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Posted: 12 years ago
Hellooo

LOved the Update heer ...it was awesome 👏 👏 👏

you took me back to MRM yaar ...I actually ran from here to MRM blog to read Carrom scences 😃 Mani Di has created carrom scences with such brillance that Aj ke pahle carrom kabhi utna intresting nahi laga 👏 & now you have included carrom in your FF 😃 Nice part yaar ...Shaan playing opposite Akshay 😊 Riya cheering for Shaan & Khushboo for Akshay ...LOved it ...Shaan was upset when Khanak left the leaving room & he thought he lost the game coz she left the place 😃

Office scene was lovely too ...Shaan tried to talk & was surprised by Khanaks unusual behaviour 😕 he saw a campletely Differnt Khanak here 😕 he tried hard to talk to her but his closeness with Riya made her upset & she didnt let the convo happened between them Loved Shaan's authority when he asked her to have lunch first ...LOved the moment between the two 👏 but it was distrubed by Romit 😒

Khushboo & Khanaks baby behaviour with Madhvi was super awesomeee ...Loved the convo & bilinder is back ...Jay & his Di ...Rocking pair 👏 loved the evening moment but hated Riya & her chipku behaviour 😡 the end was super cute ...Shanak moment was awesomee & Shaan & khanaks nok jhok plus Shaans cute antics to chidao khanak ...LOL he actually drop her 😲 & that Gud nyt peak was cuteee 😆 LOved it

Waiting for the next oneee ...Continue soon 😃

LOve
Pranjal.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: priyani143

Heyyy Heer🤗

awesome updates👏...loooved it.❤️
loved the scene at the cafe , Romit & Jaanu fight was super fun,😆 and Khanak was like a sandwich , dono ke beech me phasi huyi.🤣
ufff!!! I so hate Riya. Romit is unknowingly doing all this but Riya!!!she has such a bad intention😡. Jaanu left & Shaan thought only Khanak & Romit were there...hmmm.
i loved the office scene. Shaan was so eager to join the office sooon, so that he can spend more time with Khanak...woh toh hoga hi😉..
arey!! their lips touched😲☺️, Akshay, such a bad timing. agree with Shaan, thoda der se nahi asakta tha😳... now, when will we get a full kiss????😳
they got time to talk in office, but Khanak felt uncomfortable...so sad. & Shaan got annoyed when Romit came & started talking with her. he left feeling sad & she sensed that.
oh i enjoyed their game, the brother's fight were so much fun😆..Khushbu's fight over the red coin🤣.& Jay is a darling. Shaan lost, ab yeh toh hona hi tha...his lucky charm, his rani wasn't there na😉...
OMG!!! he kissed on her cheek☺️... & also dropped her.🤣
"aaj neendh bohut achi aegi ." it reminds me of the ShaNak scene in Gangu bai's house.😃
superb writing Heer...👍🏼
take care of your Family & yourself. 😃



Thanx priyani 😊 yeah khanak became sandwich between her friend , shaan loined office for khanak and akshay came at bad timing poor shaan 😆 his lucky charm left and he lost the game
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -pranjal-



arey waah finally you are going to play Dandiyaa 😃 i missed it today meri taraf se bhi khelnaaa

JSK 😃



JSK 😊 mene khela tumari tarafse bhi and dhamal kiya
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -pranjal-

Hellooo

LOved the Update heer ...it was awesome 👏 👏 👏

you took me back to MRM yaar ...I actually ran from here to MRM blog to read Carrom scences 😃 Mani Di has created carrom scences with such brillance that Aj ke pahle carrom kabhi utna intresting nahi laga 👏 & now you have included carrom in your FF 😃 Nice part yaar ...Shaan playing opposite Akshay 😊 Riya cheering for Shaan & Khushboo for Akshay ...LOved it ...Shaan was upset when Khanak left the leaving room & he thought he lost the game coz she left the place 😃

Office scene was lovely too ...Shaan tried to talk & was surprised by Khanaks unusual behaviour 😕 he saw a campletely Differnt Khanak here 😕 he tried hard to talk to her but his closeness with Riya made her upset & she didnt let the convo happened between them Loved Shaan's authority when he asked her to have lunch first ...LOved the moment between the two 👏 but it was distrubed by Romit 😒

Khushboo & Khanaks baby behaviour with Madhvi was super awesomeee ...Loved the convo & bilinder is back ...Jay & his Di ...Rocking pair 👏 loved the evening moment but hated Riya & her chipku behaviour 😡 the end was super cute ...Shanak moment was awesomee & Shaan & khanaks nok jhok plus Shaans cute antics to chidao khanak ...LOL he actually drop her 😲 & that Gud nyt peak was cuteee 😆 LOved it

Waiting for the next oneee ...Continue soon 😃

LOve
Pranjal.



Thanx Pranjal for cute comment, o yeah in MRM bhi carom game tha when i wrote this part i forget in MRM was that game I just tried little to penned that game as i used to play carom and i love it
but the way Manita has penned that game was awesome 😊
shaan lost when his lucky charm left, Thanx for loving Jay and Khanak's bonding, shaan dropped her poor khanak neh 😆
will update by the evening or tonight before going to dandiyaa😊
Edited by heer_85 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Thank you so much for liking my story and pressed like button 😊

( priyani 143, virikao1, kp_yasharan, jaisjazz, chandu8881, aasma1, ktym,

diyak, maneesha28889, IF_rida, smidghanadar , pranjal, jaanvi07 , niki_ rbo)

Thanks to all who comment guys😊

Here is the 7th part enjoy and please ignore any grammatical errors

Part 7

Khanak was in shock and looked at him

Shaan bent near her face took the water bottle from her hand, gave her a

peak on her cheek, winked and left

Shaan while walking to his room he had a grin on his face and said to

himself "aaj neendh bohut achi aegi ." and stretch his arm lazily

Khanak was still on floor shocked, she stand and thought she will pay to

shaan for what he did to her

Khanak in her room fuming in anger

Khanak: how dare he drop me, mein usko nahi chorungi , woh

samajta kya hai apne apko Pura din us chipkali ke sath

chipakta rehta hai

I hate him, mein nahi chorungi useh and after talking to herself

, she smiled and touched her cheeks where shaan kissed and had a flash

back but then suddenly she remember how he let her fall

Khanak: nahi khanak usne tumeh zamin par giraya, tum useh

maat chorna

Shaan in his room felt happy to be close to khanak and wanted her to fall

again on him

Shaan to himself " khanak aaj muhje esa laga keh tum hamesha

giro aur meh tume samalo, aaj needh zarur achi agi " ( smiling

) " chalo dude aabh sojao, kaal se office jana hai ( stretch his

arm lazily ) aur aabh toh khanak se milna hoga aur mein use

baat bhi karsakta hu , aur abh sojata hu aur uske sapne

dekhta hu ." ( take a pillow and hug it tight)

Next day morning as usual khanak woke up early, although she slept

late, She has promised dadi to take her mandhir before she left for office

Shaan too woke up early as it was his first day to work

On breakfast table all were present and khanak was serving them

Shaan: good morning dad, dadi mom bhaiya and every one

( smilling )

Sunil: good morning, so are u ready for office

Khushboo: Kya baat hai shaan, aaj toh bohut kush ho tum kya

baat hai zara hameh bhi toh batao ( danced her eye brows )

Shaan : yeah dad, I m ready for office aur bhabhi!!!!! aaj mein

bohut bohut khush hu khuki its my first day to office ( and

looked at Khanak with grined on his face thinking about the last night

kiss )

Madhvi : Shaan itni bhi ka jaldi hai office join karne ki thora

aram karlo and have fun beta, office tum thore dino baad join

karlena

Shaan : Mom, it's ok i want to go office and help Bhaiya and dad

Shaan in his mind " I am gong office for Khanak only ."

Riya : Wow!! Office, can i join too, I mean jab taak mein yaha

hu

Khanak saw Riya and her face frown

Shaan looked at her surprised and said " tum waha ake kya karogi ."

(irritated)

Sunil : sure Riya u can too join with shaan

Khanak was listening to their conversion and looked at shaan who

smiling naughtily and she thought how to make Shaan pay back for what

he did last night

Shaan was smiling to khanak when ever khanak looked at him

Khanak was very angry looking at him and in her mind " khanak aabh

to tum ise maat chorna, dekho zara kitna smile kar rahahe,

lekin shaan smile karte huwe kitna cute lagta hai...( then she

said again ) " khanak yeh kya soch rahihe, tume ise sabak

sikhana hai bhulgai kya kaal raat kya kiya isne tumare saath "

Khanak again " hai shaan ne muhje kiss kiya "and blushed to

herself but no one notice even shaan then she said " khanak kya soch

rahihe, usne tum mein giradiya woh bhulgai kya ." she heard

Akshay and broke her mind trance

Akshay: I am very happy chotey tum office joined kar raheho

Khushboo: haa tum toh yahi kahonge nah... tumara baas chale

toh tum hum saab koh office join karne koh kahonge

Akshay slowly to himself " tumeh mein kabhi office join karneko

nahi kahunga, chahe rase workers kyu na kaam chorke

chalejai

Khushboo narrowed her eyes and said " kya kaha tum neh Akshay"

Akshay: kuch bhi toh nahi kya kaha mein neh baby...tum bhi

nah

Madhvi shake her head as khushboo started again

Dadi: tum log bhi nah.. acha abh sari bateh choro aur nashta

karo, khanak tum bhi abh chalo behto aur nashta karlo

Khanak sat opposite of shaan, shaan looked at her and winked again

, khanak was shocked and fumed inside in anger

Khanak to herself " khanak soch tum shaan koh kese pay back

karogi" Looked at shaan with fake smile on her face

Madhvi: khanak kya huwa beta tum kuch kyu nahi lerahiho

, chalo nashta karo, shaan woh plate pass karna ( madhvi was

seated beside khanak, she served her break fast )

Shaan looked at her again and saw khanak was looking angrily to him

, but he smiled to her

Riya: wese tum saab koh ek saath breakfast table paar dekh kar

i m so happy

Khushboo: tum log saath mein nahi karte breakfast

Riya became little sad and spoke " nahi saab apne apne kaam meh

busy rehte hai toh no chance to gather like this ."

Khushboo: oh ok!!!!!!!!!! Yeah it's a busy country, khanak woh

jug pass karna please

Sunil: Akshay woh file ready hai nah

Madhvi: sunil!!!!!!!!!!! Kitni baar... ( interrupted by sunil

before she continue )

Sunil: haa Madhvi pata hai...tum kya kahogi, sunil kitni paar

kaha hai office ki bate gar par maat karo

Mahdvi: sunil yeh joke tha...agar that oh bahut bhura tha

All at breakfast table control their laughter

Dadi: aabh tum dono shuru hogae bacho kih tara

Madhvi: dekha apne mummy jee

Sunil laugh and said " acha baba sorry ."

Dadi: pata nahi mere bache kaam sudhrege... aur mein

apne pohtose khehti hu sudhar jao...( smiling)...

Sunil: yeh Jay bhi nahi utha hoga abhi taak, yeh ladka parai

toh karta hai nah

Khushboo: sahi kaha dad apne...khanak neh na useh bahut

bigar diya hai

Khanak: bhabhi mene kya kiya

Akshay: kaal raat ...mein bach gaya

Sunil: matlab...

Khanak: kyu bhaa...kaal raat kya huwa...wese kaal ki game

meh koun jeeta...(drinking juice )

Khushboo: khanak tum yeh sawal shaan se pucho...( grinning )

Shaan:wese bhaiya neh cheating kih thi...isiliye (to

khushboo)

Sunil: areh kounsi game bhai...

Khushboo: dad carom ki game...

Sunil: mere bager tum logo nei carom khela

Mahdvi rolled her eyes seeing his husband acting childish with his

children

Madhvi: sunil...tume khelna ata hai kya...joh tumbhi

khelteh

Sunil: toh phir... mein champion tha mere zamaneme

Madhvi: tumare zamaneme nah...ihs zamane mein nahi

Khushboo: mom, dad kya yaar hum kaal raat ki game kih baat

kar hahethe aur aap dono ho keh pata nahi kaha pohach gaye

Sunil: acha khushboo beta...batao who won

Khushboo: Akshay jeet gaye... ( smiling )

Sunil: isilye itni betabi hai bataneko

Khushboo: dad!!!!!!!!!!!

Khanak heard Akshay won. it means shaan lost the game she felt very

bad and then to herself " yeh toh hona hi tha woh chipkali joh

saath meh thi isiliye hargaya ."

Khushboo: khanak nashata karo...kihs soch mein ho

Khanak: nahi bhabhi... acha bhabhi apki report koun lene

jaega...aaj lene jana hai nah

Madhvi: haa Akshay...reports ka kya huwa

Akshay: woh hum baad mein collect karlenge...

Madhvi: think hai...

They pulled each other leg while having breakfast

After breakfast, dadi asked Khanak to take her mandhir and shaan left for

office

In the office

Sunil welcome shaan and show his cabin

Riya couldn't accomplish shaan coz she heard madhvi is going shopping

so she followed her,

Sunil: welcome shaan, this is your cabin, how is it ?

Shaan: very nice dad it's awesome...( looked around )

Sunil : so shaan i think u should work with Khanak for the

same project it's big and u will get to know many things and

help her too

Shaan was very happy that he is going to work with Khanak, he will get a

time to spend with her.

Sunil saw shaan and ask him " kya soch raheho shaan ."

Shaan: kuch nai dad i m very happy that u trusted me n make

me a part of such a big project

Sunil: toh phir shuru hojao der kiss baat ki

Shaan : yeah dad and thanx

And both father and son hugged

Sunil left shaan in his cabin and told him to ask Khanak about the details

of the project

Shaan went to khanak cabin but she wasn't there, shaan thought

"yeah khanak kahai yaar ." I want to see her and talk to her

After sometime shaan spot khanak and Romit together they were taking

something and seems serious moving to sunil's cabin

Shaan saw this and follow them to sunil's cabin

Sunil : Khanak tume khud jana hoga unlogo se milne

Khanak : ha Ada me bhi yahi soch rahithi i will go with Romit

and sort out the issue

There was some misunderstanding between them and their investors

Shaan came in the cabin, listened to what sunil and khanak said as he

was also a part of that project, sunil told khanak earlier about shaan

joining her

Shaan in his mind " why with Romit, ihse iss Romit ke elava aur

koi nahi dikhta kya ."

He was upset and annoyed

Sunil: nahi khanak u have to go with shaan, Romit ko yaha ka

kaam samalne do

Khanak looked at shaan

Sunil wanted Khanak and shaan to spend some time as he wanted

khanak to remain her daughter forever as his choti bahu, he saw them

not talking even after shaan's come back and decided to give them some

space

Shaan was very happy, he didn't believe, he's gonna spend time with

khanak " jaha koi nahi hoga."

Khanak: thikh hai Ada mein aur shaan chale jaenge

Sunil: tum dono koh abhi thori der meh nikal na hoga

Shaan: thikh hai dad... (Grinning inside ) khanak woh file

tumare pass hai nah

Khanak: ha mere cabin meh hai...mein leke ati hu..( she

left )

Sunil: shaan tum dono apna khayal rakhna ...aur muje

phone karna agar koi problem hui toh

Shaan: yeah dad will call if there is anything serious

Sunil: khanak ka khayal rakhna...( smiled )

Shaan: yes dad...( and left with smiled on his lips )

Sunil to himself " shaan mein chahta hu meri yeh beti hamesha

mere saath rahe...aur uske liye tume kuch karna hoga,

mein useh keh sakta hu aur ho kabhi bhi meri baat nahi

talegi...lekin mein nahi chahta keh woh kihsi dabau mein

ake koi bhi fesla leh, mein ne aur mere dost neh yeh pehle hi

soch liya tha keh uski beti jab bari hongi toh woh meri beti

hojaegi, lekin shayad Bhagwan koh woh manzur nahi tha keh

mera dost yeh saab dekh sake."

( Sunil's eyes became teary then he composed himself when he heard a

knock at the door )

Shaan went to khanak's cabin

Shaan: khanak chalo...pehle hume gar jana hoga hamari

bags lene ..phir wahase chalte hai ...woh file maat bhulna

Khanak: ha mein ne file leli chalo...

They went home, did packing and left

Khanak looked at shaan when leaving at home and in her mind " yeah

acha moka hai to make shaan pay back usne muje giraya

tha." n smile to herself and said " shaan tum dekho ge ke aab

khanak kya karti hai."



Precap : Now shanak are going to Pune to meet investors

Please press the like button and feel free to comment 😊

Will try to update tomorrow if i will finish writing😊

Edited by heer_85 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely
oh wow sunil also want them together thats great so there is no problem
the only problem is riya arghhh she will join office does she know office's work idiot
ok try to update tomorrow waiting for it
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow awesome update heer...
loved it...
Aww am excited for the precap...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Thanx u love it 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: jaisyjazz

lovely

oh wow sunil also want them together thats great so there is no problem
the only problem is riya arghhh she will join office does she know office's work idiot
ok try to update tomorrow waiting for it


thanx Jaisy 😊 yeah sunil wants khanak to be his bahu, from family said they have green light but our burthals are really burthal 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: maneesha28889

Wow awesome update heer...

loved it...
Aww am excited for the precap...



Thanx Maneesha 😊 for loving it, wil try tomoro otherwise wil update on tuesday

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