Savior PaRud SS Part 2 Updated Pg5 Dt06.02 - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks Sofna
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ooh i loved the concept and the first chapter! i cant wait to read about the attack and what he is gonna hear her say! please send me pms of your updates!
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Very nice story. Waiting for next chapter. 😊
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Wow di awsome :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: batgirl67

ooh i loved the concept and the first chapter! i cant wait to read about the attack and what he is gonna hear her say! please send me pms of your updates!

Thanks dear
I'm so happy that u loved the concept n first chapter
I'll update soon n reveal one by one...
n will pm u also
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: bolt

Very nice story. Waiting for next chapter. 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Savior

Part2

Paro Serve the food to Dilsher when Rudra enter with loud bang n make both Dilsher n paro jump from their seat almost in panick but soon relief to see Rudra when Dilsher said what is wrong with u...or don't u want to go but Rudra cut him n said direct to Paro "sun aaj tu iss kaamre se bahar nehi jana n iye mere ph le n koi bhi pareshani ho toh n tum ranawat iha se hilna nehi koi bhi knock kare mein ...mujhe kuch urgent kaam hain isliye..."

Both Paro n Dilsher look at Rudra who shgurrged it when Paro said I wanna see her ,

Rudra stopped n said it's not possible

Paro:-pls...just once ...I'll not disturb ...I just want to see how is she?I ...Ipls ek baar mujhe usse mila dijiye ...mein kabhi aapse kuch nehi mangungi.

Rudra said sternly zidd mat kar jo possible nehi hain ...aur jo bola oh sun...

Paro then wipe her tears n said fiercely then I'll not listen to u also , y I will...

Rudra turn with anger n about to burst out but something stop him..but what is this n y...this girl make him weak n do opposite what he want to do...

His face tighten , jaw clenched n then look at dilsher then Paro who is sniffing badly but then without any more word cover his eyes n moved from there n make dilsher shook his head in regret n pain...pain for paro n regret as his teaching make his son like this so rude hard so heartless ...can't he think sensible but what is his fault . he also helpless...he look at the poor girl crying n sat in the floor. He want to console her n he said oh sayad koi pareshani hain ismein sayad...

Paro look at him but both know that nothing sort of ...But still paro hope if he came back n ask her to go with him but ...

After lunch ,paro is cleaning all utensils when Dilsher said y u alone did this all, it's like burden...

Paro smiles sadly n said babusa what should I do then...I don't have anything to do...this is only way...I can make myself busy...

Babusa sighed n then asked ek baat bol ,tu kya aapne pati se...

When Paro shiver then remember those moments n a lonely tear fall n she just sighed n said pata nehi babusa...par humare liye ohi sab kuch thesayad aise hi mami sa thakurain sa sikhaya tha..par...hume pata nehi hum unke liye kuch mehsush karte the iya hain ...hume pata hain oh humare pati the toh...ek din sab kuch loot gaya...Babusa mere jaada kuch sapne nehi dekhe the baass ek chota sa ghar aur...

Her words cut through as Rudra entered inside the house like Lion n just look at Paro with anger filled eyes but apart from anger there is something ...he took the hold of her slender hand n pulled her n going out .when Dilsher said iye kya tarika hain but Rudra didn't pay any heed of this then Paro who said kaha le ja rehe ho aap , kaha...choriye hume...

Rudra put her inside his jeap...n himself take a seat also...he start the engine n left paro wonder where they r going?

There Dilsher suddenly smiles n thinks may be his rough n hard son will melt or Paro has her affect on him..He pray to GOD Ma DURGA for giving Paro n rudra a Positive way...he chanted Jay Ma Durga

There ,Rudra n Paro Reached Commando Hospital n Rudra again took hold of her slender arm n took her inside the hospital...He is taking long long stride when Paro feeling tired as she can't match the space...

Rudra stand infront of a room n said ja andar... mille usse jake par iye iyaad karke jaan tujhe kitna bolna hain kitna nehi...

Paro:-matlab..aap ...

Rudra didn't reply just turn away when paro with confuse but entered n found the vunerable Nandini jiji lying...attach with many wires tubes...n one Doc is taking some note n instructing something to Nurse...

Paro softly asked how is jiji

Doctor turn n asked y u came here...who give u the permission to enter here...just out from here n called wardboy...took her out but before anything can happen Rudra burged in n said Doc meine usse bola dekhne ko aur jahatak pata hain nandini bhi aapne parvati se milna chahthi thi so...n she hasn't done anything now how is Nandini ?

Doctor Gulped down her saliva n said she is recovering but we need to monitoring her 48hrs then can say n need few more taste...

Rudra nodded but paro's eyes looking at her jiji who almost lifeless...

Paro asked oh thik ho jayenga na

Doc:-kuch kehe neh

But Rudra cut him n said she will...Both Paro n Rudra look at each other when rudra looked away for some unknown reason...

After 5days...

Paro looking at Nandini jiji who is now eating slowly slowly...

Nandini smiles faintly how is she?

Paro nodded but she only know how she is trying to control her inner feelings...she sat there then as the visitor's hours end she get up to leave when Nandini asked tu ekele kaise jayegi, masa kaha hain...

Paro look stunt n hesitate for a moments when again Rudra entered n Nandini clinge to see a BSD officer when Paro look at Rudra calmy n rudra also...Nandini noticed it but then paro said jiji aap rest lo...

Nandini came to know that Rudra saved her but still the conception they had against BSD...

Next day when Paro came n arranging the Lunch , nandini asked paro...

Paro nodded hmmm jiji...

Nandini, masa don't know...anything about...n that bsd officer ...

Paro sighed the thing she want to avoid but she know it's time may be for her to reveal...Paro sat n hold Nandini's hand n said jiji I wanna say u something..something about u..something about me something about him..I mean Rudra...

Nandini's eyes gradually turn shock but said kya baat paro

Paro slowly sat n narrated everything...whatever happen in her life their life how she n rudra met..how bindi disappear how her husband got killed but then she trapped but again Rudra took hold now she was living with Rudra n his family as Rudra's Wife...

Nandini's eyes turn fully wide n start coughing...

When paro give her water n patted her back n said jiji

Nandini panting n said itna sab kuch

Paro smiles sadly sab kuch galat hogaya

Nandini said no may be this is right , may be u saved by him...

Paro shocked when Nandini said I wanna share also something with u ...

Paro look at Nandini with tension n pain...when Nandini said tujhe pata hain na humare village se shaadi hota hain uss paar ..Thakur shahab...choose them but the actual truth...Paro..those r not any groom but oh sab lerkio ko istamal kar rehe the to do the work...

Paro gasped when Nandini said ha nandini I still don't know y Thakur shahab did this with his own village girl...but heard paro , mujhe abhi tak iyakeen nehi horaha hain but ...mere khud ke pati...

Paro asked what jiji...what he did, jiju...ne...

Nandini about to say when Rudra entered n said bahut der hogayi hain chal , nehi toh ja nehi payenge rasta ( way) bandh hoga...

Paro look reluctant when nandini said ja, kal milenge...

Bur rudra said kal aanehi payenge bol de usse...

Rudra sat in the jeap when paro said thanks...

Rudra look at her n paro continued thanks for saving nandini jiji's life...But I wanna ask u something.

Precap:-Face off n little more truth

Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 11 years ago

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