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Posted: 9 years ago
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hey Ritu. 🤗

Just read your OS dear. Sorry for replying so late. I am quite badly stuck at work so not able to be on IF much at all.

The OS was a beauty really ...the conflict, the contrasting thoughts, the dilemma, the fear of losing each other , the understanding of each other they had at least superficially and what they felt internally ...was so very brilliantly brought out by you. Loved it. Please write more dear ... U made me go to Parud land again ...not that I have left it ...but yes it was a qucik recap of the beauty that Parud were.

Cya soon dear !!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: aditi97

Thank you so much Rithu for the pm
This is fabulous 👏
Those were the golden days of Rangrasiya...
And you took me back to cherish them
Yes what did Rudra want, a witness who would give testimony for him and enhance him professionally or a wife who would redefine his life and sooth him personally...
Of course as a bsd major he wanted a witness hence he got those papers... But then why he feared to show them to Paro... Does he feel that after seeing them she would leave him, but then why this fear, why this feeling?
When the human inside him is dead how can it be awaken by a distrustful beautiful woman...
But was she distrustful? No certainly NOT...
She understands him, knows why he kept her alive, she can see through him and a girl like her would certainly be a good wife..
Maybe she is the woman who can heel the wounds given by his mother..
But will it be right for him to let this innocent girl enter in the hellish world in which he is residing?
I just love this internal conflict in Rudra..
And so beautifully these two understand each other.. They don't need words... You have beautifully put it with the help of the Red ghagra 👍🏼

Thank you for bearing this long reply 😆
U were as usual excellent 😃



Aditi 🤗 good to see you!
Thank you. I'm glad I was able to take you back to those perfect days of RR.
It was a classic Head vs. Heart dilemma for our Rudra banna 😊.
And he gains so much if he lets her in but what if he looses his mission 😲
I love long replies. They make my day 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: custodian75

Lovely OS. It was like watching rangrasiya all over again. It had been a long time.


Thank you 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: tinamehta

Beautifully captured the initial anguish between the two when they fought against their mutual attraction. Brings back happy memories of rangrasiya.


Thank you, those were the days weren't they 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: NavyaKavya30

Splendid !! Thank you for this OS... Reading this story was like taking a beautiful walk down memory lane. With every single emotion I was right back there , in Parud's beautifully crafted world...each and every dialogue written is a masterpiece...loved how you have penned Mohini's sarcasm 👏 ...Rudra's barging in through the door with his trademark stride...his subconscious talk with the little girl and above all Paro's emotions attached with her lehenga because it was her mother's ...everything has been put on paper with perfection.

Rithu please do keep gracing us like this from time to time...its writers like you who can keep the flame of Parud love burning with their writing skills.


Thank you, I hope you enjoyed the walk 😊. How could I forget those signature moves by Rudra and his Kakisa 😆.
I like giving Paro little things which connected her to her past 😳
Will do dear, as often as time permits 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: thakurpreeti

Hii Rithu,

Beautiful os, Rudra became sad when paro gives him papers, he thought that now he will not his bride n only witness, n paro also thinking abt Rudra as a husband, both have feelings for each other, but both are not aware abt their feelings


Thank you 😊
I think even at that time they subconsciously knew that they were connected and hated to be apart.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: -BhavyaEsther-

Lovely One Shot Dear Rithu...

PaRud said "No" for Red lehenga,so Rudra concern&care for his bride.both of thm r connected through their soul so tat Rudra can feel paro's inner scream,Finally Paro acceptes her new lehenga for her wedding wit Rudra...

I loved Kutty Paro &Rudra's convo,Even CV's r nt think this kind of scene,I loved ur imagination..

Rudra's reply for Kutty Paro is awesome,"I was taking good care of her"so he ready to accept his wedding wit Paro..(Caring future Husband)

OMG Rudra s so scared to take d papers 4m his Paro's hand.his heart needed her so much...

Rudra hold his Paro's hand tightly that means he doesn't want to lose his Paro for that damn testimony papers...

Paro forget her marriage wit varun when she saw d red weeding attire & said its belongs to her mothers..

Rudra teased his Paro by saying "U want 2 sons nt daughter",Aft all Paro trusted BSD & her Rudra..

Rudra saw the papers &feel relieved...

Rudra helped Paro &take the dress to dry clean,Paro felt happy.. in this scene he acts like helping Husband...With Ur Writing U always Bring Our PaRud Alive...Thanks for this Lovely One Shot...

I think,I listed all d scenes bec I loved each & every scenes & dialogue of Ur One shot..

Finally I fall in love with Ur writing ...

Love U Rithu...


Thank you dear 😊. Parud never needed words did they 😆
Kutty Paro 😃 i like that. Thanks for pointing it out. Part of me made me feel I shouldn't write it as Rudra would seem unhinged😳 but the rest of me felt Rudra did a lot of crazy things those days 😉.
Yes, Paro leaving Rudra would be restart his Khoobsurat aurat sydrome again na
I don't think she was affected by Varun that much. She was aware that he was her husband but I doubt if she felt anything beyond curiosity for him.
Rudra is model hubby na😆
🤗 That is so sweet of you Bhavya

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Marvel-freak

That was a lovely one shot!!


Thank you dear 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: -She-loSarun

Hey rithu,
after a long time, I read ur work.
A quite a peaceful read.

I loved it


Hi, It's been a while hasn't it. Hope all is good at your end.
Thank you 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: pree_28

The Dilemma.. Inner conflict, confusion, unnoticed attraction towards each other Rudra paro
faced 😳 you described it all so beautifully.. ⭐️
This phase of complexity in relations, situations yet they feel care for each other.. this is the beauty about Parud. No matter what they stood beside each other even when they considered each other as enemy.
Thanku Ritu for writing about their inner conflict and dilemma😊
Always wanted RR to explore it more, as on screen Parud expressed only by their eye's and expressions..rest was left on us to imagine😳


@bold: Don't you think Rudra with his 8-saal experience should have realised something?
That's made RR special. Most other shows the leads are always against each other till they supposedly fall in love. Here Parud maintained some decorum in front of others and bickered in private 😊
And how well we imagined 😃
Thanks for dropping by pree

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