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sonia_1

@sonia_1

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Awesome OS...very well written 👏

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Zee

@aamir18

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Haww, Miss. Choti! You never fail to move me with your brilliance! You have such amazing work!

Your words flow like water. It's completely effortless.

Keep writing! More and more and more and more... 😊

(Btw, on an unrelated note, I've been obsessing over K S K K. One of the sweetest SS's I've ever read! And my family is Kashmiri, so all the better 😉)

Edited by aamir18 - 11 years ago

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Aishwarya

@Aish002

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

I just love how you write about things that are seemingly unimportant or innocuous and then join all those together to give the readers a picture, which feels so real..the way you described Rudra's attire and the scene when he was in the interrogation room..made it so real..i.e. u even described the glint of the buckle on his belt...marvelous choti...👏

So no torture...interesting take..so is she gonna go back to her village..can we get Rudra in undercover...pls..😉.he comes to her village...she recognizes him..but keeps quiet for reasons unknown to even her...n then village romance...cute moments where Rudra gets into trouble and Paro keeps saving him..*le me dreaming...*

I hope you continue...😊

Ah..now I know why u used a Latin title for the seven sin series too..well..looking forward to learning some latin words from..cos I sure would be reading all your work...

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SS88

@SS88

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

I demand you continue this. It was absolutely fantabulous.

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Maya

@What_the

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Res...

You're on a roll, aren't you?

Unres...

After the light/sunlight glinting off mirrors constantly, I like the way you made it glint off his belt buckle..

The tiny details like these, that simply seem to flow effortlessly when you write, are like those aromatic spices in food - the taste just wont be the same without them..

A new concept, a new approach - me likes!!

Me also likes that she is quite enamored by the ruggedly handsome officer..no matter how much he seems to scare her...

His last statement packed quite a punch... I can totally imagine Rudra saying that - tujhe mere paas wapas aana ni padega..

Needless to say, there has to be a sequel...this cannot end this way..

Love,

Maya (what_the)

PS: What's with everyone coming up with foreign language titles? Did you read la douleur exquise by sonata24?

Edited by What_the - 11 years ago