Alzia SS 'The Malik Of Sultan's Heart' last part pg 32

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SHIVANGI

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Posted: 9 years ago

#151

Originally posted by: overactor

okay read it, this update is dedicated to ur imported kamariya😛😆

😆 😳
HAAWWW Razia ne mirza ki izzat pe hath dala.. 😈

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SHIVANGI

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Posted: 9 years ago

#152

😃 😳 😈
[:D/]
😈 😈 😈
RAZIAAA... bechare ko hamam me akela pakar
NAJAYAZ Fayda utha rahi thi uska... 😈
Monster on ATTACKING MODE !!
Wah wah..ladki.. Keep it up!! 👏 👏
Aise hi apni aag me ghee dalti rahiyo mohtarma 😃 😃
jung me bache ne ek JUNGLEE kissi kya de di...
inka to andar ka JANWAR hi jaag gaya!! 😈
Apna to mirza ke sath chedkani kar li..
aur jb uske armaan jage to madam bhug li..!! 😡
Matlab.. itne seductive atyachar ke bad He deserved one CHUMMA yaar !! 😳
Aur kon tha wo NAMURAD jisne bahar shor machaya.. 😡 😡 😡
Apne khat-pat se razia ki aag pe pani daal dees dusht! 😡 😡

Sonu.. Wo aap aur arshia kya khti h...?? haan..
. GUTTER .. gutter to the core!! 😈
👏
Mazzzaa aa gaya.. 😃 😳
I wanted to mention many lines... Lekin fir jagah kam pad jati post me 😉
😆 👏 😃 Kyuki sare paragraphs ghusedne pad jate... SS ke
😆 😆 AAGE AAGE. AAGE... JALDI

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overactor

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Posted: 9 years ago

#153

Originally posted by: lionsroar
😃 😳 😈
[:D/]
😈 😈 😈
RAZIAAA... bechare ko hamam me akela pakar
NAJAYAZ Fayda utha rahi thi uska... 😈
Monster on ATTACKING MODE !!
Wah wah..ladki.. Keep it up!! 👏 👏
Aise hi apni aag me ghee dalti rahiyo mohtarma 😃 😃
jung me bache ne ek JUNGLEE kissi kya de di...
inka to andar ka JANWAR hi jaag gaya!! 😈
Apna to mirza ke sath chedkani kar li..
aur jb uske armaan jage to madam bhug li..!! 😡
Matlab.. itne seductive atyachar ke bad He deserved one CHUMMA yaar !! 😳
Aur kon tha wo NAMURAD jisne bahar shor machaya.. 😡 😡 😡
Apne khat-pat se razia ki aag pe pani daal dees dusht! 😡 😡

Sonu.. Wo aap aur arshia kya khti h...?? haan..
. GUTTER .. gutter to the core!! 😈
👏
Mazzzaa aa gaya.. 😃 😳
I wanted to mention many lines... Lekin fir jagah kam pad jati post me 😉
😆 👏 😃 Kyuki sare paragraphs ghusedne pad jate... SS ke
😆 😆 AAGE AAGE. AAGE... JALDI

😳 thanks dear

razia ki gutterness abhi aur saamne ayegi😉

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SHIVANGI

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Posted: 9 years ago

#154

Originally posted by: overactor

😳thanks dear
razia ki gutterness abhi aur saamne ayegi😉

😃 I am waiting for it... jee bhar ke 😈

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486792

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Posted: 9 years ago

#155

Aaj ki headlines-'Ishq Ki Qaid Mein Hai Delhi Sultanate Ki Sultan'!!!!😳😳

Yes,she loves him.He destroyed her dreams,her rule everything but she still loves him inspite of everything😳 Though now,she is angry at him.

And that hamam scene...OMG!!!!!!😳

Mirza ki sazayein bhi anokhi hain😆

BTW,reading this I was reminded of the Malik's Prisoner Wife😳

This was AFSAW as usual.👏👏👏

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overactor

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Posted: 9 years ago

#156

Originally posted by: Astoria
Aaj ki headlines-'Ishq Ki Qaid Mein Hai Delhi Sultanate Ki Sultan'!!!!😳😳
Yes,she loves him.He destroyed her dreams,her rule everything but she still loves him inspite of everything😳 Though now,she is angry at him.

And that hamam scene...OMG!!!!!!😳

Mirza ki sazayein bhi anokhi hain😆

BTW,reading this I was reminded of the Malik's Prisoner Wife😳

This was AFSAW as usual.👏👏👏

she is in prison again na 😆 but abhi wifey banne me time he😳

mirza ki har ada is anokhi

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darkwarrior200

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Posted: 9 years ago

#157

Behen you just exposed out Razia's inner wild crazy firey intense desires 😈😈 Shes perhaps more wild than him🤣

Kya tha yeh...shes feeling him...like everywhere ...? ☺️ ☺️

Dude and he was so happy...🤣🤣 MIRZA WILL BE MIRZA

I AM FEELING SHY TO POINT OUT MY FAV LINE HERE...you idiot what did u do ☺️

rukk ill put the starting rest apne aap samajh jaana...

she slowly moved her hands around his waist
☺️

Why is it that always in all SS ALL hamam scenes are so intensely wild and yours specifically where Razia did all the action and aroused Mirzas cardinal senses...look what he went to do to her then... ☺️

when the MONSTER IN THE CHEST BREAKS FREE some people are unstoppable...hence i will never forgive the outside sound or whoever stopped them from doing whatever they were doing...😡

The neck kisses ☺️

hey you deserve award when it comes to guttery scenes...they did not kiss in this but i DONT CARE...the intense stuff that happened more than made up for it...it was A.M.A.Z.I.N.G

Ohh yaa and i loved the starting scenes also...she in his special room and some lines like "Aap hamari ishq ki qaid mein hai"
and looking at the empty side of his bed and saying "aap jald hii yahan hongi hamari BEGUM banke"
could he get any more romantic ?? ❤️

Also...aaj toh Razia ne nehlaya...itne dino se kaun nehla raha tha janab ko...😡🤬 please tellme it was ZAROON MIYAN... i beg u...

and this this

she was unable to even say that he should get his maids do the task, she just couldn't let anyone touch him, no one should lay her eyes on him, especially in this state. Even the thought of anyone touching him made her mad, she would kill the person who ever laid her eyes on him. 🥳🥳🥳

very good...possessive razia👏👏

yes now when i read it again and again...our SS DID have many similar traits...the "no one else can touch u part"
the doctor parts...the i will make u mine part...the keep me in the dungeons part...aur kuch hai ??

CONTINUE SOON... !!!
⭐️
⭐️
⭐️

Edited by princess200 - 9 years ago

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overactor

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Posted: 9 years ago

#158

Originally posted by: princess200
Behen you just exposed out Razia's inner wild crazy firey intense desires 😈😈 Shes perhaps more wild than him🤣

Kya tha yeh...shes feeling him...like everywhere ...? ☺️ ☺️

Dude and he was so happy...🤣🤣 MIRZA WILL BE MIRZA

I AM FEELING SHY TO POINT OUT MY FAV LINE HERE...you idiot what did u do ☺️

rukk ill put the starting rest apne aap samajh jaana...

she slowly moved her hands around his waist
☺️

Why is it that always in all SS ALL hamam scenes are so intensely wild and yours specifically where Razia did all the action and aroused Mirzas cardinal senses...look what he went to do to her then... ☺️

when the MONSTER IN THE CHEST BREAKS FREE some people are unstoppable...hence i will never forgive the outside sound or whoever stopped them from doing whatever they were doing...😡

The neck kisses ☺️

hey you deserve award when it comes to guttery scenes...they did not kiss in this but i DONT CARE...the intense stuff that happened more than made up for it...it was A.M.A.Z.I.N.G

Ohh yaa and i loved the starting scenes also...she in his special room and some lines like "Aap hamari ishq ki qaid mein hai"
and looking at the empty side of his bed and saying "aap jald hii yahan hongi hamari BEGUM banke"
could he get any more romantic ?? ❤️

Also...aaj toh Razia ne nehlaya...itne dino se kaun nehla raha tha janab ko...😡🤬 please tellme it was ZAROON MIYAN... i beg u...

and this this

she was unable to even say that he should get his maids do the task, she just couldn't let anyone touch him, no one should lay her eyes on him, especially in this state. Even the thought of anyone touching him made her mad, she would kill the person who ever laid her eyes on him. 🥳🥳🥳

very good...possessive razia👏👏

yes now when i read it again and again...our SS DID have many similar traits...the "no one else can touch u part"
the doctor parts...the i will make u mine part...the keep me in the dungeons part...aur kuch hai ??

CONTINUE SOON... !!!
⭐️
⭐️
⭐️

i know what u liked, i added that line that follows the one u mentioned, at the end 😆 i was like kuch adhoora sa hai is sb me 🤣

raz has the rights to be wilder, mirza is dangerously hot man ☺️

hamam scenes have to be hot, we r not dumb like cvs who can only let mirza watch her 🥱 action kahan he😡

hamam me if they had done it, to fire around bed ka kya hta janab-e-aali 😆 bless that sound maker 😛

he bathed alone 😆 obviously😆 the maids were just getting the stuff ready, mirza thought of calling mohtarma and sweet torturing, only to be surprised 😉

possesive razia would realize mirza's reasons behind killing yucks 😉

i told u na they have similarites, bas urs was sweet mine was bold 😛

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darkwarrior200

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Posted: 9 years ago

#159

Ohh yes u are right...GET THE FIRE AROUND THE BED UPDATE ALREADY...ohh well...patience patience arsh...it will be worth the wait...IT BETTER BE😈

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overactor

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Posted: 9 years ago

#160

Part_16

Altunia was dressing in his bedroom, he smiled as he looked at his mirror reflection, he recalled her touch. The way she had touched him today she had never touched him that way before, he was used to the heavy breaths of ladies around him, he knew what impact he had on the opposite gender, whenever he practiced sword fight or bathed, the girls would giggle and blush and sweat, it was so natural for him, but she never behaved this way, she had been with him since he was 10 and she was 5, they were best friends, he used to be with her always, and she had seen him that way many times, but today her reaction was so different, so wild, he smiled again as he recalled all their memories.

~Flashback~

Razia (7 years old) crying sitting on a bench, Altunia came to sit by her side

ALtunia; kya hua Razo?

Razia; milja..milja wo...

her innocent voice and her cute weeping was so musical to him, he wiped her tears

Altunia; Razo? kya hua btao na?

Razia; hamari gudiya..wo shajia aapi hamari gudiya le gai

she cried more

Altunia; arre tumne khud hi to apni gudiya ki shadi krwai Shazia k gudde se

RAzia; haan, pal wo ganda he, hamali gudiya bht pyari he, ami kehti he wo hamare jeshi he

Altunia; arre to kya hua dusri gudiya le aate hen na

RAzia; milja...hamen bhi kya esa dulha milega?

she looked at him innocently

ALtunia; kis ne kaha tumse? nahi!!!!

Razia; aur agr mila to?

Altunia; hum uska sir qalm krdenge

she smiled and hugged him

Razia; milja aap hamesha hamare saath rahoge na

Altunia; haan..hamesha.

he hugged her tighter

Razia;hum ammi se kahenge hamara dulha to milja hi banega

she smiled heavily with a spark in her eyes and ran away

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Altunia ; bachpan se hi aap sirf humse mohobbat krti hen na mohtarma, hamari razo bhi hamari thi, aur mohtarma bhi, sahi maenon me to humne jung aaj fatah ki hai, aapke ghusse se hamari mohobbat jeet gai, ab hamen aapki kamzori pta chal gai he, ab aapko hum seedhe raste pe yun le ayenge

He smirked as he buttoned his sherwani

Razia was sitting on her bed, she was boiling, how could she be so weak for him, why did her desires run so wild, why did she behave in such a desperate way. But before she could react further a maid entered

MAid; Malik ne aapko nashte pe bulaya he

Razia; hamen bhookh nhi

Maid; unhone ne kaha he agr aap nhi aayi to wo yahan ajayenge

Razia; ye na hamari jaan le k manege, Ya MAula himmat dena hamen

she went in anger and sat down, beside him. There were only one sofa in the huge dining room where they both sat.

Altunia; aap sb ne maiz saja di ab bas, aap sab jaiye, hamari khaas qaidi hamen nashta krwa dengi

the maids left and they were all alone in the room.

Altunia; chaliye khilaiye hamen

RAzia looked at him in anger, she took the bread and moved it towards his mouth, he ate the bread, licking her fingers with it.

Razia; ye kya badtameezi he?

Altunia; konsi badtameezi mohtarma? hum to bas kha rhe hen

Razia; humen sb smjh a rha he

Altunia; hamen bhook lagi he khilaiye na

she took some more bread, he kept licking her fingers with every piece of bread that he ate, her fingers were wet.

Altunia; jalebi...

she took a jalebi and moved it towards him, she tried to avoid eye contact with him, he grabbed the jalebi in his mouth and moved her face towards him with his hand, then he moved his face closer, with the jalebi in his mouth and with his eyes he gestured her to take a bite too. She ignored and looked away again, he turned her face back, moving closer to her, the jalebi hit her lips, the juice faliing on her lips.

Razia was again feeling weak, his stare, his eyes just hypnotized her to follow his command, helplessly she bit the jalebi, he didn;t bite still, just held it, he moved closer, and again the remaining jalebi hit her lips, the juice fell on her lips and chin, traveling down her neck slowly, Altunia saw the juice, he removed the jalebi from his mouth and kept it aside, and quickly grabbed her neck with one hand and waist with other, he licked the juice from her neck tracing it to her chin and then to her lips, RAzia held the cloth of the sofa tightly, clutching it. He stopped when he reached her lips, he stared at her lower lip seductively.

He licked her lower lip slowly, Razia closed her eyes, he then grabbed her lower and sucked it. She wanted to surrender completely, just give in and let him do whatever he wants to, but no, she was not only Razia Sultan, she was also his very student, she never learned to giveup, he never taught her.

She pushed him away and stoodup.

Razia; aapka nashta hogya ho to hum jayen Malik?

she faked a smile and left. Altunia lay down on the sofa and sighed

Altunia; qatl bhi krna he aur marne bhi nhi dena, ye kesa ishq he aapka mohtarma?

Razia went to her room and broke a vase

Razia; Razia razia..kya hogya he tumhe, wo Subedar hen tumhare mirza nhi. humse hamara sb kuch cheenne wale hum unhe ye sb..nhi nhi bas bht hua aaj k baad hum unhe khud ko chunne tak nhi denge...lekin is dil-e-nadaan ka kya kren hum, jo unhe dekh k hi machal jata he...kyun wo hamari taaqat se hamari kamzori ban gaye hen kyun.

Fatima entered her room, Razia jumped up

Razia; Fatima? tum yahan kese?

Fatima; hamen Malik ne khud bulaya he aapke saath rehne k liye'

Razia; delhi me sb kese hen? sb theek he na?

Fatima; kuch theek nhi ..sb kuch ajeeb hogya he

Razia; hum mirza ko kabhi maaf nhi krenge

Fatima; shehzadi, mirza aapse bht mohobbat krte hen, unhone jo kiya wo galat fehmi ki wja se

RAzia; wja jo bhi ho FAtima unhone jo kiya galat kiya, hum unhe kabhi maaf nhi krenge

At the otherside, Shazia was worried, she had heard something important and she was scared, she wanted to inform Altunia, but she was unable to leave her house. She dressed up and was leaving the palace when Atigin stopped her

Atigin; kahan ja rhi hen aap begum?

Shazia; kahin nhi wo bas...dargah ja rhe the

Atigin; hum bhi aake saath chalte hen

Shazia had no choice but agree,

"hum kese pohnchayen ye khabar aap tak mirza, jinko aap apna dost samjh rhe hen wo hi aapke dushman he" she thought

Altunia was with Zaroon.

Zaroon; miyan..Delhi ka kya hoga ab?

Altunia; hamen kya pta zaroon, ye log jaane aur jane unki huqumat, hamen bas hamari mohtarma se matlab tha, us YAqut k rehte wo galti pe galti krti jati aur akhir me unhe...wo khairiyat se hen hamare saath hen bas kaafi he

Zaroon; lekin tumhari wja se unka takht

Altunia; tum jaante nhi kya miyan zaroon? hum nhi to koi aur gira deta unka thakt, phir ya to unka sir qalm hta ya phir wo...hum sochna bhi nhi chahte, humen khud se door kr k unhone saare wo kaam kiye jo in turkon ko unke khilaf khade hone ki wja den, tumhen yaad nhi kitni baar aisi sazishen pehle bhi hui, tab to hum the unke saath unki dhal ban kr ab agr kuch hta to? wo bahadur aur aqalmand hen pr unka dil bht ziada saaf he, unhe logon k andar ki burai dikhai nhi deti, aaj nhi to kal ye to hna hi tha, hum ne kiya to kam se kam wo mehfooz to hen

Zaroon; miyan tum sach me deewane ho, unki nafrat bhi manzoor he tumhen?

Altunia; wo aur humse nafrat? miyan agr hum tumhen bta den na k unhone aaj kya kiya he to tum aisa bolna to door sochna bhi chod do ge

Zaroon; acha! chalo bhabhi ko to tum mna hi loge hamen yaqeen he tum pe

a soldier came running

Soldier; Subedaar sahab, Delhi ke thakht pe Muiz-ud-din Bahram Shah ko bitha diya gya he

Altunia and Zaroon stood up in shock.

Edited by overactor - 9 years ago