PaRud OS: VALUE....

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Posted: 11 years ago
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hi guys, once again a boring weekend without parud.so i thought to write this. this my first time i am going to write some thing like this so forgive me if you found it a crappy piece and for wasting your time.

VALUE...

BSD HEAD QUATER

Rudra is pacing across the room furiously as paro's words are still ringing in his mind.

FLASHBACK:

(morning time)

Paro was on cloud nine, her joys were no bound. she could not even hide her smile infront of her Maithili jija,when she was asked about her glowing face and radiant smile.

she just blushed , blushed furiously till her cheeks becamered like ripen tamatos.

how could she explain her smile ? how could she explain to her jija what she got last night?how could she explain some one that finally she got the title of wife in true meanings?how could she explain to herself that she was finally marked by the person whom she loves more than her every breath??

yes, she was marked, marked by her love, marked by rudra as a part of his life last night ,which ONLY belonged to him and would belong to him ONLY till the last breath.

here rudra woke up and first thing that stroke his mind was the last night ACCIDENT,which occurred due to his emotionally weak state after watching his mother happily taking with that man who snatched her from him and his father forever.He was in such a vulnerable state he opened up himself infront of paro,like he never did before any one and end up messing everything. her soft touch was like a magic .for that night only ,he wanted her sooth his pain subconsciously ,which was ripping his heart like a sharp knife from his child hood,which was haunting his soul as if thirsty for his blood.so he did that MISTAKE subconsciously.

now he was angry on himself and embarrassed.

paro came to the room to offer him his morning tea ,blushing like a newly wedded wife, but how could he has look at her. still he tried to act like nothing happend,but looking at her flushed face his fake act vanished.so he tried to vent his frustration and anger on her by saying those fake words to her .

rudra: look, last night ...that..accident ,i did not mean to...(now he is damn frustrated as for the first time he is stammering before paro) it was a mistake.THAT DOES NOT MEAN ANYTHING TO ME.you have no VALUE in my eyes and will never have that.

paro was shattered,ACCIDENT!!!! how could he say that,it was the most beautiful memory for herand it did not mean anything to him!!she felt like someone stabbed thousand knifes in to her heart

paro(with teary eyes):majorsab that accident is the most beautiful memory for me.please don't say it a mistake. i know ,me and my feelings never have any value in your eyes,but one day you will acknowledge it but that day i may not be with you. you will call my name but i will not hear. you will seek my forgiveness but i will never forgive you.Only that day ,at that that maoent you will know the VALUE of mine in your life.but it will be late,because you will never get me back.


FLASH BACK ENDS...

FLASH BACK ENDS...

what did that mean?rudra can not conclude himself.so he decides to leave that matter there.

suddenly Aman came running to that room ,he is trembling like he has seen a ghost.

rudra:what happend aman ,why are you trembling?

aman:sir ,wo..wo bhabisa...

rudra:what bhabisa?????(now he is losing all his patience and a sudden fear appeared in his heart)tell aman ,what bhabisa, what happened to paro???

aman: she is in the hospital she tried to save your father from tejawat and was shot by him.(pause)she is no more,she died on the spot.

those words hit him like a thunder ,shocking every cell of his body. DIED,NO MORE, he doesnot want to recognize aman's words as if these words are in not in the book he ever read.

is aman joking??paro what!!

rudra ran , ran like a menac to the hospital and the sight before him almost ripped his soul.paro is covered by a white bedsheet.his whole family is crying,she is looking relieved.

rudra went to her and tried to her calling her several times to wake up.seeking ,almost begging her forgiveness for his behaviour ,telling her about his true feelings towards her due to which he always maintained a distant from her. he said that what is her real VALUE in his life but she didnot listen and left him behind taking his happiness with her forever.

"Some times you never understand the VALUE of the person in your life till they are with you,

you only aknowlede their value when you lost them."

*****end*****

ps:please do like and comment below. all positive as well as negative comments are welcome. pls suggest me how to improve my writing, by showing the mistakes.

thanks for reading my os.

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Jaz1990 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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That was superb! You write really well!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ahhh the perfect angst piece of work I was looking for at the moment. Very brilliant work. Just my cup of tea!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very good😆. I felt tears in my eyes reading Paro died😭. I hope it does not happen in the serial.Do write again.👏👏👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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U killed paro 😭 why why?u wrote well but ...plz continue n make her alive na 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice ! ❤️
paro baisa dead 😭 not used to sad endings .😔
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It was a nice shot.
Got the message of it loud and clear.
Nice to see him repenting after what he did to her.

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