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milinda.shreyz

@milinda.shreyz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

haanji, yeh kaisa cliffhanger ending hai...main kuch nahi sunne wali hoon...u have to have to continute...

nehi toh main dharna ansan pe baith jaungi bilkul paro ishstyle.😆

accha main thing, awesome FF dear.just just brilliant and enticing...I read all four at a go, and that left me craving for more. u hav a way with words dear.seriously wish to read more from you.

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Aruni.

@Aruni.

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#42

Really really nice OS! What bliss it would have been if the actual scene in the show lead to this... Kher chodo. It was nice reading. Please write more!

And thanks for the scrap!

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Lavender mist

@bluemoon255

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#43

awesome os. pls write more😊

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IronButterfly

@IronButterfly

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

What a lovely tale.

Well written.

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shafia Akhtar

@IISHAFS

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#45

that is soo awesome i like it

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anisa79

@anisa79

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

awww!! Lovely ending, please write more on this forum!

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kdsubs

@kdsubs

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#47

This is your first attempt at writing? What the! You had me fooled.

Extremely well written. The small details, the nuances in their movements, body language and thoughts. 👏 👏 👏

And Major-sa has an Aman-sa inside his head 😆. Loved the inner voice who seemed so much like Aman if he actually had the guts to answer back to Rudra.

I loved the explanation for the fire-phobia. A small child can well fear fire after seeing her parents' funeral pyre. And why hasn't Rudra connected the dots yet in the show? His grey cells shut down when Paro is around or what??

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Maya

@What_the

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: kdsubs
This is your first attempt at writing? What the! You had me fooled.

Extremely well written. The small details, the nuances in their movements, body language and thoughts. 👏 👏 👏

And Major-sa has an Aman-sa inside his head 😆. Loved the inner voice who seemed so much like Aman if he actually had the guts to answer back to Rudra.

I loved the explanation for the fire-phobia. A small child can well fear fire after seeing her parents' funeral pyre. And why hasn't Rudra connected the dots yet in the show? His grey cells shut down when Paro is around or what??

Thank you for your wonderful comment!!

Especially loved the reference to Aman...hadn't thought of it...but now that I think abt it, makes complete sense!! :)

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#49

loved the os beautifully done loved how rudra inner conversation that was very loved how noting matter but her after she got hurt loved it thanks for the pm.

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Hunnybunny3

@Hunnybunny3

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Posted: 11 years ago

#50

What a wonderful OS. All the parts were beautifully expressed and their inner thoughts and voices gave the story more depth and vision. It was a delight to read. Do continue writing more on Parud.

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