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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
Its amazing
i really like the concept
the story line is really gud
em very excited to read how their love blossom
hopes to see that soon as jealousy factor works
lovely update
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i want update
i want update
i want update
i want update
Update soon Heer...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 2

Shaan : stop it Riya!!!! mene tuhme pehle bhi kahatha, i don't like your behaviour aur yeh bar bar gale garna, i don't like it, tum yaha isliye ho ke u wanted to see India coz tum yaha kisiko nahi janti aur me tum yaha mere garpe rehne ko kaha .

So from now maintain distance and shaan angrily left the room

Next day

They all met for breakfast as usual, sunil told shaan about the party which is arranged for him

Sunil: shaan...

Shaan: yeah dad ... ( having break fast )

Sunil: aaj hum neh tumari aneki khushi meh party rakhi hai

Shaan: dad iski kya zarurat thi... wese bhi mein bore hochuka hu party ose... abhi recently humne party attend kih thi

Riya: haa uncle hum waha par parties kabhi miss nahi kar teh kyu shaan, kitna maza atahai waha ki party omeh, dance , music its so much fun

Khushboo and Khanak looked at Riya

Madhvi: nahi shaan ...areh saab ko pata chalna chahiye mera beta wapas agaya hai aur wese bhi Khanak neh saab tayari yah apne hatho se kih hai

Khushboo: right mom... jaabse shaan ki aneki khabar mile hai khanak toh hawa mein urrahihe

Khanak: bhabhi... !!!!!!!!!!!!

Dadi: areh ihse to hawa meh toh urna chahiye... bachpan seh dono saath mein bare huwe hai ... aur phir shaan chalagaya tha parai karne London aab aya hai toh khushi toh hogi nai

Shaan and khanak looked at each other, shaan to himself " muhje Khanak seh baat karni hogi, kaal bhi jab mein aya toh pata nahi kya huwa usne tikhse mujse baat bhi nahi kih ... kuch toh baat hai ."

Madhvi: shaan kis soch meh ho beta... nashta karo

Madhvi: Khanak tumne tikhse sari tayari yah dekhli nah

Khanak: Jee mene saab dekhliya... kuch chize baki hai woh mein dekhlungi

Sunil: wese yeh Jai kaha hai... dikhai nahi dehrahahe

Madhvi: woh thori abhi uthega !!!!!!... soh rahahe abhi taak

Akshay: yeh ladka parai kar rahahe ya sota rehta hai

Khanak: bhaa woh kaal der raat tak par rahatha

Akshay: khanak tum uski side lena band karo... , kitna alsi hogaya ajkaal woh

Khushboo: wese Jai apni sari pareshani aur nautanki khanak keh saath sher kartahai toh yeh usiki side legi

Sunil and Akshay finished their breakfast and took a leave for office.

Khushboo: wese kaal pitne wala tha Jai... ( smiling )

Khanak and Khushboo laugh

Shaan: kya huwa tum dono kyu haas rahiho

Khushboo: shaan i have to tell this, kaal Hum tino shoping gaye the aur Jai neh kisi ladki ki sirf help karni chahi toh saab koh laga keh woh uhse chedrahatha, kuch log uhse pitne wale the ... acha huwa Khanak waha poch gai aur saab samal lia

Shaan: yeh kabhi nahi sudhar newala

Khanak: bhabhi Jai ki bilkul galti nahi thi ... ( laughing at the thought been beaten )

Shaan was mesmerised at her laugh and start admiring her beautiful glowing face.

Dadi: acha abh Jai ki choro aur nashta karo ... wese tum log sahi keh rahiho... bechara mera Jai mandhir meh kitni baar pitne se bacha hai ... pata nahi kyu saab uhse galat samj lehte hai

Trio laugh again at Jai thought, they all finished their breakfast and

Ladies proceed in the kitchen, shaan was sitting in a hall trying to call his friends which were in india, Riya was too sitting in a hall

In the kitchen

Madhvi: khanak ... Jai koh zara dekho toh utha keh nahi abhi taak ... kuch tayariya abhi baaki hai aur sham koi party hai

Khanak: Jee mein dekhti hu ... ( came out of the kitchen and saw Shaan and Riya sat in one couch, shaan with his lappy)

Riya was sitting close to Shaan

Riya: shaan tumne yeh photo toh muhje kabhi nahi dikhai and hold shaan's hand

Khanak saw her and felt very bad seeing Riya close to shaan

Riya saw khanak and called her

Riya: areh Khanak tum... behto nah hamare saath

Shaan raised his eyes from his lappy when he heard Riya calling Khanak

Khanak: nahi woh muhje ... kitchen mein kuch kaam hai

At the same time Jai came to them in a sleepy form

Jai: Good morning Di ( to khanak lazily)

KhanaK: Jai yeh waqt hai uthneka ...( looked at him )

Jai: Good morning Bhai ( to shaan )

Shaan: wah Janab abh uthrahehe ( stand from a couch )

Jai: kya yaar abh bhi subha subha ... pehle toh Akshay bhaiya the aabh aap bhi shuru hogae...

Khanak: aabh jao aur fresh hoke ao, mein nashta lagati hu

Jai: abhi nahi... abhi toh mein phirse sone wala hu

Khanak fold her hand across her chest and looked at him angrily

Jai: thikh hai jatahu... istara se maat ghureye muhje ... abhi pacha hu dar jaunga ( smiling )

Khanak: acha bache ho... toh ruko tum mein abhi mazaa chah khaati hu ( ran to catch Jai who knows what will follow and ran )

Jai: Bhai bachao ... ( circle shaan)

Khanak with cushion in her hand ready to hit Jai

Khanak: shaan side meh raho ... ise toh mein aaj ...

Jai: Thank u bhai ...( he was behind shaan )

Khanak: shaan side meh raho ... ( close to shaan try to catch Jai)

Shaan: areh mein neh kya kiya ... (enjoying khanak closeness and smiling )

Khanak: shaan agar tum beech meh se nahi hathe toh tuhme bhi nahi chorungi ...

Shaan in a low tone " khanak mein toh chahtahu keh tum muhje na choro lekin pehle paas toh awoh ."

Khanak hit shaan slightly with a cushion

Shaan: areh mein neh kya kiya joh tum neh muhje mara...

Khanak: hatho phir ... ( to shaan) ... Jai muhje taang mat karo ... jao jake fresh hoke ao

Jai teases khanak its their daily routine

Jai: har gayi kya ... mein neh kahathana aap muhje kabhi bhi pakar nahi sakhti ...

Khanak: Jai... aabh toh tum gaye kaamse ... shaan side mein raho ... thik hai pehle tumihse shuruwaht karti hu

Khanak hit shaan Jai was holding shaan's shoulder from back

Shaan: oo Jahsi ki rani ... yeh bohut rorahahe ok... mein kuch ketha nahi iska matlab yeh nahi ke tum ... ( point a finger to khanak) ... muhjemarti raho... wese mein bhi tuhme mar sakta hu ok ... hadh hai yaar

Khanak: acha... ( point a finger to him)

Shaan took a cushion. Now both had a cushions, Riya left when her phone rang

Jai: wese bhai ... ( behind shaan ) idea bura nahi hai cushion ... coshion ... so lets start

Shaan: yeah lets start ...

Khanak: Jai ... ( shout at him ) ana aabh tum apni problems leke phir mein bhi bataungi tuhme

Jai: aapto sidha black mail kar raheho muhje ( to khanak)

Shaan: don't worry Jai... aabh mein agaya hu nah toh tum apni problems mujse share karna

Khanak hit the cushion on shaan head slightly annoyed and shout at both of them, shaan moved and cushion hit Jai too

Both got punch of cushion on their head and arms, Jai ran from there leaving shaan and Khanak

Khanak was doing her job very well

Jai shout " all the best bhai... Di keep it up ."

Shaan: Jai ... muhje pasake khud nikal gae

Shaan hold the cushion and both miss their balance, cushion slipped from his hand, both fall on a couch, shaan on top of khanak

They stare at each other lovingly, khanak few hair was on her face

Shaan slightly raised his hand and move her hair from her face but their eye contact was locked on each other

Shaan caresses her cheeks; khanak closed her eyes at his touch, shaan's eyes land on her delicate lips then smiled and looked at her closed eyes, he moved again at her lips slowly, khanak felt his breathe on her lips she parted her lips slowly, shaan was about to taste her lips

Madhvi: Khanak yeah shor kese hai bahar... Jai utha kya ?( voice was approaching near the hall )

Khanak open her eyes wide

Khanak: shaan utho ... !!!!!!!!!!!!! ( pushed him but he was heavy )

Shaan smiled at her but didn't move from top of her

Shaan: cushion... keh badle... ( naughtly )

Madhvi: Kya huwa Khanak...

Khanak: shaan please... ( looked at kitchen direction to see if madhvi has come or not )

Shaan moved from her when heard madhvi's voice near them

Khanak stand and adjust her clothes and dupata

Madhvi came there and saw the hall , cushion were on the floor

Madhvi: yeh saab phirse... !!!!!!!!!!! took the cushions and adjust on the couch

Khanak took one cushion and adjust on a couch

Jai came after he fresh up

Madhvi: Jai yeh saab phirse... ( angrily )

Jai: masi... isbar mein nahi ( hand up in air )

Madhvi: toh phir yeah saab ...

Jai: Bhai aur Di neh kiya hai ... , di this is not fair ( to khanak) aap rooz mujse kehti hai Jai esa maat karo ... aur aaj jaab bhai ayeh toh apdono neh ... hall kih kya halat banadi ... very bad

Shaan: Jai tuhme to mein ... ( ran to catch him)

Khanak: shaan ... ( shout ) meri tarafse bhi lagana uhse

Madhvi: pata nahi kaab bare hoge tum log

Khanak and Madhvi moved in the kitchen, shaan and Jai continue chasing each other

Khanak came from the kitchen with plates to keep on the dining table; she saw shaan and Riya in each other's arm. While chasing Jai shaan collide with Riya and hold her so as not to hit the floor

Khanak felt very bad and tears roll down her cheeks

Sometime later

Party preparation was on full mood but khanak mind was not there

She was still thinking about shaan and Riya closeness, her mind was playing with her. She was in deep thought and didn't notice shaan came near her.

Shaan: Khanak ...!!!!

Khanak didn't hear as she was in her thought

Shaan : Khanak...!!!!!!!!!!. ( huskily)

Khanak heard him and turn to him and stare at him but didn't smile

Shaan: kya huwa ... mein hu shaan... tum muhje ese kyu dekh rahiho (raised his eyes brow in questioning)

Khanak: nahi esi koi baat nahi hai ... ( hold a curtain and try to move away)

Before shaan said something again , dadi called khanak n asked to look something in the kitchen. The whole day shaan n khanak didn't get chance to talk, every time they wanted to make a conv, either Madhvi, khusboo aur dadi interrupt them

In the evening

Party was held at khandelwal residence, every things was well arranged, few staff members were invited n other business related people, madhvi n khushboo friends were also invited

Khanak wore a nice blue length knee dress, her hairs was open with minimum make up, small stud in her ear, a little touch of a lip lose n kohl outline her eye lid

She was looking splendid in her entire western outfit, her dress was just like it was made only for her it fitted to every curve of her body

Shaan was looking very handsome and attractive any girl who saw him will loose to him

He's gaze was looking for khanak, he looked everywhere but she wasn't there, she saw all his family member, but only khanak was missing.

After some time shaan saw khanak and he dropped his Jaw. Khanak was looking very beautiful n attractive, he thought the dress she wore was only made for her.

Khanak saw dadi and mandhvi and moved to them

Shaan, khusboo ,akki and Riya were talking n sharing some jokes, shaan was looking for khanak coz thy didn't get chance to talk, all family members were pampering him n whenever he tried to talk they were interrupted

Khanak was with dadi and madhvi trio were chating

Boo saw khanak n she call her , khanak join her n boo compliment

her, she shly lower her eyes lashes n shaan kept staring at her

Khanak was Looking very stunning n for shaan very hawwwttt!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Sunil called shaan to make intro to everyone , khanak was throwing glances to shaan , he was looking very hot n handsome.

After some introduction, shaan excuse himself n saw Riya walking toward him.

khusboo n shaan were talking, boo didn't like her n she kept telling shaan about her

Khusboo: shaan yeh Riya tume kaha mili, i mean i know she is from UK but itna chipak ti rehti hai tumse, kahi tum dono ka... khushboo started to tease him

Shaan: bhabhi esa kuch nahi hai jesa aap samaj raheho, she is just ...

He didn't complete his sentence and khushboo said it

"Friends ."

Shaan : bhabhi we are just friends.

Khusboo: " wese agar kuch hai toh mein baat chalau kya ."she was teasing him again n smiled

Before shaan reply to her Riya came to them and hold his hand

khanak was feeling very bad seeing Riya with shaan

Khanak was talking to dadi, but her eyes were glue to shaan n Riya. dadi left, someone was calling her seeing this shaan move to khanak leaving Riya and Khushbo
he walked to khanak, but stop mid way, he saw a guy hugged Khanak n she was smiling to him, Seeing this shaan thought " yeh koun hai mene kabhi ise yaha nahi dekha".

Shaan was like killing dat guy, he saw khanak smiling and slapped him playfully on his arm , Romit was narrating his love life to khanak and how he had a small fight with Jaanvi and that why she didn't accomplished him to the party

Shaan came to khanak n she intro her friend Romit, shaan n Romit shake hands, romit started conv with khanak, shaan was fuming seeing all this ,Romit was touching khanak.

trio were having conv, and suddenly light goes dim, Riya (chipkali ) came to them.

Riya : shaan come on lets dance n pulled him for a dance

Khanak just stare at them n see shaan leaving with her

It was a dance changing partner, shaan n Riya were dancing, sunil and madhvi , boo and Akki n other too, Jay was trying to find someone who can dance with him , he never had a luck to be surrounded by girls

Shaan cousin Jay was also khanak friends, he always comes to khanak with his worries n hw to patao ladki n ask for tips. ( Jese khaank has PHD in dis lolzzz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ).

Jay saw khanak n told her to dance with him as no one agree to dance with him, khanak was no in mood to dance after seeing Riya n shaan. So she refused to Jay

After some time

Romit saw khanak alone n he make her dance with him, shaan was stealing glance to khanak n saw Romit holding khanak hand for a dance.

Shaan was dancing absent minded with Riya as he saw khanak dancing with Romit. Coz it was a slow dance so partner were close

at one point shaan n khanak came as a couple.

( Romantic mahall shuru lights off , action ROFl )

Shaan n khanak came as a partner, khanak's one hand on shaan's hand n other on his shoulder, shaan holding khanak's hand n other around her waist, khanak felt shiver at shaan's one touch, she looked into shaan's eyes.

Shaan: " khanak kesi ho." n he thought. " abeh yeh kesa sawal mene

Pocha."

Khanak : in her mind " yeh kesa sawal hai ." n said mein thikh hu

Shaan: khanak tum bohut khubsurat lag rahiho u r very beautiful

Khanak lower her lashes and said thank u

They were talking like strangers n move to music,

Shaan: did u make any friends while i was not here (he asked her to know about Romit and looked into khanak eyes )

Khanak: yeah few ( looking at him )

They stared at each other and light goes dim, they were moving slowly, shaan turn khanak slowly, now her back was on shaan's chest, shaan holded khanak from back, khanak felt shiver run down her spine, khanak heart beats raised, she felt shaan breath on her neck, she closed her eyes and wanted to be like that forever in his burthal's arm

Shaan and khanak were dancing like no one was around.

They were lost in their own world

After some time both came back in reality after song ended n lights turn on , they both were staring at each other lovingly, but this didn't took a long time n they were disturbed by ( Chipkali) Riya

Shaan was very annoyed at interruption.

Riya : shaan i just enjoying dancing, tumeh yaad hai hamara pehla dance.

She was talking dreamily, the way she narrate her dance with shaan anyone will take it wrong, and will think both have some relation


Enjoy guys, please press the like button and feel free to comment😊

i wil be updating after every 2 days 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
Aww such a lovely update...😊

This chipkali riya is annoying me...😡😡...i want to kill her...😡


Lol😆...Our budthals again misunderstanding each other...


Thanks for assuring frequent updates...

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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
loved it
riya 😡
xxx

p.s. only have time to write this xxx
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: ktym

Aww such a lovely update...😊


This chipkali riya is annoying me...😡😡...i want to kill her...😡


Lol😆...Our budthals again misunderstanding each other...


Thanks for assuring frequent updates...



Thanx for liking and commenting
go ahead for killing Riya i won't mind 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: aasma1

loved it

riya 😡
xxx

p.s. only have time to write this xxx


no worries Aasma 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
lovely update
i loved the nok jhok... the cute lil fight it was fun to read
i loved the dance part
picturing them ... haye... that was super cute
how u;ve penned abt the conv was really nice
cant express their feelings so talking like strangers
but i juz love this childhood sweethearts concept
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
awww so sweet loved shan and khanak and jai's masti
hahhahha tum kaisi ho ye kaisa sawal hai hhehehe
loved it very fun to read
this riya is idiot sachme chipkali hai itne baar shan ne kaha dur rehne ko phir bhi chipakti rehti hai bandarni
waiting for next update 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow heer a long update...lovely update man...it was nice ...that sofa scene was good...that was
like the promo scene in rbo...khanak with heart shaped balloon and shaan was following her
and they fell in the sofa...

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