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jaisyjazz

@jaisyjazz

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

what the f****** how can he used those words for khanak he doesnt have any manners i hate him hate him for this

and attitude toh dekho friend and bro se bhi angry hua bcoz they said that what he did was wrong

phir mahashey ko apni galti ka ehsaas hota hain and sorry toh aise keh raha hain jaise meherbani kar raha hain idiot now i cant abuse him also but i want too 😡

i dont like this this side of shan

now he knows ke she is jazz's best friend toh ab kya karega? anyway i dont want khanak to forgive him so easily

plzzz sweta let shan be paid for this thoda aur tadpao

and i love how the story is going update soon:)))

Edited by jaisyjazz - 12 years ago

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Sweta

@11cutiesweta06

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: jaisyjazz
what the f****** how can he used those words for khanak he doesnt have any manners i hate him hate him for this
and attitude toh dekho friend and bro se bhi angry hua bcoz they said that what he did was wrong
phir mahashey ko apni galti ka ehsaas hota hain and sorry toh aise keh raha hain jaise meherbani kar raha hain idiot now i cant abuse him also but i want too 😡
i dont like this this side of shan
now he knows ke she is jazz's best friend toh ab kya karega? anyway i dont want khanak to forgive him so easily
plzzz sweta let shan be paid for this thoda aur tadpao
and i love how the story is going update soon:)))

Thnx di for ur comments... Yeah i mentioned at the itself that he has attitude, but there wont be interaction of Shan and Khanak for the next few months or like that as i planned for the story for which Shan will fall for Khanak 1st hehe 😃 😆

Love to u

Sweta

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poo_j

@poo_j

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

Nice..😊 At least Shaan realized his mistake and asked sorry to Khanak soon..Now both got to know each other..
Looking forward and thanks for writing..😊

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Heer

@heer_85

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

nice update sweta 😊

how can shaan use those words to her i hate him for dat 😡

he doesn't want to admit his fault n behaviour that he didn to khanak publicaly

his bro n friend are right he shouldn't do that publicaly good dat he realize what he didn was not right and make his mind to apologize gain

aww!!!!! khanak keep crying n became quite after that incident Poor girl

Jazz called her to know the reason of her quiteness for few days fisrt she didn tell her then she narate everything

shaan came school and went near Khanak to say sorry

khanak said not to bring that topic again which make her remember all what he did

so now khanak knew his name is shaan n mention Jazz

later it strikes on shaan she is khanak

its interesting dear

update soon

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@11cutiesweta06

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: poo_j
Nice..😊 At least Shaan realized his mistake and asked sorry to Khanak soon..Now both got to know each other..
Looking forward and thanks for writing..😊

thnx di.

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@11cutiesweta06

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

@Heer di-yeah di i said earlier itself dat he doesnt hv manner 2 tok 2 d gals... Nd thnx fr d cmnt.

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Mounika

@ktym

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

OMG nice update...

lol shaan now understood that she is khanak...

lol cant wait for the next update...

update it soon...

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@11cutiesweta06

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ktym
OMG nice update...
lol shaan now understood that she is khanak...
lol cant wait for the next update...
update it soon...

😃Thnx di for ur comments

Heheheh they wont have interaction for which Shan will fall for /khanak still knowing also that He is younger to Khanak...😳😃

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poo_j

@poo_j

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

Lovely!!!😃 Khanak has nothing to worry as Shaan will come into her life..😉 Awww!!! Shaan started having feelings for Khanak..😳

Looking forward for sports week and thanks for writing an awesome update..😊

P.S: Do continue!!!😊

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jaisyjazz

@jaisyjazz

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

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hey i will kill u if u discontinue it

its amazing

OMG after a long time u updated and i m very happy after reading this

shan ko khanak se hamdardi hain oh hooo toh he had got his lessons and secretly admiring khanak but ofcourse its hard for khanak to forgive him so easily it will take time but i m waiting for that

so this is a flashback khanak has written in her diary hmmm?

the update was small plzzz write big one next time

update soon :)))