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Posted: 11 years ago
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Paro...She was not there!...Rudra could feel his heart just tightening up,,,, squeezing up.

Thadd!!!... the sherbet glass became his victim, the glass squeezed and thrown down at the floor...

Thadd!...The door of the changing room fell open...

There stood Paro...

Seeing the Rudra avatar fuming away... Just then when she thought of going back behind the door, away from him, she felt big arms circling her... His hands feeling her back, as if to check if she is for real, if she is alive...

Rudra stepped back...Paro tried to catch his eye, but all he did was to catch her wrist, to drag her down...

He said in a low tone with a soft look at her slender wrist...Chal tumhari sangeet hai, tum bin kya maaza...

Tum bin tho mujhe saaza... this he could never ever tell her...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank you sooo much...I am just getting too effected by endearing SANISH on screen and offscreen, the in depth and engaging analysis and the lovely pics posted by the forum members...
That it makes me happy to write.

Thanks to all who are reading, do post in your comments.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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This might sound like a stupid question, what do you mean by nyc?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sara_in


This might sound like a stupid question, what do you mean by nyc?



nyc=nice 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I loved it I wish u would writesomething longer :D <3
U r a very good writer
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very nice. Why don't you try continuing the story. This was a lovely start.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow !! zor se seeti for u, sara !!👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: -BaRul-ParAz-

I loved it I wish u would writesomething longer :D <3

U r a very good writer


You gave me the idea,,, i am trying my hand in a FF now... after starting that i feel i am a OS type... my thoughts are pretty random and have very short term memory.

And when i start writing i want it to end soon...was even planning to delete the FF thread i created... i am new here, i couldnt find a delete button!!!!😳

Mera FF will become a SS i think😭😭...😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: shreya_rc

wow !! zor se seeti for u, sara !!👍🏼


Thank you...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: custodian75

Very nice. Why don't you try continuing the story. This was a lovely start.


That is a very good idea... should try...

but for that i need:

1) more of PARUD on screen, i just hope Ashish is back in action soon and gives us more lovey dovey scenes.

and more importantly

2) i need to read and reread all the wonderful posts to borrow ideas...😳

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