Parud OS: The Healing touch - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank you dear 😊
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Thank you 😊
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Originally posted by: bhavyaesther

The healing touch os really touches my heart.,tats y i read it again.,,.Awesome,wonderful,beautiful,lovely these r d words which r struck in mind 2 describe it.,bt really i hav no words says abt ur Os.,i loved it..


Oh wow!This makes me feel so good.
I'm glad I could make you re-read my writing 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: custodian75

Lovely OS Rithu. U have packed so much into one night. I love this Rudra who is rude but tries to be sensitive to Paros feelings.


I love this Rudra too 😳. He must have given Paro an emotional whiplash but was so entertaining 😆.
Thank you
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweet_gargi

Thanks for the PM Rithu🤗.

This OS was amazing. You bring out Parud's character so well. I just love reading you OS and FFs. Keep writing more and PM me...


Thank you 😊. I'll PM you whenever I write
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Originally posted by: Marvel-freak

This is such a beautiful piece of writing.


Thank you 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: pree_28

😃 Rithu.. Thank you for writing this, reading it just send you
in RR time like watching the episode. Loved how both care for
each other.. Rudra don't want to show his vulnerable side to her,
that he can get hurt, can die too..as he don't want Paro to feel
vulnerable ever because he is there to protect her..That much
protectiveness banna😳 and can't see even a small cut also on her
skin as if it will leave deep scar😆 where he himself is injured badly..

Lovely OS 😛


Thank you Pree 😊
Rudra was one of a kind. But Paro was smart enough to read his mind 😆. She always knew what he needed
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: RangParud

Really loved this OS a lot .

if u have any other ideas like continuing this OS into a FF it would be awesome😛😛

please do write like this more😛😛


Thank you dear 😊. There is not much I would change about the story before the Maha Shivratri. That's why I prefer to write small scenes in between the big ones.

But thank you for the encouragement
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QUOTE=-Mukti-]wow, just wow.👏 Loved it loved it loved, Thanks for writing such a wonderful OS.
Thank you Mukti 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sorry Rithu I m so late
This is such a lovely OS
Thank you for writing this and taking me again into the Parud land 🤗

For her he is a Jallad who destroyed her life, took away her freedom, happiness, family everything... When the same man she hates to the core calls her his adharmi patni , she shatters...
But when she sees her Jallad in pain all the hatred is gone and the concern that dwells within her for him surpasses it all...
She is ready to nurse her jallad, serve him dinner and make him feel good...
Isn't this love ? But how can she love the same man who destroyed her life?
She is not the only one to have this conflict between mind and heart..
Her Jallad shares the same feeling...

And I always used to think why Rudra didn't want to show his pain to Paro, was it because he was nasty, or was is because his mother was the only one whom he showed his real self but she abandoned him , thus he feared to warm up to people..
But you gave me the real reason that he was the one to protect her,whom she could look up to whenever she was in danger and thus he didn't want to her to see his vulnerable side, he can also die..
Such a beautiful point u have made here I just loved it 👍🏼

Rithu you describe the parud equation so well 😳
While reading I could totally imagine the scene in front of my eyes
Loving your version of Rangrasiya 👏😊
And sorry for the long post😛


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