Bulandiyaan-Flight Beyond Skies l Prt 49 A Pg. 146 - Page 14

hei imane,
poor khanak..
everyone on one side n our dear khanak is all alone on the other side..
but i'm loving this hide n seek too..

poor Khanak.. but this game is good...

Part 9C

Liked the way Shaan revealed to her that he was very much there...they way she shied away was awesome ... went straight to her mom, "meray paas" .. Haaye!

I so wanna know how Shaan will pay for that prank now.

~Cheers,
Dish

hei imane,
looking forward for her play..
wonderfully written the flash back n the present..
do continue soon..

loving the multiple updates!..thanks

the writing...the dialogues...its all such a prose..very beautifully written...

can't wait see her reaction once it has all been absorbed. its cute that she calls him captain:)

Hey!!!!!
awesome part A and B...

Hey Imane,

Thanks a ton for the back to back two updates...loved the updates...u discribed it beautifully.👏 ⭐️ 👏 ⭐️ 👏 ⭐️

Khanak & her family reached chandigrah. & welcomed by the family. Bechari khanak thinks that she misses him so much that's why she is imagining him. Loved Shaan;s little game or troubling Khanak, Biji is a great actor. Kitchan scence was best. Poor girl is preparing salad & Captainji is busy troubling poor girl 😉

Loved the next part, you reviled the secret infrount of khanak. Khanak finally goes to take private tour of his room. Shaan himself tells her that its him actually & not her imagination. Loved the flashback. Khanak goes to her Mom & tells her that "Maa.. Shaantanu yahi hain…meray pass…" loved her lines beautiful.

I am super exicted for the next part Waiting for Shaan to pay back for his little game with khanak………I want khanak to show some attitude atleast for a little while coz I also know dono ek dusare ke bina nahi rahe sakte. Loved both the parts …….sorry for the rushed reply as in hurry.

Waiting for the next part……jaldi jaldi. 🤗 🤗 🤗

Love

Pranjal.

waiting for Captain's pay back..