agar iss monday RBO ate toh...(OS)

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Posted: 14 years ago
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baas soch rahi thi agar iss monday ko RBO ati toh kaise hote..mean kiya hote??...hmm shayed asee

kh: kiya hua shantanu...

sh:yaha aaooo

kh : sshhsshh...shantanu bachhe so rahi hain..jag jayengey...

sh: nahi yaar wo so gaye..tum yaha aao

...kh : nahi..

sh : nahi aooge..hmm.mein dekh rahi hoon..bachhe ke ane ke baad tum mujhe bhao nahi deti..

kh:kiyaa shantanu..bachho jaise baat kar rahe ho

sh : dekha aab tum mujhe hi bachha kehne lage..suno mein do bachho ki baap hoon..so dn call me bachha..(thodi si naraj)

kh: soory meri burthal...(goes near to him)

sh:(just hold her hand n one jhatka n khanak in his lap)...aab kaha jaogi meri bachho ki maa...(naughty expression in romantic mood)

kh: kiya kar rahe hai shantanu..choriye naa..bachhe jag jayenge..dekhenge tohh..

sh:tohh...kiya...unne bhi pata chaley unke papa kitne romantic hai...(wink)...

kh :blushhh...blushh...

Uaan uaan..one baby starts crying:-Pn shanak k romance mei lag jata hai..:-P

sh: ye bachhe bhi naa

kh : choreye naa..mujhe jane dejiye..

sh: nahi...

kh:..hmmm...kh baghke bchhe ke pass jate hai

sh: pehle toh puri dunyia hamari romance ke bitch ate the..aab toh meri apne bachhee...

kh:aap bhi naa shantanu...(smiling n bachhe on her lap)...

shaan with gussa..or moo phulake bethe hai...or waha bechari khanak..apni bachhi ko lekar busy hai..

shaan ws starring his daughter..as she ws sleeping n son ws troubling as he is as naughty as his father...

kh : chup ho ja..chup ho jaa.mer...i raja..meri shonaa...shantanu aap moo phulaye kyun bethe hai..yaha aye naa..meri madat kijiye na..isse sulane

sh : nahi..mein nahi aonga...aab smhalo apne raja ko apni godh mein..

kh: shantanu...(giving killing expression)...agar aap nahi aye naa toh..

sh: toh..toh kiya..??...

kh: mein apko...oo.naa beta..rotey nahi...mein..**

sh:mein apko kiya...oo hello mein shantanu khandelwal ho...mein kisi se nahi darti..

kh: aapko mein raat bhar sone nahi dongi...

sh: kiya!!...aise bhi sona kaun chte hai...(naughty expression)

kh:shantanuuu...apko majak sujh rahi hai...dekha beta apke papa kitni bad hai...mummy ki baat bilkul nahi sunti..

sh: nahi beta..mummy ki baat bilkul bhi maat sun..ye mujhe suna suna ke paka deta ho...tu meri hi baat suniegi...after ur papa is champ..

kh: jayee...mein apse baat nahi karti..bolo papa se katti...

sh:..mujhse katti...(shan comin near to kh)do mujhe...

(bachha sh ki godh mein jate hi chup ho jati hi...)

dekha..asie samhalte hai...bachhe...(sh ws feelin proud)

kh:hmm..toh pehle nahi aa sakte the...

sh:..aise mein srif bachho ko hi nahi bachho ki maa ko bhi achhe tarah se samhal sakta hoon...

kh:haan..haan..pata hai...(smiling )

sh: kyun yakin nahi hota??..dekhao kiya??..(naughty smile)

n kh just blushing...

thn sh apni bete ko sula dete hai...wo jaab use waha rakhte hai...bachhe ki chero ko dekhne lagte ho...phir bachhe ki pass jakar dono bachho ki mathe pe kiss karte hain...

kh baap or bachhe ki iss pyaar bhari scene dekhe ankhon mein asoon aj...ate hai...

sh: (move to kh)thank you kh..for giving me such wonderful gift..tum jante nahi ho..tumne mujhe wo khushi di hai..(sh"s eye becme watery n he kisses kh forhead too..n hug her tightly)...jiska mujhe shyed jindegi bhar talsh th

kh:shukriya ada toh mujhe apki karni chahiye.jo apne mujhe apki duniya mein shamil kiya...yeh ghar..parivaar...sab kuch diya...meri jindegi mein khushi ki har rang bhar di...

shanak both sys togethr mein tumhari/apke bina zee nahi sakti..thn

sh: love u soo much khanak

kh:love u tooo...

n epi khatam...:)

hey...m nt ever write nythin before...plz if u found nythin wrong abt this writing m saying sorry before...

Edited by mahi_soniyo - 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awesome..cute family..title me os aisa likho
Yasharanrocks thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesmeee.Yasharan ko phir kab dekhne ka mauka milega???????and no1 is signing petition😭
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Posted: 14 years ago
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mahi this is just awesome
loved it shanak with babies ha ha h shaan trying to romance
the scene is cutest 😊thank u so much for writing this :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
#5
Awesome Mahi lovely epi ❤️
Thank u very much 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Shreyaa,sweetshona,yashranrocks,krithika,saranyacharu...though it is nt tht much gud..bt u guys liked it...i m thankful...:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Mahi ...this was ur first attempt?! it was really good!
@varsha di - Im signing the petition !
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Posted: 14 years ago
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loved it mahi. Awesome. Too good. Keep writing more.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Supperb Mahi..Loves the whole Os..its awesome
Keep it up and give us many More👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
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omg this is awesome.
i loved it. i was imagining the shanak/yasharan the whole time i was reading it...uff wish i could see it in real. 😔

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