KISMAT CONNECTION (SS) pt16(end) pg 28 dec 14 - Page 16

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: maneesha28889

Take care of u and ur son niki...

hope you are doing good now...😊

Awesome update...loved it a lot...
shaan acting as if he met with an accident...lol🤣 shaan making me laugh tied all the bandages over his hands and legs...
khanak pushed shaan on his bed...that was so rude...what if the accident was real??😕
waiting for the next update...😃


thanks a lot maneesha...now we r fine...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: poo_j

Awesome di!!! 👏Ha..ha..Shaan acted so well but his Khushboo bhabi caught his act!!! 😆 Nice twist and didn't expect that..👏 Poor Khanak!!! 😆Unwillingly ve to look after her hubby!!! 😳Also want Khanak to know that Shaan is Krish and act just like him cordially 😉 without telling him that she found out he is Krish..😆 It'll be fun!!!😉


Looking forward and thanks for writing..😊

P.S : Take care of you and your son di..😊


thanks a lot poo...we r fine now...i thought of something different further in story...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ktym

nice update niki...

lol shaan came back with a plan...😆

Get well soon...TC


thanks a lot mounika...we r fine now...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: chandu8881

oh😲 first take care niki, yourself and your son, climate is really bad!!
Nice update niki😊
sorry for not commenting on previous updates, i was a bit busy...
Shaan, kitna natak baaz hain😆
Waiting for next one eagerly😊


thanks a lot doc...no worry ...everyone r busy na...now we r fine yaar..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: snigdhanagar

lovely niki...

khanak is thinking he is reading her mind lolzz..

waiting fr nxtt


thanks a lot IA...mostly he find from her facial expression...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: virika01

lovely..love dse two...

hope dey confess soon..


thanks a lot virika..they will confess soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi friends...today i was free so i wrote next one...next update i dont know when...i will try whenever i get time...

pt 12

khanak glared at him...she took her cell phone from bed..walked towards her side door...

shaan : where r u going...shall I call mom...(khanak looked

at him) ...uhhh...for my help...(smiled at her)

khanak thought damn he is blackmailing...

khanak : no need I am going to take my lappy...

shaan : oh ..okay..(smiled at her)

khanak turned her face to the door...

shaan : come soon...I am waiting...

khanak : wat...looked at him...

shaan : I told I am waiting...

khanak : for wat...looking at his face...

shaan : i want some apples ...(closed his eyes)

khanak glared at him for a second and she walked towards her room...

she sat besides her lappy...she closed her eyes...after two r three minutes

she can see his face alone...his smiling eyes..his timple...

her hands moved in air as if to touch his cheeks...she saw his lips...

her lips parted...she heard her cell rang...she opened her eyes...

she was shocked she saw her hand in air...she was totally shocked...

damn why ...wat...wat made me think this...she felt nervous...

she saw her cell rang..she took the phone...it was written...my darling sweetheart

khanak : wat..sweetheart..darling...i did not store such thing...who is it...

khanak oned the cell...

khanak : he..hello...

shaan : me only baby...

khanak : u...

shaan : s ...me only..u r darling sweetheart...

khanak : how dare u...how can take my phone...

shaan : wats wrong..it was in bed when u pushed me and gone...

i took the phone and ...oops i forgot to keep my pic in ur phone...

khanak :ahh...(mouth wide opened)

shaan : wat ahh...come soon to bed...

khanak : wat...

shaan : bedroom baby...ur mom is in another line...

shaan cutted the phone...khanak was holding the phone still in her ear...

khanak : he told mom...shit...she stood up took her lappy

and walked quickly to the room...she saw shaan was talking...

shaan : no worry mom she is taking care of me...(looking at khanak)

shaan cutted the call...khanak came and placed her lappy in the bed..

they heard the door knock...

shaan : harilal come in...

harilal came in...khanak thought how he knows it is harilal...

harilal placed the tray with apples and went out...

shaan : i asked mom to send harilal with apples

khanak :ahhh...

shaan : why r u always shocked...come hear and cut the apples and give...

khanak closed her mouth and she thought how he is reading my mind...

did i talk it out...she felt something inside...

if he openes a business in mind reading...he will defientely will get a large amount...

she imagined him to be a minreader wearing white r orange dress with holy books

around his place...he is showing his hands to others in blessing like...

on imagining it see started to laugh...

shaan : wat made u laugh..if u say i can to join in it...

khanak : nothing...controlled her laugh...

shaan thought baby dont worry i will defientely oneday get to know from u why laughed ...

khanak sat in her side of bed and started to cut the skin of apples

very slowly and carefully...shaan saw her face and the way she cuts the apple...

after a minute r so khanak felt something...she turned towards

shaan..who was looking at her only...she starred at him...

he smiled at her...her hand with knife went towards his cheeks to touch his timple..

shaan : hey..hey wat r u doing...

khanak came back to reality...she saw her hand with knife was near his cheeks...

khanak quickly turned her face...her heart was beating fastly...

her cheeks was burning..she felt shamed...she felt awkward...

she was worried wat is he going to think...

shaan : can u take my charger from my room to charge my phone...

khanak quickly walked towards his room...she went inside and

she closed her eyes...damn why why am i doing this...

her mind u r not doing he is making u do...stop..stop...

she saw his charger in his table...she took it..left out a long breath

and she came back to room...she saw shaan is sleeping...

she took his phone and connected to charger...

she came to her side of the bed and she sat and looked shaan for

a minute...she took the bedcover and covered his legs...

and she took her lappy and she immersed into her work...

after five minutes r so shaan slowly opened his eyes and saw khanak

was working in lappy...he smiled at her...

he talked to himself...sorry baby..sorry for hurting u...

i am really afraid when u know that krish is me...i dont know whether u will

accept me r not...so only...all we had fight whenever we saw from childhood...

so only this..i will make u love me...

he started to admire her without she knows it...

after and hour r so...his cell phone rang..he quickly closed his eyes...

khanak turned and saw shaan ...she saw he was sleeping...

so she went adn took the phone in charge...it was her mom...

khanak : wat mom...

vidhya : u both come down for eating...

khanak : ummm...

khanak came back to bed...she thought for me also hungry...

.he will be also hungry na...he got injured na...

khanak :uhh...sh...shantanu...

shaan heard his name from her mouth it rhymed like a music to him...

but he did not opened his eyes...

khanak : shantanu...shantanu...she slowly placed her hands

in his left hand...shaan opened his eyes as if getting up from sleep...

shaan : ha...(wiping his eyes)

khanak : its time for dinner...looking at her cell...

shaan : ummm...shall we go down...

khanak slowly bend down and touched his shoulders helped him get up...

shaans hand touched her hands ...shoulders...on each and everytouch she

felt something..her heart felta shiver...her mind told...i am doing a service

to a injured man...thats it...nothing else...

they both came down to the dinning table together...

their dads have gone inside the room...

khusbhoo and her kids alone sitting..anjali has gone out along with her kid with sanjay..

khusbhoo : wat devar jee...is everything alright...(smiling at him)

shaan : jee bhabhi...(smiled awkwardly)

vidhya : khanak first feed shaan ...

khanak saw shaan his right hand is injured...

khanak started to feed him chappathi with her hand...

his lips touched her fingers..she quickly brought her hand down...

she took a big piece so that his mouth r lips cannot touch...

but unfortunately her mom who was eating there say her to give small piece..

shaan was thoroughly enjoying this...khanaks heart saying this is just service...

her heart was feeling jitters and shivers...and butterfly flying...

after finish giving food for shaan she took her plate and started to eat...

khusbhoo and kids went to hall...

shaan was just sitting near her only and driniking his juice with straw...

khanak : mom i want chappathi with jam freshone...please mom...

vidhya made one...and gave her..khanak started to eat it very enjoyingly...

shaan was looking at her lips only...

khanak was having a lastbit...

khanak : mom i want another one...

vidhya : wait i will go and put and come...u cut these apples...

vidhya gone to kitchen shanak alone in dinning hall...

khanak : umm..she kept her last bit in her mouth but knot eating...

she was eating it like lolly pop tasting the jam...

khanak took the apple for cutting...

shaan : khanak...

khanak turned her head...she was shocked...she saw shaans face very near...

within a fraction of second her last bit which was in her lips went to his mouth...

his lips touched her lips his limejuice taste was in her lips...

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Posted: 12 years ago
wooow shaan is sooo naughty loool.. xxx
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh lala what ways shan is doing to win her go shan go
i loved how he took the jam chappathi from her mouth now she will not eat the other one heheee
omg she is so innocent taking big pieces of chappathi to avoid touching his lips hahahaaa so cute
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice Nikki loved it
poor khanak 😆 shaan is calling her every time
he set a name for his number my darling sweetheart ❤️ awesome
last part of dinning table was awesome loved it

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