditi is expressin her feelin...........its so pure feelin .......hve no words to expresssss............ 👏.........
luvvvvvvvv u soooo muchhhhhh......hugggggs n kisses
dnt take long time to continue ths fic yaar..........i m eagerly w8in fr the next part............ya w8in fr u to continue tamana n teri yaadein also...........
Edited by sweetzkarish - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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That's what I am right nowwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SHITTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT!!!!!!!!!!!! DO I NEED TO SAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY ANYTHING LOONSSSSSSSSSSSSS🤗 okie herre it goes!!
I mean this was soooooooooooooooooooooooooo... UNEXPECTEDDDDDDDDDD!! The title of the shot with many parts should beeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee UNEXPECTED!! Meannnnnn I am literally soooooooo shockkkkkkkkedddddddddd!! Soooooooooooooo SHOCKED!!
You know I saw yesterday's episode and in that I saw that aditi was working against injustice and criminalsssss (PS: Well that tells she isnt the murderer and now i hope that bhains is...and you know what's the ebst part?? So does ashuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu!! He is policeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!
Mannnnnnnnnn this is soo unexpected loons...shittttttttttttttt....shitttttttttttttttt...shitttttttttttttt!! Aditi-Ashuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu FICCCCC!! FIRST EVER FIC ON THEM!! I loveeeeeeeeeeee themmmmmmmmmmmm🤗🤗🤗 and I loveeeeeeeeeee youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu🤗🤗🤗
Priya rockedddddddddd yesterdayyyyyy...man she has some figureeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ☺️☺️ She was looking gorgeous in those shortsss!!😳😳 Sizzling should I sayyyyy... but seriously I soo wantedddddd AA shot/fic sinceeeee priya joined KGGK and finallyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy!! You know whatttttttttttttttt??????????? YOU ROCK BABYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!🤗
Main ab read karne jaa rahi hoon...read karke batati hoonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn...love youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu loonsssssssssssssssssssssssss🤗🤗🤗 Muahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!! 🤗🤗🤗
PS: I am going to read it...but abhi seeeeeeeeeeeeeeee....CONTINUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!
Edited by *nitz_rocks* - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hehe thaaanx guys😳🤗...i dunno i feel like trashing this totally and insted just write one scene which is in my mind☺️☺️...kal hyperness main i wrote left right center jo bhi mann main aya i just went on writing😆☺️...but now am feleing what crap i have written its a pleasure knowing u all liked it but still me feeling i should scrap this...coz i dunno what to write aage😆😆...okieeeeeeeeeeeee dunt come with a stick behind me me would think of something and continue😃...love u alll muaaaaaaaaaah🤗
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: gungun

godddddddddd!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

looooooooooooooonyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
muaaahhhhhhhhh
lots of kisses n huggies 4m ma side bebu
wat a fic yaar ? sooooooo luvlyyyy
tujhe sachi shakespear ki heir hona chahiye tha
muuuuuuuuuuuaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhh
luv u 4 such a beatiful AA shot
luv
gun😊

shakespear ki heiiiiiiiiiiiiir?😆😆😆 yaar mujhe aaj tak thee aur thou main differance samjh nahi aaya tu bol ri hai me aught to be his heir😆😆 mera writing style padh ke toh bichare ko heart attack aa jata kahaan meri horribly tooty footy angrezi with n number of gramatical and spelling errors and kahaan uski perfectly polishes immaculate english😆
and above all i dunt like shakes at all hes way too tragic and dull mujh jaise hyperness personified person ko woh kabhi nahi pasend aa sakta 😆😆
but me glad u liked it😳😳 though i personally feel its below par😆
thaaaanx for taking the time and reading it gun your comments always cheer my heart😳🤗
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweetzkarish

firstly i must say i luv the name of the fic tumse hi...........it reminds me of one of the most beautiful song n it relates to the story so well....................kaash the kggk story goes on as the track u hve written ..........thn i wll hve no regrets fr kggk endin or hatred fr kekta....................as usual i m sayin i luv the way u write n express their feelin............its lukin as aditi is expressin her feelin...........its so pure feelin .......hve no words to expresssss............ 👏.........

luvvvvvvvv u soooo muchhhhhh......hugggggs n kisses
dnt take long time to continue ths fic yaar..........i m eagerly w8in fr the next part............ya w8in fr u to continue tamana n teri yaadein also...........

u know why i chose this name?
well i somehow felt that there was some inherent similarity between AY and AA like in AY's case ashi was his inspiration..."and she continued to inspire him all life"☺️ she was the one who taught him to believe in himself and his dreams to believe in magic and the fact that if we try we can surely make impossible possible☺️☺️..she was theone who made him a man a real man and brought him to the real world got him rid of all his prajudices his apprehenssions and ihibitions and made him strong too too strong and confident to passionately follow his heart and write his own destiny...☺️☺️
and somehow i felt that ashu did the same for aditi i know ekta would never hsow this but thats what my heart wants to believe thats why i created this notion like tammy is living alive real pretty much a part of the entire AY story i wanted even this thought to be a reality☺️,,,and the best part is that it makes perfect sense considering the fact thats he was so obviously in love with him that too head over heels wala love and now that its a sureity ki shes no murder what so ever and her feelings for him were for real and she indeed ended up excelling in thep rofession in which he belonged i couldn't help but believe that he was the inspiration that got her going he and his love like ashi had always been for our yuvi...☺️..and yahaan pe we all know that he loved that bhains but i sitll want to believe that no matter what happens no matter if ahsu loves her back or no her love for him would always be there she would always feel his presance even when he is not there with her...."na hai yeh pana na khona hi hai tera na hona jaane kyun hona hi hai"..i felt both yuvi and aditi were alter egos of each other reflecting the same feelings for their respective love ie ashi and ashu and thats why the name "tumse hi"☺️☺️ coz everything in both yui's and aditi's life is coz of their beloved "tumse his'"☺️☺️
thaanx for noticing the name karry and also relating it to the T with the story i so wanted that someone atleast notices the link between this name and both AY and AA ☺️☺️ this name this song and that mix of ninnuuuuu is eternity personified for me bhoolna chahun toh bhi i can never forget its magic☺️☺️
i promise i won't take forever to continue this one am hoping to finish it entirely by the end of this week only...waise bhi i can't handle th nightmare of three fics on the move and neither of them nearing completion😆 i wld get tensed and then ideas wld stop coming and again i wld go to my prominent writers block phase😆 and as for tammy and ty geeeee i told u i need some ideas for the next chap of ty and tammy ke liye i need motivation i am hell scared to continue it coz its so dammed complicated the aage ka story is so so overly loaded with emotiosn ki i dunno whether i wld be bale to do justice to it or no but let me feel inspired and hyper again and i wld continue it😳
love you kaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaary😳🤗u guys r the ones who make me want to write more so always keep the enthusiasm going😳...muuuah!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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abbeyyyyyyy oyeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee y din i gt my specl invi like vrytym 2 read ur ficssss!!!!!!!!!! dekh isbaar bina invitatn k hiiiii padh liya!!!!!!!!!!! but as a mttr of fct its gne ova my head...thgh tht ws ystrdy bt i cudnt reply tabhi..reasns i shal tel u!
1.its clld tumse hi (apt apt apttttttt)
2. coincednc or whteva u wnna cll it...i hd tumse hi goin on while readin dis
3. tumse hi playin in d bckgrnd sent me in2 d tumse hi vmix n geet adi mood....
4. i undastud it but nt evn thtttttttttttttt wel 2 gve a thesis on it
so 5.......il hv2 go bck 2 it🤣
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Posted: 17 years ago
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😆😆😆vanshhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh😆🤗
u did not get special free paases to read my fic coz my ym is totally concked i haven't accessed my ym account since like an etternity now and thats why i haven't even met u since agesssss😭😭
hope alls well bandeeeeeeeeeeeeeri😃 🤗
lolz u in tums hi syndrome again r youuuuuuu?😳😳
okie no thrashing for not understanding it i know bander;s ka brains r of miniature sizes but trust me if u don't hop in our home like reaal sooon na then u wld be banned from our home forever we wld find another cute adorable monkeey to amuse us...."hmphhhhhhh"

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