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ArshiRishbala

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Continue soon... Prologue is just so awesome...

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MyAnastasia18

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

thts awesome..can't wait for more

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Natasha

@drunkiiebabe

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

awesome prologue looking forward to reading more

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Ashlena8

@Ashlena8

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

I am really loving this show and please update the first chapter fast

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tinsel

@tinsel

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Great start to the prologue.👍🏼

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Mischief-Managed

@sarahehsan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Continue soon, please! Count me in! Imma really be a regular reader! The prologue is really good and the fact that her would be husband wasn't a goody two shoes and her knowledge of the same, kinda makes up without us having to grieve for her husband's death at Rudra's hands! 😛

And he remembers his father's words like a nursery rhyme, innit? I wonder how long it will take for Paro to break that stupid belief his father had instilled in his young mind! 😡 Looking forward to more, hun! 😊

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shagun-rocks

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

loved the prologue..can you pm me the next time you update?...

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sugarhugs

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

awesome..amazing
do continue..👏

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simisworld

@simisworld

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Excellent start! I hope you continue soon. I especially like how in your story Paro knows that Varun was a terrorist. I had been wondering that about the show. Yes she fainted for large portions of the fighting, but didn't she realize that the Baaratis were shooting back at the BSD officers? Shouldn't the fact that they have guns been cause for suspicion? Perhaps she is in too much shock, and too blinded by her fear and disdain for BSD to think clearly. Hopefully in the future she will look back and see the flaws in her own beliefs.

Anyway. Please continue soon, I'm anxious to read more!