When time stood still.

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'Aaagh' this pain is killing me' I muttered as I tried to make myself comfortable. It had been a long day and so many things were going wrong all because of that wretched girl.

'Here we go again' I thought . What was it about this girl that I was obsessing over her again and again but na,I was only worried for her because my work should be done,I convinced myself. All I wanted was to see the perpetrator,the traitor behind the bars and all this girl had to do was to sign those damn sheets.


But of course 'Aurat hai na' I swore under my breath. They were all alike. I shook my head slowly,trying to ward off the pain.

And then I heard a scream. It shook me from my very insides. There was Paro,screaming her head out ,thrashing like a mad eel.

'Is she trying to gain my sympathy or something ? ' I looked warily . But I knew something was wrong.

I leapt up to immediately call the doctors but just when they were needed,they were nowhere in sight ! Damn it !

I ran to her and looked at her still flailing her arms and calling out to her Maamisa to save her parents! Parents ? Wasn't she an orphan ?

I stood ,rooted to my spot. I did not know what to do. But then I couldn't hold still any longer. I just had to do something ! But why did I have to do ? I ignored the inner voice,it could really spout a lot of unnecessary nonsense ,I thought as I rolled my eyes.

The first thing that I saw was that her head was almost about to hit the bed railings so I put my hand under her head to avoid the blow . And her legs,they were still thrashing! What the hell was I supposed to do ? Where was the doctor for heaven's sake ?!

And the only thing that came to my mind was I must stop it so I moved my leg on top of her's to hold her still. 'I mean ,what else could be done! '

And I held her,trying to soothe her and as I looked at her, I was lost.

I couldn't take my eyes off her.

What was this irrational urge to keep looking at her,I had no idea but at that moment,time stood still.


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So this was Rudra's POV which I tried to write.. How was it ? 😳This sort of thing is not my cup of tea so no chappals please 😛😳
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sonapari thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Good job done...
I liked the way of writing specially with pics...
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Nice post. Thank you for giving us an insight into Rudra's thoughts.
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Fantastic Post. Very well expressed.👏
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Originally posted by: sonapari

Good job done...

I liked the way of writing specially with pics...

Thank you dear 😳 So glad you liked it.
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Originally posted by: showviewer

Nice post. Thank you for giving us an insight into Rudra's thoughts.

Thanks di 😳
Posted: 12 years ago
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Y chappals? It is sooo well written!!

Pls pls, u shud write such things, i hv alredy red ur post 9 times..it ws so gudt😃

Indeed yes. Rudra mi8 hv thot exactly wat u hv written..
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Originally posted by: jollyjoy

Fantastic Post. Very well expressed.👏

Thank you so much hun 😳
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Originally posted by: Tishana

Y chappals? It is sooo well written!!

Pls pls, u shud write such things, i hv alredy red ur post 9 times..it ws so gudt😃

Indeed yes. Rudra mi8 hv thot exactly wat u hv written..

Aww tish ,thank you so much sweetie <3 🤗 Btw if you cant recognise me,im -sweetgal19- :P
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You liked it dear ? 😳

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