Casa 12 179 A on 140; Part 179B on 145 - Page 2

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Posted: 14 years ago
#11
Congrats for the 12th thread ... wish u best of luck for many more👍🏼

sorry haven't commented on the last few updates😳

so simple karoon to the updates were awesome as always👏

u r making me luv it even more with each update🤗

update soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#12
congrats on thread 12! loved the update on page 148 on the previous thread, he realized why she was so upset and that was heartbreaking
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Congrats on the new thread!!! 12th one...👏👏👏

Could not gush about the last part in the 11th thread...superb adi, loved it. You tortured Khanak till she could not hold back...totally broke down. It is very difficult, specially since Khanak is sensitive to her situation from before, It must be pure torture. Honestly, I get worried too...If I know someone is supposed to get someplace by sometime and is not there for an hr, its still ok, 2 - 3 hrs delay, with no phone contact is not funny by any means...sigh...

Tough part to read but a good one...He should have answered her calls, and I hate it when the answer is usually that the battery was gone, or forgot to carry the phone, or there was no signal, all valid reasons, but enough to make anybody mad.

Looking forward to next part as usual.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#14
adi is not here yet..will she be coming??r is today her kids swimming classes??
guys,rupa(ray) is this weeks MOTW..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: christmas

yay for thread 12!...

i know the updates are on page 11...lekin it was 150+..so reply here...

loved em!..needless to say.

vulnerability is the hardest thing to show and share. especially for someone like khanak. even if it is to her husband. who has been so open and verbal about their "love". i can only begin to imagine what it must be like for her. not only because of all the things that happened to her within the past two days. but also because she has now had this outburst and he saw it. im glad for her tho. glad for shaan as well. lol it's been one slap/wake up call after another for this poor guy within 24/48 hours.

her convo with ritu was so real. its odd but when they're your true friend. somehow or another they slightly always side the other side and make you see reasons. even though they're youre bff.not saying that they chose sides. but i dont know how to explain it. her line of her husband moving and then calling her was totally hilarious. i know she was mad when she said and it was probably out of hurt. but it was funny and he could soo possibly do that. i really do hope things work out for ritu. and that perhaps in some way shaan comes out as voice of reason and helps. god knows he could use some brownie points right now.

can't wait for the evening update!



Thanks Chris... Loved your POV... You've penned them out beautifully... Shaan badly needs some brownie points...x
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Milega
Sheegra hi milega.
Is raat ki subah nahi!
Actually maine apney friend ke ghar ki chaabi kho di so spent all evening loooking and employing my older one to look!
Husband helped too by saying:
1. Why dont you look where the key is, then you will find it easily
2. Do we have a metal detector? I could find it in two minutes for you
3. Did you accidentally throw out with garbage on Monday?
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Posted: 14 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: Ammu_SunshYn

congratz on the 12th thread!

do FFs go to 12 threads in IF? or is urs the first one? i havent bben on other forums so i dont know !

No idea!
Main apne thread se bahar nahi jaati!
I have no clue about the world Amritha
Thank you for your kind wishes
Not sure if its an IF level milestone or not, it sure is an amazing feat for myself.
Ive had the best 5 months of my "virtual life"
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Posted: 14 years ago
#18
Teri best "virtual" life humari reality hai...😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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PART 169 A

Mangal Kunj

2:14 AM

Teaser!

Khanak: I... I...worried for your life! (just as huge rivers of tears flowed down her eyes, her voice passionate, caring, emotional quivering)

She hides her face in her hands...cries freely...

His face loses all color, he stands there speechless and dumbfounded watches her grieve...graphically for something that happened two years ago, that could have been repeated all over again tonite...

He is afraid to touch her, he feels like a jerk, a total complete jerk.

Takes a step forward, she brings her face up, sees him approach, walks very business like to the bedside table, grabs a wad of tissues, and startes walking out of the room.

He runs and catches up with her, turns her around

Shaan: khanak'''. Come here!

Khanak: I am''.. I am going to go

Her face is swollen, red and moist.

He bends down and just breathes on her face.

Slowly enveloping her in the most secure warm hug

They take steps sideways, back and forth, like a dance but they don't let go of each other.

She cries some more'''

Slowly lets her arms wrap around him still holding the thick wad of tissues.

He smells fresh, clean, strong...

He bends down and breathes into her neck, he is barefeet, she steps on his feet,he slowly lifts her and brings her to his level...Her hair forms a thick curtain around her face, as she bends over his face... he smiles, a glorious, happy smile...

Shaan: Do you plan to cry through all the tissues you are holding? If you are, then its going to be a long nite!😳😳

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Teaser with both pink and blue...😳
maaza aa gaya...Finally raat shuru hui hai...
I hope they talk about Ritu too...I really want to know Shaan's reaction...kys hoga, like Chris says, maybe he will surprise us and find a solution or suggest something sensible or find a way to break their ice...

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