RangRasiya OS- A Touch of Turmeric

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DDC1

@DDC1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

To those who've read my first OS & liked/loved it & let me know, THANK YOU so much. Means a lot to me.

To the silent readers:

please say a word or two

don't just leave

and make me blue

Corny I know ...😳

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Asmita88

@Asmita88

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

What I liked was it was true to the character u didn't show love blossoming out of blue rudra was still angry about idiocy of paro coming at midnite n paro still misunderstood rudra

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Madhushesha

@Madhushesha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Hi, nicely written. P lease send me links when you update or write. Tha nk you

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MaroRudra

@MaroRudra

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Loved it! We need more writers like you on this forum!

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TheMogambo

@TheMogambo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

She looked him dazed, confused not sure what to think or feel while his eyes continued to hold her gaze. Rudra held out his hand as he enigmatically said

"One day you will truly understand what you owe me and what to thank me for Parvati. For now come, let me take you to your room. Thank you for the Haldi "

@ pink...yes..we hav to wait for that day **sigh**

interesting...very interesting !!

My heart too was dhak-dhak till i finished..

Very well-written...👍🏼